SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Whoa! Quite a turning point huh? Like Marauder said, I like what happened after the kiss more. The conversation was appealing. And good job on portraying the pain that both Sharon and Swayam are going through.

And thanks for the um dedication even though we hardly know each other.😳 Just for future references I'm Nidhi. 😃

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
Whoa! Quite a turning point huh? Like Marauder said, I like what happened after the kiss more. The conversation was appealing. And good job on portraying the pain that both Sharon and Swayam are going through.

And thanks for the um dedication even though we hardly know each other.😳 Just for future references I'm Nidhi. 😃

Hey nidhi... thanx for commenting ..i really liked ur OS marathon ..they are awesome... u r one my fav writers on IF ..thats the reason behind the dedication...

sorry i checked ur profile for ur real name...couldn't find it ...

Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago

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reet_26

@reet_26

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Amazing update and thanks for pm

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mili1987

@mili1987

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Firstly thanks for the pm...😊

Wow another amazing update👏👏...i wish it had been a bit longer...anyways

looking forward eagerly for the next update...

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swaronehad3

@swaronehad3

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

loved d upd8 👏

i jus kissed d love of my life...1st kiss...wts rong if m blushn... wts ur prblm??? i mean sharon vl b sharon 😃

nways thnx 4 d pm

keep writng 👍🏼

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Sameera Dhanraj

@coolsameera

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

AWSUME UPDATE.. . .SWARON KISS😳O.M.G JST PERFECT . . THANX FR PM UPDATE SOON

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Awesome..the update was just so awesome!!haha!!Sharon and Swayam talking about maintaining distance from one another was my favourite part!!and their first kiss was as passionate and intense as they both are...totally loved the update!

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

First of all, thank you for dedicating this update to me !! That was a really sweet gesture !!

GO Sharon !! I'm so happy that she just ran after him and kissed him out of the blue !! Poor Swayam was so taken aback but he couldn't stop himself from kissing her back !! And the whole convo that followed after that was super adorable !! Loved the whole update and can't wait for the next one !!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Deep it was an awesome update mahn!! 👍🏼
sharon losing her patience..aahhh..i lyk itt!! 😉
i like her this wild way!! 😳
and then swayam...poor baby..blush kare ki gussa kare!! 😆
lol..this was amazingg! 😃
waiting for the next! 😊
update soon! 😊