Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu...- Maaneet Ff - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update dear nd plzz maan n madhu ka jo bhi ho thora or batao thora confusion h mujhe nd waiting for next kaese maan geet ko sab battae ga na madhu gng to risabh home
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmmm confusion confusion more confusion...ye dono kar kya rahi hai...????????
Anyways its awsomeee update jaanu waiting for next :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. Waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 12 years ago





Part 6

In Handa House

She opened the door and looks him shockingly.

Madhu : you

He: ya, me

Why you are standing here, please side.

Madhu:

He placed own hand on her shoulder and said "tu thik to hai na"

Madhu: hmm

Tu jha yha se, rishu

Rishu : Par kyun

Madhu: kyunki mein kh rhi hu, to jha

(Because, I am Saying, so goo'..)

Her mother came and said "bte tum yha, ab tumahri tabiyat kaisi hai"?

(Now, how are you feeling?)

Rishu : meri tabiyat

Madhu: mom mein aur rishu bs doctor ke pass hi ja rhe the

(Mom, I and rishu go to doctor.)

Kyun Rishu

Rishu: teri tabiyat thik nhi hai,

Aur tune mujhe btaya bhi nhi

(You not feeling well and you not said to me.)

Madhu: dekha mom apne

Iski kitni tabiyat khrab ho gyi hai

(You see mom, his health go low more.)

Rano: ha maine dekh liya tum dono ko

(Yes, I watch both of you.)

Chlo ab tum dono mujhse sch sch btayo , ye sb kya chl rha hai

(Now, both of you tell me truth, what's going on?)

Madhu : kuch nhi mom

(Nothing Mom)

Rano: tujhe kya lagta hai mujhe smjh nhi aa rha hai

(What you think, I do not understand.)

Geet: kya hua maa

(What happen Maa)

Rano: puch apne behen se

(Ask from you sister.)

Madhu: kuch nhi geetu, wo mujhe kuch kaam tha, aur maine jhoot kh diya

Rishu bimar hai

(Nothing geetu, I have some work, so I tell lied to both of you, Rishu is ill.)

Rishu: what?

She make baby crying face and said "sorry".

Geet cupped her face and say "bs itni si baat"

You both may go' I have no problem.

Rano: geet , ye hamesha asa hi krti hai, aaj tujhe iske sath ki jaroorat hongi.

Aur ye

Fir se

(geet, today you have need of her support and she always does like this.)

(And she,)

Geet: maa, madhu ko kuch jaruri kaam honga

Kyun madhu

(Maa, she has important work.)

Rano: madhu

Geet : mom please

Rano nodded.

Madhu came near to geet and kissed her cheek and said "Thank you geetu, you are best."

Madhu: chl rishu

Madhu and rishu go outside.

Geet: maa ab hum chle

(Maa, now we go.)

IN NOIDA CITY CENTRE MALL

Annie: daadimaa, hum khi late to nhi ho gye

(Daadimaa, we are late or not.)

Daadi: no Annie,

Wo bhi abhi nhi aaye hai

Annie: mujhe bhabhi se milna hai

(I want to meet bhabhi)

Daadi: rano aa gyi

Rano: namastey maaji

Annie: auntyji bhabhi kha hai

Wo nhi aayi kya

Btaiye na

(Aunty where are bhabhi.

She not comes.

Tell me')

Daadi: aap unhe kuch bolne dengi, to wo kuch khengi na

(If you stop, then she tells.)

Annie: sorry Aunty

Rano: it's ok beta, I understand your excitement towards geet.

Wo bs aa rhi hai'

Annie: ok

Rano: maan bte nhi aaye kya

Annie: aaye hai, wo bhai Car park kr rhe the

To hum tb tk andher aa gye

(bhai came, but he do car park, so we came inside.)

Daadi: chaliye , tb tk hum hi kuch dekh lete hai

Rano: ji


Rishu: ab tum mujhe btayo, tumne apne hi family se jhoot kyun kaha

(Now, madhu tell me, why you say lied to own family.)

Mein bimar hu.

("I am ill".)

Tumhara jhoot jb pkda gya, to tumne ek aur jhoot kh diya.

(Your lie caught, you again say one more lie.)

Tumne ek aur kahani bna di.

(You make one more story.)

Tell me madhu, why?

Madhu: kyunki mujhe shopping pe nhi jana tha , un sbke sath

(Because, I not wanted go on shopping with family.)

He held her shoulders and said "tumhe kiske sath shopping pen hi jana tha madhu"

She tries to free out from his grip but he held her more tightly.

Madhu: abhi to btaya, apni family ke sath

(I tell you before, with my family.)

Rishu : Tell me truth dammed.

Madhu: kaunsa sch

(Which truth)

Rishu: jo tum mujhse chupa rhi ho

(You are hiding from me.)

Madhu: nothing like that

He held her cheek and said "see in my eyes and say madhu."

She doesn't speak any word'

"Kaise khti hai wo''..

Jb wo khud shi se nhi janti

Is inkaar ki wajh'?"

Rishu : you don't want to say.

Ok madhu

Mein hi kh deta hu

Iski wajh Maan hai na

(You said No Because of "Maan".)

She shocked for a minute. How he know.

Rishu: kya huya

(What Happen?)

You are shocked "how I know".


Both enter in Mall from opposite side to each other.

He was busy in talking on phone, and she was busy in own thoughts.

Maan: adi, ab mujhe aur koi problem nhi chahiye

(Adi, I don't want any problem, now.)

Adi(on phone): ye s sirr

Maan: aur ha, project ki file ghar bhej dena

Mein dekh lunga

(You send the project file on home, I checked it.)

Adi: yes sir

Maan: hmm

PRECAP:

Maan and geet banged on each other.


looking at you, I feel,
as if some dream, separated from me, has come back..
as if we've passed through a years long night,
and now the morning gust has arrived back..

I kept awake for very long,
I came too far away..
but this dream didn't let me go (lit: didn't leave my wrist)
since so long was my breath stuck,
I breathed again..

when your breath mixed with my breath,
I was able to breathe again..

tumko dekh ke yoon lagta hai
koi bichhda khwab aaya hai..
barson lambi raat se guzre,
subaha ka jhonka laut aaya hai

bahot der jaagi,
bahot door aayi,
khwab ne chhodi na meri kalai..
kab se meri saans ruki thi
mujhe saans aayi..

saans mein teri saans mili to,
mujhe saans aayi,
mujhe saans aayi..


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next part on page 56

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Edited by maanetpriyanka - 12 years ago
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what a poem dear
okay so madhu dont wanna see maan that rishu could guess
i hope she is sure about this because there are too many lives at stake here
god wonder if maan will tell geet what he wanted to that he loves or loved madhu
oh boy are things getting complicated or what
cheers for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...loved it
waiting for maaneet scene
continue soon
tfpm


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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
so mafhu lvs maanu
n she dont want to face him
chlo koi ni
me want maaneet 😆😆😆
nice update
lvd it..

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely...


thanks for the pm..

cont soon..

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