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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

nice and very good SS and thnks for da PM and plz PM me the nxt part also.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

For a first one it's not bad at all considering Tht I cannot even write a sentence, one suggestion, could u pls post it in a single colour thn a combination also pls can u refrain from using yellow? It's so difficult to read. Thnks for the pm.

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Hey, its very nice..
Awesme start👏
I wd love to read more😃
Can U plss add me to ur PM list??😃

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landrin

@landrin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow loved the 1st chapter
you've brought about a totally different concept
eager to read more...
update soon

and thanx for the pm..

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Arina Raizada

@..Raizada..

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Really really Intersting! Please do continue!!

So many questions! I can't wait for the. Next update!

Please PM me!!

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Bewakoof

@Bewakoof

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

woo!!! interestingg!!
waiting for next!
BTW, Khushi ko hua kya hai??

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Just finished reading. . .
Wait for my comment. . .
😃

Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Hey,is this your first one?
Does not look like dat,looks like you late been writing for ages,like a professional writer. . .
Awesome description and exciting ending. . .
The story seems quite interesting and thrilling. . .
Plz update soon and pm me . . .
I liked reading it,and waiting for more. . .
Thanks for the last pm . . .
😊
Good job,keep it up. . .😳