SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13 - Page 9

very happy na giving us such small chapters...u need to have a good explanation for dis Deep...😉

Originally posted by: d_3rockskaren

very happy na giving us such small chapters...u need to have a good explanation for dis Deep...😉

ABOUT THE CHAPTER;

IN ONE WORD''FREAKIN SWARON''

BEING A SWARONIAN I LOVE TO SEE THEM CLOSE...!!!!!!😉

amazing part 😊

POOR Swayam !!! I can understand how confused this boy might be now along with blushing and happy... Sharon is surely drive him to an ayslum...

U R JUST GREAT AND AWSM...DUNIYA KI SARI TARIF KAM PADJAYEGI...:)

Originally posted by: tejukor

Hi...meri jaan...😉let me praise u first...very very very...nice update 👏👏,i just loved it...😃love u for this...but its too short ha...😡 😡next time i want little bit bada wala update plz...

wow i loved the kiss wala part n u penned down it very well...i mean that "convo" after that sweet kisss...Awww...that was so so... so... cute.

plz...update its next part...

helllooo swthrt ...aap toh gayab hi ho gyi thi ...hehe ...chalo aapke liye long long update dete he 😛... next update in next 15 mins 😊 ...hope u ll like it ...

Hey guys...This is the 5th & last part of this SS...hope you all like it ...and thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging ...😊😊😊

Recap:

Swa: why are u blushing ? (acting to be angry )

Sha: I just kissed the love of my life ...my 1^st kiss...wats wrong if I am blushing...wats ur problem?

Love of my life ...did she just ...said that ...god ... This girl is driving me crazy ... 1^st she told me that I don't deserve her ..now she is declaring her love for me ...he thought

Part-5

Why she is so confused...about her feelings towards me ...one day she wants me to go away from her ...next day she calls me the love of her life ...Luv of her life ...what is she thinking? ...Is it some kind of joke destiny is playing with me ...but the kiss ...it was real...her feelings ...her reaction ...her passion ...they were so real...the moment was perfect ...Is it even possible for me and her to be US again ...Arrghhh...I need to get a conclusion for all this ...I need to tie all these loose ends of this relationship ...m fed up with the ends hanging loose ...emotions hidden from each other ... i have always told her about my feelings ...how deeply i feel for her ...how dearly i love her... but she has never expressed about her feelings ...she has kept her feelings secret even from me ...OK...she wants talk to me...I will listen to her ...lets see what destiny has planned for us ...I will do what she wants from me ...after all her wish is my command ...

He decided to listen to her ...

Swa: what do u want Sharon??( pretending to be extremely serious)

Sha:I told u ...I want to talk to u ... just hear me out ...

Swa: ohk ...tell me .. m listening ...(closes his eyes ... in anticipation of getting his love & ... fear of loosing her forever)

Sha:I am extremely sorry for my behavior that day ... I didn't mean even a single word of it ... I was angry ...frustrated ...I was angry on u because u were not there when I needed u ...may be u defended me in front of ur team later ... But wanted u to defend me there ... I know ...I was wrong ...I was wrong to be mad at u for long ... I was wrong to hurt the person who loved me so dearly ...trust me Swayam ...I didn't want to break ur heart ...because my heart also broke with urs ...(she started crying by that time...tears rolled down on her cheeks)

Swa:Sharon...

Shar: please let me complete Swayam ...m not done yet ...

I am from a broken family Swayam...my parents believed in giving financial support to their child than emotional support...they love me ...I am not telling they don't ...but nobody expressed their love for me the way u did ...I was staying in a shield made by me ...nobody was allowed to see the real Sharon...all of them saw just a pretension ...Sharon ...the diva ...the b***h...who used to insult people ...who never cared for others emotions...then u happened to me ...u broke that shield and read me like an open book ... i never got so much love and care from anyone before ...I started expecting too much from u ...ur next to perfect behavior made me think that u can do nothing wrong ... So when u didn't support me ...when I wanted u to ...I over reacted ...I forgot that u are also a nineteen year old guy ... trying to behave maturely in his 1^st relationship...m sorry for saying those harsh words to u ... Its not u who don't deserve me ... its me ...I am the one who don't deserve u ...this is why I always pushed u away from me ...u r too good for me ...(she was in pain ...she was choking due to crying )

He was looking at her ...for the 1^st time in these 1.5 years ...she was expressing herself so openly ...she was not the diva ..the world knew ...she was his SHARON...his simple ,sweet and innocent Sharon ...who feels the pain herself after hurting him ... he was waiting for her to complete ...he knew ...there are lots of things she wanted say ...

She continued ...

I am sorry ...I hurt u ...for my harsh words... I regret every word I said that day ... I cant tell u ...how I felt when I got to know about ur accident ... I felt like my world ended then and there ...I didn't know...wat to do ...if something happens to u ..where to go ...I could not imagine my life without u ... I just can't even think of a day without u ...let alone life ...

I wanted to talk to u ...the moment u opened ur eyes ...but u ignored me ... Swayam ... if u want to punish me ...punish me ... don't let your absence punish me... Trust me ...i have not slept properly for last 10 days... because u are angry on me ... I am getting dark circles ...my skin is looking pale ...but I don't care ...because u are not even looking at me ...for whom I will look good ...

U know ...i write diary everyday ... from the day I noticed u 1^st time...since the footloose audition ...I have written something about u everyday in my diary ...about RDX sir's party ...when u didn't take advantage of me ...Though I surrendered myself completely ... I fell for u ...then n there ...just that I was not having courage to voice my feelings...When u sent me those gifts as my secret admirer ... I used to feel special ... When I got to know that u r my secret admirer I was happy for a moment ..but next moment I thought ...u also considered me as a materialistic person just like the rest of the world ... I was hurt ...I had expectations from u ...since then ... that u understand me ...more then anyone ... u went into that ignorance mode ... I missed u ...I tried to grab ur attention...I came to u with those gifts...I wanted u to know they are priceless for me ...that's why I have kept them...but u burnt them in front of me ...a part of me burnt with those gifts...I managed to save rest of them...they are my prized possession... to make u jealous I used shivam ...but I ended up hurting u and myself in that ... U know ...I hurt myself ...to punish myself ...because I was the reason for ur pain ...i betrayed ur love ... When u fight the world for me ...I feel I am secure ...to be around u ...after the charity event I came to ur house ...because I was scared of loosing u ...loosing ur love ...that's all I have ...YOUR LOVE ... in last 7 days all I have written in my diary is ur name ... countless times ... Because nothing else matter for me apart from u ...

I am insecure , confused, arrogant , hyper ,impulsive ... I don't know how to control my feelings when it come to u ...I loose control in front of u ...my body ,mind ,heart everything refuse to listen to me when u r around ...u never loose control ...u are always ur perfect self...balanced ..always doing the right thing ...while trying to control myself in front of u ...I end up doing something stupid ...which hurts u ...

Just like that day ...I told u to go away ... u went ...WHY SWAYAM ...why u always do wat I want u to do ... when two people are in a relationship... they both wish things ... expect things from their partner ...don't u want anything from me ' why u fulfill my wish even when they are wrong ...why u never question back...don't u wish anything ...don't u want anything from this relationship...

I told u to leave ...and u left ...why didn't u fight back ...WHY ALWAYS MY WISH IS YOUR COMMAND ...DON'T YOU HAVE ANY WISH ... (she was crying uncontrollably ...shouting at him ...at herself)

I can't loose you Sawyam...I can't even think of loosing you ...I don't value these things ... image ,popularity ,money ...all those materialistic things ...YOUR LOVE is all i have ...my prized possession... if you will take it away from me ... i will be incomplete ...without u and your love ...

Please don't hate me Swayam...i wont be able to bear that pain ... i hope you still love me ...i hope ...(started sobbing uncontrollably ... fell on her knees ...hiding her face with her hands)

He looked at her ...she was looking different from her usual self... she was just an simple,confused,insecure girl madly in love with him ... who wants to be with him ...who wants him to protect her from the world ...and he will do it ...till his last breath ...he promised to himself...

He went near her ...cupped her face ... Looked in to her eyes with all the love in this world ...

I love you Sharon...I really do...I can't stop loving you even if I want to ...its not that i didn't try ...i tried ...not to love you ... but bloodyhell hota hi nehi ...my heart always takes your side ...

He took her into embrace ... moving his hand on her back ...caressing her ...To make her stop crying ...she was still sobbing slowly ...she looked into his eyes ... she could see her image in those deep dark brown orbs ... he was looking at her with all his love and affection ...as if his eyes wanted to convey her that he still loves her ...just like before ...he still loves her like his princess...

Sha:I m sorry swayam...I insulted your love ...I don't deserve your love ...i don't deserve you ...

Swa:shhh...(he put his finger on her lips)

Swa: U know wat ...

Sha: hmm ...(still crying)

Swa:tum bahut bolti ho ...u talk too much... he smiled

Next moment he kept his lips on hers ... kissed her with all his love and affection'it was not aggressive ...it was tender ...as if she is the most fragile thing on earth... as if she was made of glass ...she will break if he wont handle her carefully ...he took her in his arms and lifted her slightly ...she went on her toes to come to his level ... the kiss went on to be passionate ... she was softly pulling his hair while running her hands in them ...he was holding her waist ... They didn't want to break apart even after they started panting ...finally he pulled out and took her in his arms...her eyes...her forehead...he kissed her jaw line ....her neck .....then he started kissing her bare shoulder...he just wanted to express all his love and care for her ...after sometime he held her protectively in his arms ... she kept her head on his chest ... Listening to his heart beats...which chanted her name ...

They stood like that ...in each others embrace ...they didn't know how much time passed ...they were craving for this intimacy since long time ...finally when they were so close to each other ...they didn't want the moment to get over...

Sorry if I crossed the line ...he murmured after sometime

Sorry if I hurt u ...

I loose control when u come close to me ... that's why I try to keep distance as I don't want to hurt u ... he said ...

U talk too much ...he heard her saying

Can u just shut up n kiss me again ... all these days I spent without u ...I need u to compensate for that ... ur punishment ...she said ...

Punishment ...Are u mad...Its my dream come true ...he chuckled

Your wish is my command ... he said

He smiled and put his lips on hers again ...to kiss her till the end of the world ...they were lost in their dream world of LOVE where nothing else existed ...

...JUST THE TWO OF THEM ...

A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.

Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.

❤️❤️❤️

So this is the last part ...

hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment.. i will wait for your comments and feedback

Originally posted by: marauder

Now you deserve a standing ovation for this part. Seriously Sharon's confession was one of the best I ever read in any FF, SS or OS so far. It was just epic. You have bared her soul through her speech. What you have made Sharon voice in this update is one of the most finest assesment of her character, but lately D3 creartive team had messed up their own creation and is not able to show it correctly. I would just say wonderfully written.

Swayam's condition was also awesomely penned. Right from begining where he is a bit confused and still cautious to one who is just over whelmed to see the love for him in Sharon's heart. It was wonderfully done. And the final kiss was like somewhat like a symbol of new begining for both of them. Simply loved the way with which you went through this update.

Finally this SS may have come to end but it will remain one of the most perfectly penned down work on this forum. A slight twist from the original plot of the show and you have created magic with it. Really masterfully done. Waiting for the next work of yours.

thanx a lot ...for such lovely analysis of my update... i wrote this whole SS from sharon's point of view as she is my fav character in the show ...swayam is a sweetheart ... i wanted to show his POV as well ... m glad u liked this part ... i was not sure ...if people will like it as it became too long with so many intense moments ...thanx for the lovely words of appreciation ...i love reading ur comments ...they are awesome ...its more like film critics giving movie review 😊