SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

res

unres!!

amazing... superb!!! update soon plz😉

Edited by Nehal92 - 12 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

This one was just adorable. Well there may be a kiss sequence in this update but surprisingly what followed after the kiss was my favourite. The conversation was just amusing. Swayam and Sharon both were just awesome during it. Sharon's in your face reply to Swayam's question was just hillarious and so was Swayam's bewilderment. And I freaking loved how you wrote down the effect of Sharon's smile, blush and her amusing replies on Swayam. Bechara chah ke bhi gussa nahi ho pa raha hai. Just marvellously written.

Waiting eagerly for the next update with hope that this amusement is here to stay.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Touchwood that Sharon put an end to the denial game that both of them had engaged in...first her and then him...saw that kiss coming and it was very much understandable in that situation as she had to release all her pent up emotions and at the same time, make sure that he does not leave without knowing her true dil ka haal ... the convo that followed was once again awsum in effect...Swayam was pleasantly surprised and confused as well with all the bonuses he was receiving together, first teh kiss and then most importantly confession from the Diva herself that he was THE love of her life...well it cant get better than this and hope it remains pleasant too 😊

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Dips as usual one of the best updates ever. Yaar this is what we want to see in D3, sharon telling swayam not to keep his distance. Awww their first kiss and sharon took the initiative, well that is a good nahi tho majnu apni diva ko space deke kabi be nahi karenge. Splendid and thanks so much. Plz I hope this is not the last update, plz update fast.

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Deeps another superb update from your side.

Loved the kiss sequence and Swayam's confused reaction to it was beautifully put but the most amusing part was Sharon's reply which am sure gave enough reasons to Swayam for a celebration. Looking forward to the next update.

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muskan

@LoveShantannu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Amazing
It was a commendable piece of writting

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

hey you story is just amazing...i am following this one silently and read all the parts and i wanna say that you really are fab writter and your vision is really good...the way you have taken forward the swaron story from the swaron convo at canteen party is just brillient...

and the way you have narrated the emotions of both swayam and sharon is just the perfect...and i wanna say that you really have made a love story that is really believable and magical...

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

i'm speechless hope iss typ ka pira nai bt thoda hi sahi real epi me bhi aye..
u hv created all d part so nicely sharn's passoin gussa love❤️ & intensoty jisse wo darti thi & swaym's confusn 😕 so loved d update
keep writting such a beautiful update & plz don't forget to PM me..😃

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Deep this was a amusing update...

loved the effect that took over sharon, which followed with a kiss surprising swayam and us😛

it was nice to read the convo which followed...

bechara swayam kare bhi toh kya😆 lovely dialogues for both..

sharons direct straight answers to swayam and swayam's shock with confusion was amusing to read...

hoping things will turn between them and they will get together leaving behind the denial...update soon..

thanks for the pm...

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Trushna

@swaronland

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

fantastic update👏 loved that how u showed that fear of loosing swayam makes sharon aware of intensity of her love for swayam❤️ & her reaction for that totally surprising😳

she kissed him forcefully ☺️ afterwards effect & their conversation was just superb😆

update soon & thanks for pm