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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE GUYSSS
I M SOOO SORRY!
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THANKS FOR YOUR PATIENCE!
SOOO THIS IS A LOOONG PART PLZ COMMENT AND LIKE!


Recap:
Rey: *closes his mouth* ummm...wow u look yuuummm-yum-yum *gulps* yummy
Taani: *blushes*
Rey: um so join me!
Taani: *smiles and goes into the lake*



PART 3


Rey: hm, so do u like swimming?


Taani: *smiles big* I love swimming! *starts playing in the water lost in her own magical world*


Rey: *smiles*


Taani: Rey! Come on na! *giggling*


Rey: um, Taani u enjoy! I m going to go see if I remembered the towels


Taani: okay! *continues playing like a child*


Rey gets out of the water, and he circles around the house one time. Then he ends up behind Taani...he slowly starts going towards her


Rey: *thinking- Rey! It's ur first date with Taani! Ur supposed to spend time with her! Ufff, par every time I see her, it's hard to control my desires! Uff! And now she looks so tempting!* *gets lost in Taani and wraps his arms around her from the back*


Taani: *shivers* Rey...


Rey: *puts her hair to the side and starts kissing her neck*


Taani: Rey...


Rey: *turns her around* shhh *pecks her lips* Taani *pecks her lips* u look so yummy today!


Taani: *giggles* I know


Rey: *chuckles* *kisses her forehead*


Taani: *wraps her arms around his neck* Rey?


Rey: hm?


Taani: Ur very cute! *pecks his lips and leans her head on his chest*


Rey: *smiles* Taani?


Taani: hmm?


Rey: could u let go for a minute? I need to check something


Taani: *confused* um okay? *let's go of him*


Rey: *splashes water on Taani*


Taani: AHHH!!! *splashes back*


Taarey keep splashing water at each other


Rey: *grabs Taani from the back and spins her around*


Taani: AH! Reeey!


Rey: okay, Taani let's go dry up and eat something...okay?


Taani: *smiles and nods* okay


Taarey go inside and dry themselves


The table is already beautifully set up with food


Taani: wow!


Rey: *chuckles* plz have a seat seorita


Taani: *giggles and sits down* when did u do all this?


Rey: *sits down next to Taani* uff, Taani that doesn't matter! Eat na


Taani: *takes some pasta and salad*


Rey: *takes some pasta*


Taani: mmm so tasty! Did u make this?


Rey: *smiles and looks down* um yea...


Taani: omg! Really?


Rey: *nods his head indicating yes*


Taani: this is sooo perfect! Omg! U know, I have always wanted a prince charming that knows how to cook! Because, I obviously might want some days to rest and not cook! So, he should be able to step up and cook for the family!


Rey: *smiling and just looking at her talk excitedly*


Taani: *starts giggling*


Rey: *pulls Taani onto his lap*


Taani: *looks up at him a bit surprised, then blushes and looks away*


Rey: Taani, u r so cute


Taani: *looks down*


Rey: awww is someone blushing? *gives her a wet and sloppy kiss on her cheek*


Taani: *whinging* Reeey!


Rey: aw! My cute little baby! *gives a wet and sloppy kiss on her other cheek*


Taani: Rey!!!


Rey: *chuckles and starts feeding her* acha, u ready for the next activity?


Taani: *feeds Rey* u mean we aren't staying here for the rest of the day? *pulls on a sad face*


Rey: sorry, we have other plans, but I promise, we will come back here soon and spend couple days here


Taani: pakka promise? *sticks out her pinky*


Rey: *chuckles* pakka promise *links their pinkies together and kisses them*


Taani: *jumps off his lap* let's go!


Rey: *chuckles* let's go!


They get into his car


Taani: so, how far is the next place?


Rey: not very far, just couple minutes away


Taani: yay! *claps her hands*


Rey: *smiles*


They get their in the next 15 minutes


Taani: omg! Mall!?!


Rey: yep...I realized, that I haven't gotten u a single present in the past year, sooo I want u to pick 2 sarees you would like to buy!


Taani: 2!?! Rey! R u crazy???


Rey: babes, I owe u presents! One for each month


Taani: but y???


Rey: because someone as gorgeous as u should be SHOWERED with gifts! And I was sooo stupid, that I haven't gotten u a single gift yet! But I promise that will never happen again! Now come on! I need to buy u something as an apology


Taani: Reeey! No!


Rey: Taani, u let that stupid Shivam buy u gifts when u guys were fake dating! Then y can't I buy u gifts when we r actually dating? Rnt I supposed to have more rights then him!


Taani: okay, fine...


Rey: *smiles* good *kisses her cheek* now let's go!


Taarey go inside the mall


Rey drags Taani into a store that specializes in sarees


Taani: Rey! I don't really wear sarees...


Rey: I know, but u look so hot when u do! Plzzz just try some on, u don't have to buy them, but see if u like anything!


Taani: okay


Rey: good!


Rey picks a black and bue saree for Taani


Taani goes to the fitting room to try them on. While Rey waits outside...


Taani comes out wearing the black one


Rey: *whistles* wow...


Taani: *blushes*


Rey: do u like it?


Taani: *nods her head in approval*


Rey: let's buy it! It's perfect for u


Taani: but, Rey where would I wear this saree?


Rey: babes, when we go on our dates u can wear a saree


Taani: but, it would be so awkward...


Rey: it will be just u and me, it won't be awkward at all


Taani: okay...


Rey: *kisses her forehead* now go try on the other saree


Taani: *goes back inside the fitting room*


Inside the fitting room


Taani: *thinking- I like this saree, but the blouse is kind of hard to clasp on...I hope it isn't this hard to take off. Hmm it's pretty, but should I buy it? I'll just let Rey decide*


Taani goes outside


Rey: *jaw drops* *thinking- OH MY GOD! Yummmy! Yummmy! Yummmy! Hahaha! IN UR FACE SHIVAM!!! She is all MINE! Yummmy! Uff, she NEEDS to buy this saree!* *recomposes himself* u look wow, just wow...


Taani: *looks down blushing*


Rey: so u wanna buy this?


Taani: hm, idk yet...I m going to decide later, but I think i want to change right now


Rey: okay...


Taani turns around and goes back inside the fitting room


When Taani turns around and starts going inside, Rey notices her hair stuck to the blouse


Inside the fitting room


Taani is trying to unclasp her blouse, but is struggling. She pulls a bit too hard a let's out a small "ouch", then she feels a hand ontop of hers. She turns around to face Rey


Rey: main kar doon?


Taani: *blushes her head and nods in agreement*


Rey: *unclaps the blouse and gently takes her hair out*


Taani: *looks at him through the mirror in front of them* thanks


Rey: *looks at her through the mirror and then places couple light kisses on her back* come out soon *winks at her and leaves the fitting room*


Taani: *thinking- I m sooo buying this saree!*


Taani come out of the fitting room after changing back to her dress


Rey: so have u decided whether or not u wanna buy that saree?


Taani: *blushes* I wanna buy it


Rey: *grins and goes to pay for it*


After paying for the sarees, they go to Rey's car and start driving to their next destination...


They end up in a big feild full of beautiful roses


Taani: wow! I love these flowers! *twirls around*


Rey: *smiles*


Taani: so what r we doing here?


Rey: well, u see...we don't have a picture together, and I would like to have some pictures of u with me, and this place is the perfect place to take pictures!


Taani: o yea! We don't have pictures together! So sad na? I mean, even Shivam and I had pictures together! *grins evilly*


Rey: *glares at her* u took pictures with that donkey?


Taani: *giggling* Rey, he was my friend also, remember?


Rey: uff, let's forget him! Let's start our photo session


He takes couple pictures of Taani sitting surrounded by roses and then a couple of her with a rose in her hair...then he takes a picture of them where they are lying down surrounded by roses and one where he has his arms wrapped around her from the back and the r standing near a big tree.


Taani: that was sooo much fun!


Rey: *smiles* yea, let's go now!


Taani: where?


Rey: no questions, remember?


Taani: *giggles* okay baba!


They head to a coffee shop


They go inside and sit down in a private area and order their drinks


Rey: so, let's get to know each other better


Taani: okay, so let's take turns asking each other questions!


Rey: Alright! U ask first


Taani: okay...um wat was ur first date with Kria like?


Rey: we somehow never had one...


Taani: o, so-


Rey: my turn!


Taani: *chuckles* go ahead!


Rey: why were u pretending to go out with Shivam?


Taani: well, u seemed so stressed that everyone was pairing us together and people were questioning ur position as GS...I was feeling bad 4 u, then Shivam told me that if I went out with him, then it will save ur reputation, so I just went along with his game


Rey: *reaches across the table and holds her hand* Taani, u didn't need sacrifice so much...we would've worked it out...u pretending to be with Shivam may have killed all the rumors about us, but it created barriers between all of us


Taani: I know that, but I didn't understand that at the time


Rey: I know...so ur turn *grins*


Taani: *smiles* hmmm, so when did u decide that u wanted to go out with me?


Rey: the minute I found out that u weren't actually going put with Shivam


Taani: *chuckles*


The waiter comes and serves them their coffee and leaves


Rey: *takes a sip of coffee* so, what was Swayam's reaction like when u told him that u and Shivam were faking ur relationship?


Taani: o god *groans*


Rey: it must been very serious


Taani: *nods her head* *starts explaining Swayam's reaction*


~flashback~


Taani: bhai...


Swayam: haan?


Taani: bhai, um


Swayam: kya?


Taani: bhai, mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha...


Swayam: haan bolo


Taani: bhai...actually woh ummm main aur Shivam...um..


Swayam: kya?


Taani: woh bhai...


Swayam: uff...Taani bolo na!


Taani: bhai woh-


Swayam: *eyes widen* oh my god!


Taani: what???


Swayam: u guys didn't!


Taani: didn't what?


Swayam: *glares at Taani and grabs her by the shoulders* r u pregnant!?!


Taani: WHAT!?! No bhai! Ewww!


Swayam: *breathes a sigh of relief* thank god! Okay... So tell me what is the matter


Taani: woh bhai, actually Shivam and I were never actually going out, we were just pretending for the sake of Rey and my reputation


Swayam: wat??? *sits down* it's okay, um well, we'll just tell the others tomorrow...I m sure they wouldn't have a that big of a problem with this...


Taani: o don't worry! I already told everyone! *smiles*


Swayam: what did they do?


Taani: *confused* huh?


Swayam: what did they do when they found out?


Taani: nothing really...they seemed relaxed and gave a bunch of hugs


Swayam: WHAT!?! They should've slapped u! Ur an IDIOT! How can u pretend to go out with him???


Taani: bhai...


Swayam: o my goddd! *pacing around the room* what will people think now??? Taani!


Taani: but, Bhai rnt u happy that I m single and not with Shivam?


Swayam: u mean Cheevam??? Ugh! TAANI!!!! Did you guys kiss?


Taani: um...once, but that was only to prove that we were together


Swayam: u...ka ka ka...kissed...Shiv- *faints*


~flashback ends~


Rey: *glaring at Taani* u kissed Shivam?


Taani: yea, but...it was only for show!


Rey: so, how many other guys have you kissed for show?


Taani: *offended* just him, and it was for u! U should be thankful!


Rey: *softens a bit* I m srry Taani, it's just, I don't like to think of you being with Shivam...it's weird and creepy...


Taani: *slightly smiles* it's okay


Rey: *smiles* great! You ready to go to our next destination?


Taani: yep!


Taarey go to the car and start driving


Rey: so...was Shivam the first person you kissed?


Taani: yea


Rey: *grinds his teeth together* when did you two kiss?


Taani: sometime last week


Rey: I don't really like knowing that I m not the person you shared your first kiss with...I thought I was your prince charming


Taani: Rey, do you think of me as your princess?


Rey: *chuckles* yea


Taani: well, wat if I told you that I don't like knowing that I m not the person you shared your first kiss with...I thought I was your princess...or wait is Kria still your princess?


Rey: *pretends to clutch his heart* ouch! That stung!


Taani: *giggles and leans over to place a kiss on his cheeks* Rey, let's forget whatever happened in the past...let's focus on right now...let's think only about US


Rey: okay *still a bit uneasy*


Taani: *smiles and looks out the window*


They drive for 15 more mins. Then Rey stops the car in the middle of no where.


Taani: um Rey...


Rey: *kisses her roughly*


Taani: *pulls away* Rey


Rey: *kisses her again*


Taani: *pulls away* Re...ee...Rey


Rey: *kissing his way down her throat* Taani, I want to be the first person to touch you like this


Taani: *pushes Rey away and frowns* well you are be the first person to touch me like that...but I don't have the opportunity to be the first person to anything when it comes to u! *pouts*


Rey: *pecks her lips* awww my cutie pie! *kisses her chin* Kria, and I only kissed once...so you are definitely going to be my first in many things *winks at her*


Taani: *blushes* Reeey!


Rey: *chuckles and kisses her again*


Taani: *pulls away and slaps his arm* badmash! Start driving!


Rey: *chuckles and starts to drive*


In couple of mintues they reach a big and beautiful mansion


Taani: wow!


Rey: *chuckles*


Taani: where are we?


Rey: in front of my house


Taani: ur house???


Rey: yep


Taani: omg! Prince charming is actually a prince!!!


Rey: ummm I wouldn't say that I m a prince, but I would say that I can treat u like a queen


Taani: *smiles big*


They go inside of the mansion


Rey: Taani, I don't want you to feel weird or self conscious, but I would like you to meet my mom...the person that means the most to me in this entire world...u okay with that


Taani: *smiles* Rey, I would LOVE to meet your mother!


Person: and I would love to meet you


Rey: *chuckles* hey mom *gives his mom a hug*


RM: hi bacha...now formally introduce us *points to Taani and herself*


Rey: Taani mom, mom Taani


Taani: Rey!


RM: *giggles* beta, I think that's the most we are gonna get out of him


Taani: *smiles*


RM: u have a beautiful smile, just like Rey had described


Taani: *blushes* thank you


RM: *smiles* tum Swayam ki choti behen ho...right?


Taani: *nods her head* jee aunty


RM: tum jaanti ho...Rey hamesha tumhari baat kartha hain


Rey: *groans* mom!


Taani&RM giggle



PART Complete!



padmaja19 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
thank u dear for updating ur lovely ss😃... where to start from, the conversation taarey had over coffee seemed very real and cosy😳... i just loved the fact that rey was showering kisses on his taani😆😉😃... the most funny dialogue was when swayam asked taani whether she is pregnant, i just couldn't stop laughing at that line. ur update was very romantic , realistic and nice. gr8 going grl👏
Edited by padmaja19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
OMG this is tooo good. love you man for making such an awesum SS It was really romantic ❤️. plus really funny 😆.

two dialouges especially were really funny
1st dialouge:Rey: *glares at her* u took pictures with that donkey?

2nd dialouge:Swayam: u...ka ka ka...kissed...Shiv- *faints*

this is to u from all of us Taareyians

Edited by shaniD3luver - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: padmaja19

thank u dear for updating ur lovely ss😃... where to start from, the conversation taarey had over coffee seemed very real and cosy😳... i just loved the fact that rey was showering kisses on his taani😆😉😃... the most funny dialogue was when swayam asked taani whether she is pregnant, i just couldn't stop laughing at that line. ur update was very romantic , realistic and nice. gr8 going grl👏


Awww
Thank you!
I was actually having writer's block when I wrote it sooo it didnt really come out the way I wanted it to
BUT
Thank u sooo much for reading, liking, and commenting!
DontAsk thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: shaniD3luver

OMG this is tooo good. love you man for making such an awesum SS It was really romantic ❤️. plus really funny 😆.


two dialouges especially were really funny
1st dialouge:Rey: *glares at her* u took pictures with that donkey?

2nd dialouge:Swayam: u...ka ka ka...kissed...Shiv- *faints*

this is to u from all of us Taareyians


OMG!!!
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!
I thought that this part SUCKED!
BUT
Ilove the lovely comments so far!
THANK U SOOO MUCH FOR UR APPRECIATION!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Jiyaaa u want to kill me OMG this was out of this world, it was worth waiting for this update u did a fabulous job. I love every single thing in this update. Rey is sooo romantic my God, love how he keep saying yummy yummy🤣 as if Taani is something he can actually eat ☺️ Swayam reaction to Taani telling him about her fake relationship with idiot was hilarious. I am like this now 🤢 after reading this update jiya love love love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Jiyaaa u want to kill me OMG this was out of this world, it was worth waiting for this update u did a fabulous job. I love every single thing in this update. Rey is sooo romantic my God, love how he keep saying yummy yummy🤣 as if Taani is something he can actually eat ☺️ Swayam reaction to Taani telling him about her fake relationship with idiot was hilarious. I am like this now 🤢 after reading this update jiya love love love it


Yaaay!
Thanks Tasha!!!
Ur da best!!!
But I honestly feel that this update wasnt very...hmmm...Idk it just doesnt feel right to me

But thank u sooo much for ur AWESOME comment!
I PROMISE TO MAKE THE NEXT PART BETTER!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: DontAsk


Yaaay!
Thanks Tasha!!!
Ur da best!!!
But I honestly feel that this update wasnt very...hmmm...Idk it just doesnt feel right to me

But thank u sooo much for ur AWESOME comment!
I PROMISE TO MAKE THE NEXT PART BETTER!

Jiya are u crazy this update was just amazing, u write it so beautifully
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Jiya are u crazy this update was just amazing, u write it so beautifully


Tasha ur too nice! U never think badly of my writings, but idk this one was probably long and uneventful😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: DontAsk


Tasha ur too nice! U never think badly of my writings, but idk this one was probably long and uneventful😕

jiya thats because u write awesome stuff and this was the best part so far on this SS 🤗 and it was eventful not uneventful

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