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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice ff dear love itthanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maaneet ff- Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu...






part 5

In Handa house

Rano: tum dono abhi tk ready kyun nhi huyi

madhu: mom wo isse dress smjh nhi aa rhi hai

kya phnu

Geet make baby face...

geet: maa aap hi btaiye na

Rano: jhali hai puri

She select pink suit for her...

Geet: wow mom, this is so beautiful...

She kissed on her cheek and goes to washroom for changing.

In this time phone rings...

Rano: beta zara phone dekhna

madhu: ji

She picked the phone and said "hello"

Annie: hey madhu

madhu: annie tum

Hey, kaise phone kiya

Annie: ye pucnhe ke liye

tum sb wha se kb nikal rhe ho

madhu: mom, anhi kitna waqt lagenga

wo sb hamara wait kr rhe hai..

rano: mujhe de..

rano: bete bs hum one hour mein puch jayunge

jara savitriji se baat krwana

annie: ji

rano: namestey maaji

savitri: namestay bete

rano: ji wo maan bete ke liye ring leni thi

to wo size lena tha unki finger ka

savitri: wo khud hamare sath aa rhe hai

to whi le lena

rano: ye to bhut achi baat hai

savitri: acha hum phone rakhte hai

rano: ji

madhu: maa wo kya kh rhe the

rano: kuch nhi bs yhi

maan bhi hamare sath aa rhe hai

Geet came from outside...she look so beautiful in this pink dress.

(Geet Dress)


Rano: nazar na lage kissi ki

She kissed on her forehead.

Madhu (think) : maan bhi aa rha hai

madhu: maa, mujhe kuch khna tha

Rano: bol

madhu: maa, mujhe rishu ke ghar jana honga

Rano: Kyun

Madhu: Maa , wo usse raat ko bhut high Fever tha

aur wo ghar mein bhi akela hai

Rano: kyun Mrs. Kundra kha gyi

Madhu: mom wo uske parents out of station hai

Rano: ye to mujhe ab bta rhi hai

madhu tu bhi hd karti hai

wo sb akele kaise manage karenga

Ab ja...

Madhu: sorry mom

Rano: hmm

Madhu: sorry geetu

mein tere sath nhi aa payungi...

Geet: koi baat nhi

maa hai na mere sath

she pulled her cheek and said "so sweet"

Geet: you too

Madhu: muaahhh

Rano: tum dono ka ho gya

ho

to hum chale...

Madhu : hmm

Maan Monologue

kaise khunga mein usse sach

kya wo smjh payengi...

wo kitni khush hongi...

aur mein usse ek hi pal mein saari khushiya ...

usse chin lunga...

nhi...

asa nhi kar sakta mein...

pr...

sch janana uska hq hai...

khi wo janti ho to...

fir bhi mujhe usse khna to honga...

meri zindagi mein usse phle koi tha

ye usse pta hona chahiye

taki wo mujhe smjh sake

hamare judne wale rishte ko smjh sake

aur mujhse jyada umeed na rakhe...

sch janane ke baad uska hi fasla honga...wo ye shaadi krna chahti hai ya nhi

uska jbab jo bhi ho

mein uska sath dunga

khi "NA" kh diya to...

Daadimaa...

nhi...Daadimaa smjh jayengi...

mein unhe smjha dunga

Precap: 1) Madhu : tu yha mere ghar ep kyun aaya

ydi mom ne dekh liya to



2)

Jub Kuch Sapne Adhure
Reh Jate Hain,
Tab Dil Ke Dard Ansu
Ban Ke Beh Jate Hain,
Jo Kehte Ki Hum Sirf
Aap Ke Hain,
Pata nahi Kaise Alvida

Keh Jate Hain..


see below...


previous part on page 35

next part on page 49

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks friends for liking and doing beautiful comments...

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previous update was too short... sorry for this... i hope today update compensate this...
please hit like button and do comment...

i give your all comment response on page 40 and 41... sorry... if anyone post i am not posted...sorry for this... i give your this answers in another members post...

mostly all want long update...
and happy maan move on life...

thanks all of you...again...

my english is not very good... so please cooperate with me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya hoga aage
kya madhu ka jhoot pakda jayega
kyaa maan aur geet ka rishta badh payega
man is it just me or i seem to be having even more questions than ever before right
so she is trying to avoid maan huh but why
she is confusing me for sure
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...😊 Waiting for next part.
Edited by CutieTeju - 12 years ago
shalinisaran89 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome upd...
dis iz smthg diff...
seems interesting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is really good
geet is getting ready for shopping she is looking nice and glad to know that mann is also coming with them
but why madhu is avoiding them
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome up plz jaldi se maan geet ki shadi karwado taki present track start ho jaaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
chavvi16

kya hoga aage
kya madhu ka jhoot pakda jayega
kyaa maan aur geet ka rishta badh payega
man is it just me or i seem to be having even more questions than ever before right
so she is trying to avoid maan huh but why
she is confusing me for sure
cheers for pm

aage kya honga...usse janane ke liye pdte rhna honga ye ff...
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan ko sach abhi bata dena chahiye geet ko agar shadi ke baad pata chalega to pata nhi kya hoga geet ka...

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