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It was nice :)

Thanks 4 d pm!

yeah good story plot...but ryt it in english please..i find tis very hard to follow...nd do give a happy story...please .nd pm me okay i l send u a buddy req...

I loved it !!!!!

Oh wow it sounds interesting dear ! Wonder what Arnav did that Buaji and Garima hate him so much and poor Khushi,what happened to her ??😲 Pls do update soon and thanks for the PM hun 🤗

please do continue, can't wait to see what Arnav has done please pm

Got your pm dear,thank you. . .😊
Will definitely read and comment. . .
Good luck. . .

Like the way you expressed how she pined for light!The paragraphs explaining Khushi's helplessness were beautifully carved :) Very intriguing actually as to why Buaji and Amma are angry on his name..I am not sure if I will be able to follow your SS due to loss of time but I will try to comment when I can! I think you should definitely carry on :D Plus if you can take a suggestion?I hope you will take it in the best interest-try keeping one single colour for the whole piece of writing.It is rather easier to read that ways :) I say this because there might be many who might pull off reading even the great stuff you write if they are not comfortable reading the text! Great job!

Aw thanks for the pm:-) ok i am hooked...whats going on? Why is khushi in hospital? And omg the light analogy scared the living daylights out of me...being surrounded in shadows with only a dot of light shining far away, out of reach...and where is arnav? Why are buaji and amma so mad at him? You have me totally intrigued...brilliant start!

hey nice ss plz continue good start