Taarey SS 'Our First Dates?' Part 8 up!

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Hey guys!!! This is Jiya! Sooo I m making an SS on Taarey!!! This is totally dedicated to Maneesha(maneesha_sanker)!!! I hope it's good! I would make a cs...but there's really no point! All the characters are the same as they r in the show! I hope you guys like this SS, and I REALLY hope that it wont dissapoint u Mannesha!
PART 1


It is 9 pm and Taani is sitting on her couch irratated, Swayam comes in the apartment and looks at Taani


Swayam: Taani? Y r u just sitting here? And y r u so dressed up? *sitting down next to her*


Taani: bhai, woh, um I had plans to go somewhere...


Swayam: where?


Taani: um...somewhere


Swayam: Taani, where somewhere?


Taani: ummm...


Swayam: see! *starts yelling* That's the problem with u females! U never come straight to the point! U always have to confuse and frustrate people!


Taani: *widens her eyes and puts an arm on Swayam's back, as an attempt to calm him down* bhai! Calm down! Wats wrong? Wat happened?


Swayam: I m srry Taani, it's just, I kind of fought with Sharon


Taani: aw, wat happened?


Swayam: Idk! She was acting strange for couple hours...then the last 2 hours, she was yelling at me! When I asked her wats wrong, she started crying and kicked me out of her house!


Taani: wow! Um, is it ur anniversary?


Swayam: no! That was last week!


Taani: o...um I could try talking to her


Swayam: nah, it's okay, Rey is with her right now...I m sure he will manage it


Taani: um okay *looks a bit disappointed*


Swayam: so, where were u planning on going?


Taani: *looks down and quietly says* on a date


Swayam: wat!?! With who!?! And wat time!?!


Taani: chill bhai, it's was supposed to have started an hour ago anyways...so there is probably not gonna be a date


Swayam: he didn't call!?!


Taani: *nods her head indicating no*


Swayam: W*F!?! Who is he!?!


Taani: bhai, just leave it, he is a responsible person...he is dealing with something serious right now anyways


Swayam: *confused* how would u know that if he didn't call? Taani just tell me who the idiot is!


Taani: *mumbles* Rey


Swayam: *didn't hear* who?


Taani: *a little louder* Rey


Swayam: Rey??? Um wow, um, just wow...well u always did like him. Um okay I guess, um wow...Wait! Sharon and I just ruined ur date didn't we? Taani I m so sorry! And this was ur FIRST date with him! *gives Taani a look* RIGHT?


Taani: *giggles* it's okay bhai,and yes this was going to be our first date...but don't worry! There will be more dates!


Swayam: now Sharon and I r the villain in ur love story! O no! Ugh! This is mainly Sharon's fault! Uff! Y did she have to call Rey? And how come Rey didn't inform u??? Okay, I need to have a serious talk with him!


Taani: bhai, Rey was probably in a rush to get there! Sharon bhabi is his best friend! Plz don't question him...


Swayam: *slightly smiles* okay


Taani: *gives a fake smile* bhai, I m going to go sleep now


Swayam: but it's only 9:30


Taani: I m feeling kind of tired...goodnight!


Swayam: *feels bad* goodnight!


Taani goes to her room


Swayam: *thinking- uff! I m srry, Taani but I have to call Rey...u deserve an explanation!* *calls Rey*


At Sharon's house


Sharon: *sobbing* how can he just forget?


Rey: *irritated* Sharon! U have been repeating that question for the last HOUR! Plz...just stop crying and tell me wats wrong!


Sharon: *gets quiet and stares at him*


Rey: okay, good girl...now tell me, wat did Swayam forget?


Sharon: *bursts into tears again* how can he forget???


Rey: UGH *his phone starts ringing, he sees that it's Swayam, so he cuts the call not wanting to upset Sharon more*


His phone keeps ringing nonstop for 10 mins


Sharon: Ugh! Just pick it up! Tell him that I don't wanna talk to him!


Rey: *picks up the call* Swayam! Right now isn't the best time to talk! Sharon is still mad at u!
And-

Swayam: *interrupts Rey* I don't care about Sharon right now! U blew off ny sister!!! Didn't u even feel the need to tell her y!?! I thought u were responsible! Now I see where ur priorities are! I thought that u actually felt something for Taani! Is she just a time pass to u!?! U know wat!?! I don't even wanna talk to u right now! *hangs up*


Rey: *stares at his phone with tears in his eyes, then closes his eyes* *thinking- Swayam thinls that i forgot my date with Taani??? How could I possibly ever do that??? I had everything planned for tonight! Ugh! I didn't call her, because I hoped that Taani would take a longer time in getting ready, and wouldn't mind if I was a little late, but I guess I won't be taking her out tonight...*


Sharon: Rey?


Rey: *opens his eyes* yes?


Sharon: wats wrong? U seem very sad


Rey: Sharon, u do to!


Sharon: I know, but-


Rey: I promise to tell u if u tell me ur issue right now


Sharon: okay *takes a deep breath* Swayam forgot to buy ice cream for me!


Rey: W*F!?! U r f**king insane!!! Ur so stupid! U just ruined wat should've been one of the most important days for Taani and me!


Sharon: *a bit frightened and confused* ummm...I thought u were free, so I called u over here to make Swayam scared...wat do u mean by one of urs and Taani's most important days?


Rey: *glares at her* none of ur business! Ugh! Ur soo frustrating! I hope nobody has a friend like u!


Sharon: *hurt* but, I didn't know that u had other plans...that too, with Taani. I m srry


Rey: Sharon, look ur my best friend...so I will always be here to support u, but u gotta understand that u can't take advantage of that, okay?


Sharon: *nods her head indicating that she understands*


Rey: okay, well I have to go now and plz talk to Swayam and this time U APOLOGIZE!


Taayam's apartment


In Taani's room


Taani is sitting on her bed thinking about Rey, suddenly she hears a knock. She gets up to open her door, but doesn't find anyone standing outside. As she closes the door, she hears the knock again, then she checked her closet, but didn't find anything. She turns around is shocked to see Rey with his face pressed up against the window. She rushes to go open the window and let him inside.


Taani: Rey??? Wat r u doing here?


Rey: Taani, I m so so so so so so srry that our date couldn't happen! I had to rush over to-


Taani: *laughs lightly* it's okay Rey, I understand!


Rey: *smiles* and that's y u r so awesome *winks at her*


Taani: *blushes*


Rey: *bends down on one knee and holds out a rose for her* Taani, will u go on a date with me tomorrow?


Taani: *smiles and takes the rose* yes Rey, I would love to


Rey: *stands up* great! I will pick u up around 9 a.m tomorrow!


Taani: Wat!?! 9 a.m!?!


Rey: yea! We r going to spend the whole day together! Our first date has to be VERY memorable! Okay?


Taani: *smiles* okay


Rey: *smiles at her* okay, c u tomorrow, and be ready for our first date! *winks at her* *walks towards the window again*


Taani: Rey! Go from the front door!


Rey: NO! I mean, um actually Swayam is mad at me rite now...so I kinda wanna avoid running into him at the moment


Taani: but u mite hurt urself!


Rey: don't worry! I will be fine!


Taani: but-


Swayam: *walks into the room, grinning* go from the front door Mr.Majnu


Rey: *chuckles* Swayam, u still mad at me?


Swayam: hmmm, nah...now GO! If u r going on a date with my sis then get out right now, and come pack tomorrow to pick her up! BE ON TIME!


Rey: *chuckles* I will, don't worry! C u tomorrow Taani *blows a kiss at her* be ready on time! We need to get a head start if we r going want to make this memorable!*he leaves*


Swayam is looking at Taani for a while, Taani was trying to avoid his gaze, but couldn't stand it anymore


Taani: um, bhai woh...actually-


Swayam: *chuckles and gathers her in a hug*




Part 1 COMPLETE!!!
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INDEX

Part 1- Page 1 (up)šŸ˜†

Part 2- Page 6
Part 3- Page 12
Part 4- Page 19
Part 5- Page 23
Part 6- Page 26
Part 7- Page 34
Part 8- Page 40



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Loveurlife1 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww jiya this was really good :)

love this part
Rey: *bends down on one knee and holds out a rose for her* Taani, will u go on a date with me tomorrow? <<<<<<<<<<<<

awww thts sooo cute 😳
and 9am 🤣 ki date itni shuba lol

awesome <3 xxxšŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveurlife

wowww jiya this was really good :)


love this part
Rey: *bends down on one knee and holds out a rose for her* Taani, will u go on a date with me tomorrow? <<<<<<<<<<<<

awww thts sooo cute 😳
and 9am 🤣 ki date itni shuba lol

awesome <3 xxxšŸ¤—

Thanks Marina!
lol the date is going to be VERY unique!šŸ˜†
Edited by DontAsk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cant wait to for the date part
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I always love whatever you write cause it is emotional but at the same time fun :D AND your ideas are completely different and interesting. :)

HAHA! Swayams reaction when Taani says Rey is just perfect xD I have always imagined it like that xD
OMG! I lol-ed really hard on this one. :p An ice-cream?!?! and of course when Rey replies, "Are you f*cking insane-" I died laughing xp
I have always imagined Rey coming from a window :') When he decides to go back from the window so that he can avoid Swayam was extremely adorable :D
Oh and when Swayam says 'Mr.Majnu' xD HAHAHAHA!


Nice start to an SS looking forward to it. :D Do pm me :)
Edited by fatima_tr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww jiya that was awesome, omg I love Taani and Swayam relationship he is so protective of her, and Rey he is just too smooth šŸ˜‰ like how he came through the window 🤣
Plzzz update soon can't wait to see where Mr charmer take his Taani on their first date 😳
Edited by Natasha. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG I TOTALLY LOVED IT!!!

jiya ur such an amazing writer!!! šŸ‘

i burst out loling at the ice cream part! sharon cracked me up 🤣

and swayam the possessive brother 😃 of course what brother can stand the guy who stood up his sister šŸ˜†

and taarey's big date coming up

hayeee

thanks mannu and jiya šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatima_tr

I always love whatever you write cause it is emotional but at the same time fun :D AND your ideas are completely different and interesting. :)

HAHA! Swayams reaction when Taani says Rey is just perfect xD I have always imagined it like that xD
OMG! I lol-ed really hard on this one. :p An ice-cream?!?! and of course when Rey replies, "Are you f*cking insane-" I died laughing xp
I have always imagined Rey coming from a window :') When he decides to go back from the window so that he can avoid Swayam was extremely adorable :D
Oh and when Swayam says 'Mr.Majnu' xD HAHAHAHA!


Nice start to an SS looking forward to it. :D Do pm me :)

Lol!šŸ˜† THANK U SO MUCH!!!
I love ur comments! ā¤ļø
They r sooo encouraging!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha.

Aww jiya that was awesome, omg I love Taani and Swayam relationship he is so protective of her, and Rey he is just too smooth šŸ˜‰ like how he came through the window 🤣
Plzzz update soon can't wait to see where Mr charmer take his Taani on their first date 😳

Awww thx Natasha!
lol Rey is just AWESOME in anything he is involved inšŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigirlx5

OMG I TOTALLY LOVED IT!!!


jiya ur such an amazing writer!!! šŸ‘

i burst out loling at the ice cream part! sharon cracked me up 🤣

and swayam the possessive brother 😃 of course what brother can stand the guy who stood up his sister šŸ˜†

and taarey's big date coming up

hayeee

thanks mannu and jiya šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Thanks Di!😃😃😃
I LOVE U! ā¤ļø
Edited by DontAsk - 12 years ago

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