SwaRon SS :'Your wish..my command' last part-pg 13

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

I loved this update too..Sharon really wants Swayam back..it is so evident!but Swayam is hurt..he is in no mood to get back..I am really enjoying reading this ss..it makes SwaRon appear realistic and human..looking forward to the next update!

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Rashmi

@mrash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

This is awesome...

Plz dnt try our pations n update next part soon.

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Read part 2 and 3 back to back...

awesome updates...

the way she wanted to be with him and she fell asleep with his hand in her's was lovely...

my goodness she was dreaming??? i was saved from the torture as i read the next part 😛

nice to see rinni's concern too😊

Sharon saying please and bharat's reaction was amazing😆 n loved the way she shot back too...

Poor Swayam is so confused and hurt...

Loved the dialogue where sharon says "i want you"

but it was surprising to see swayam react so cold, though i understand his state too...

would love to see how this shapes up...

thanks for the pm...

PS:Sorry for being late to read the 2 part deep..

PPS: Thanks for the dedication...😃

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Res! :))
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First of all deep..thank you for the dedication! 😃
thanx a lot! 😳

Coming to the update..it was awesome! 👏
I really liked the way you have presented sharon in your SS! and especially her pain and love for swayam! 😳
I want this type of sharon in D3..sooner or later!
This sharon represents many phases..intensity..love..longing..everything!
And i like the main thing..that sharon here doesn't bother and give a damn to the world when it comes to swayam!! 😎
Sharon and bharat scene was really nyc! 👍🏼
And precap...umm..i guess we have sum romance coming up!! 😉

Waiting for the next update eagerly! 😊

Edited by surbhimathur - 13 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Loved the realistic touch you have given to this SS. I mean Sharon not caring about her appearance and her state both physical and emotion was just wonderfully written. And it really showed how much she cares for Swayam and how much desperately she wants him back. On the other hand Swayam apprehension can be understood easily. He is human after all and it would really hurt to have his heart ripped like that again and again. The conversation in the rehersal hall was just awesome. I just wished wo thodi der ke liye aur hota. And yeah even though Bharat has a single dialogue but still you nailed it.

Anyway nicely done and looking forward to the next update.

P.S - Thanks for the dedication.

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Deep's i am really sorry for not commenting on the first two updates.

Busy and also not doing that great health wise. Though i am ok now and thank you so much for the Dedication .😳

I can't tell you how happy i felt reading those dialogues in the first update they took me to past were SwaRon were so beautiful, intense and passionate. The constant pain Sharon caused Swayam by pushing him away each time and he leaving was painful. The accident a twist, nicely done.

I could just feel the pain Sharon felt, she hurt him unintentionally and the thought of not able to see him again would sure have crushed her. The state of mind when Sharon met Swayam in the hospital was nicely shown. The third update when she finally went to her Swayam, i see he is pushing her away, thinking thats best for her and to him. I know even he is human and it is not easy to forget what they went through together. I hope he gives her a chance and they settle out everything. I loved the SS and its nicely written 👍🏼 Looking forward to the next update.

Sorry again and Thanks for the dedication 😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

That was a good update !! I can't believe Sharon was actually pleading with Swayam, that too without a care in the world about whose around them or not !! I hope Sharon does something drastic to show that she loves him in the next update !! Do update soon as this update was a little short !!

Edited by ABBY92 - 13 years ago