SwaRon OS-Joining the broken pieces of heart?part3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: kool kanz
awsum update...sharon wants him back n swayam goin away😭really loved sharon's carin side for swayam😊😊plzzz update soon...thanks for d pm

thanks for commenting😊

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Thanks for continuing this
Awesome update from starting rey's mom bandaged swayam's wound n rey too help swayam.
Then rehearsal hall scene sharon worrying about swayam n want to make everything normal
Waiting for next part

thanks sadiya for your comment😊

Originally posted by: -Nia-
This is amazing Rutu! I love that rehersal hall door part where they entangle their fingers.Update third part soon n PM me. (:

Neha even that is my favorite part..thanks for commenting😊

Originally posted by: swaron_d3
i loved intense scenes but i crave for happy endings...i know life is not the same way as you think it would be or wish to be,but it does take into account how you perceive your life to be.
Coming to the update...i loved the flow of your writing..its soothing and gives solace even if it is having a sad note attached to it. loved the part when they entangled their finger longing for their togetherness.. you've again left us craving for more.
awesome update!

oye ananya those were my lines which you commented in first and second para🐷

anyways thanks for commenting.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: meevee
Rutu that was awsum...Swaron is not a regular easy straightforward luvstory we all know...it has so many myriad emotions and each of them is an experience in itself...and each time I read stuff written by u, I am fully satisfied with the feelings it evokes within me...it is a wonderful experience understanding the two of them thru ur vision and hope u continue writing such awsum stuff...waiting eagerly for the third part...

P.S. Pls dont stop PMs even if u dont c comments...I always comment unless sumthing unavoidable delays it

Yeah you said it right Meera SwaRon lovestory is hard to understand they have such complexity in them which leaves me in utter confusion at times, but that makes me love them even more😳

I am really happy to read that my work is being liked by you. And swaron which i portray in my writeups no idea how close it is to the one on show. Understanding them at times is difficult for me.

And whenenver you are free you comment re Meera no worries but do comment i love to read your comments, cause you truly express what i express in my writeup😳

thank you for commenting😃

Originally posted by: damonelena
Amazing :)

Update d next one soon. :)

And i really really hope that Swayam listens to her.

thanks for commenting and swayam will definitely listen to her even if he pretends of not doing it..cause that's our swayam😉

Originally posted by: shreyasi28
Hey i thot d 1st update ws d end bt i m glad u continued!!! Very nyc update indeed!!! Hope all turns out 2 b wel in the third update!!! Lukng fwd to it!!! Update sun nd plz pm me!!!

yeah first update was actually the end but some og them told me to continue so...

and yeah all will turn out to be well in the next update😃

Originally posted by: frankyfio
glad u continued
outstanding...

Tnx for the pm

Thanks a ton😊

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: nature2
Awessome Update! 👏

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: marauder
First thanks for continuing this OS. This is amazingly written and I loved open ended story but its good to see how you would have continued it.

Now coming to this update. It was just adorable. Swayam and Rey's mom part was just too good. But it was SwaRon part that was beyond this worls. It was beautifully written. And all those emotions that they both were feeling was just superbly penned down. Last part was but saddening but kind of expected. Waiting to read the next part.

According to me the first part itself should have been the last one, but since many people told me to continue, so i thought of doing it. 😉

Thank you for your comment,and yeah last bit was a bit sad but since both swayam and sharon are going through emotional ride with their intensities surfing up, the update will not be on a lighter note. I will try my best to sort out their issues.😃

Originally posted by: Nirju99
awesm update, both r in pain,so sad

Yeah both are in pain, but no worries they will soon find happiness😉 thank you for commenting.

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Rutu thanks thanks a million but a request yaha se stop maat karna plzzz, swayam walking away from sharon 😭 aise maat karooo.

wo sab chodo, it is a splendidly awesome update. There is nothing new in that becoz you are do that always it is you habit to give us always the best. Aww Rey mom is super sweet and rey the best bud one can ever have. The best part of this update was in the reharsal hall when swayam fell down sharon kept her hand under his head 😍 Yaar When swayam went away, i wanted to scream at sharon to go behind him make him understand in her full on diva mode.But i think love makes you mushy, it makes the strong weak and weak strong. Rutu You are a fab writer. Hats off to you.

Arre suku wait karo dear aur ek part hai. thanks for your always long comment. Rey truly proves here that he is their best friend no matter what. And swayam aint going anywhere, he just tried to move out, but sharon hai na to get him back.😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: nature7
Awessome Update!
pls continue! :)

thanks for commenting yeah i am continuing.😃

Originally posted by: jumrulzz
OMG!

ok everything was beautiful !!
from the begining til the last !!
the Eye contact wid sharon and swayam !! :OO
CLOUD 9!!
Oh god!!
how cud dis be??
why is swayam talking "Der can be no US"!!
whyyy???
:(
Update ASAP!!
i really wana knw wats next!! :D

Thanks jum for the comment. And swayam behaved like that because he is angry with himself and is trying to be away from sharon. But mind you he is just trying but he is gonna fail miserably in doing it😉 so wait for next update.😃

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
Awesome...beautifully written...thnx for continuing.

Thank shrutika for commenting😃

Originally posted by: troublemagnet
beautifully penned...:)

Do continue sOon..😊

thanks a ton😊

Originally posted by: angelofdeathkav
I loved It Rutu, amazing please do continue 🤗

thanks a ton kavi😳

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
WTH!?! You're continuing this? 😲That is a pleasant surprise!

Nicely written Rutu. Wish the CV's had your imagination. Actually I wish the CV's were as obsessedwith SwaRon as we are. 😆

I like the whole Rey's Mom's intervention. Seemed different.

And I really liked the part where Swayam's goes to see her just to check if she's okay. Typical Swayam. But whatever he may say, he still cannot resist Sharon.😉

I liked the entire paragraph where they had an eye-lock through the door and the pulling and the pushing of the door. Quite metaphorical that!😳

Eager to know how things pan out next. Thanks for the PM. Update soon!!

In blue

Ha! now that was i expecting from some people and you were the first one😆, frankly speaking even i think that the first part should be the last, but since many of them told me to continue, so here i am.

In red

Truly we are preoccupied with SwaRon, which makes us dig out the old episodes and dissect them in a way we want to see things happening between them

And yeah Swayam can never elude his thoughts on Sharon, how much ever he tries doing the same, he is going to fail miserably.😉

Thanks for the comment Nidhi😃

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Awesome update Rutu, and i can't express in words how happy i am that u continued.
Sorry for commenting in so late, was away.
Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks Sudha for your comment😳

Originally posted by: amruTa_SWaRon
Beautiful OS Rutu..!! 🤗 👏
Beautifully penned down...😳 😳
it was really awesum...luved it to d core...❤️
update d nxt part ASAP n do pm me...i hav sent u a buddy req do add me...😊 😊

Thanks for your comment amruta, yeah will update soon😃

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tanuka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

when are we going to get the next part ??😳

update na...

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
when are we going to get the next part ??😳
update na...

Kal pakka😃

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tanuka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Rutu

Kal pakka😃

yippee 🤗

and one more thing , that was ur 1000th post and u became a goldie😃

congrats 🥳

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

yippee 🤗
and one more thing , that was ur 1000th post and u became a goldie😃
congrats 🥳

Oh i didn't notice... thanks tanuka🤗

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beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

hey Rutu ..nice update & swaron share karke apna prob clear kar rahe he...simply awsone..loved d update...😊
hope next part me sab thik hojaye ..plz PM me next update..😊

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