SwaRon OS-Joining the broken pieces of heart?part3

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Trouble_Magnet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

beautifully penned...:)

Do continue sOon..😊

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kavita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

I loved It Rutu, amazing please do continue 🤗

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: neetha
res🥳
unres

tere pm se pehle maine re karke like button hit kiya...😉😳
n now..woow...rutu kash tu palki hoti.😆.aur yahi hua hota show main..so nice..even after such a show down..they still remained calm n still loved each other soo much..❤️loved it to bits..its beautifully penned..👏.i even loved rey's mom..n the whole gang n their understandin towards their friends..😃beautiful..n plss yeh continue hoga na???jaldi update kar k.🤗

Thanks neetha and yaha yaar iss last part hai...will post it when i write it😃

Originally posted by: Swayamd3
Awessome Update!
pls continue! :)
and do pm me!
update soon!
waiting to knw wats next!!
wat will sharon do to talk bout US!

Thanks arshak...and yeah i am continuing it😃

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
I am so happy that u decided to continue with this
for that u deserve a big hug🤗
this part was awesome !!
fantastically written 👏
liked reys mom and rey trying to bring swayam back to normal and also not to miss college .😊
the rehersal room part was amazing , totally loved it ❤️
its good to see the change in sharon and she trying to talk to swayam abt "them".
hope swayam listens to her.
i hope u are continueing it further ???
eagerly waiting for the next part , update soon...
thanks for the pm.

Aww thanks for the hug tanuka, one from my side too🤗

Glad that you loved it...and yeah i am continuing😳

Originally posted by: Swayamonly
'US'???? Wow... Sounds awesome to me...:):P The way you described their state of mind was sooo beautiful.. That was sooo reallistic... N Swayam's numbness always gives alot pain yaar... Can't see him like this.. Thanx k tune age cont. Kiya.. Do update soon ha...

Thanks poonam for your lovely comment😳

Originally posted by: SwaRonLuver
hey rutu..love u for continuing dis os🤗
it was awesome..loved rey's mom n rey's convo wid swayam..
swaron..after all d things happened bw dem..dey still care for each other..n sharon wanna talk abt "dem"..😳 waiting eagerly for d next part
update soonn..

Thanks monica🤗 for your comment...glad that you liked it😳

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Thank you for continuing and loved the part where Sharon tangles her fingers with his indicating to him to come in the rehearsal hall !!! Poor Swayam feels so guilty that he can't even see that Sharon is trying to fix the situation between them !!! Pls tell that there is a part 3..pretty please ??!!

Thanks abby ..and that finger entangling part that's my favorite too...glad that you loved it😳

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
amazing

Thank you😃

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
It was super amazingg rutu 👏
u continued ittt..thank you so much for dis! 😃

In d strting wen rey's mom comforted swayam..i cud so relate to swayam...its actually him..wen he knows he has done sumthing wrong..he just can't stand himself! And i love dat thing abt him!!! ☺️

den d rehearsal hall part ws soo cutee and awesome...
wen sharon put her hand to support his head from hurting..it was adorable...it showed she cares soo much for him..! ❤️❤️❤️
I have always loved dat sharon who wants to sort things out quickly...i love her being impulsive in such situation..it makes her way cuter! 😳

oke noe i vil be waiting for d next update..so plz update soon! 😃

Thank you for a long comment surbhi🤗

Yeah you said it right about swayam..he couldn't forgive himself after doing whatever happened between them. And yes Sharon cares for him😳. LOL at sharon being impulsive😆 its true it makes her more cuter😃

Originally posted by: Luvsd3
Awesome update dear...luvd rey's mom she is such a sweetheart...luvd the fact sharon want to know why Swayum's head hurt(although she knows the answer...i guess) And sharon talking about "US"...Can't wait update soon...thanks for the pm.

Thanks himani for your comment...will update soon😃

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon
Awesome update...Rey and his mother's attempt to make Swayam feel better was adorable.

Loved how Swayam could not resist and wanted to know how Sharon was doing, Sharon on the other hand was concerned about him when she saw bandage on his head. She wants to talks but now since he is feeling guilty he doesn't. Eagerly waiting for next update...thnx for PM 😊

Thanks amrita for your lovely comment...and yeah Swayam is feeling guilty about whatever happened but no worries since Sharon has decided to sort out matters😳

Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago

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tanuka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

are we going to get an update today ????

tanuka looking at rutu with an expecting face🤔

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
are we going to get an update today ????
tanuka looking at rutu with an expecting face🤔

Rutu hiding herself in an attempt to avoid telling Tanuka that she has not yet started writing the next part...and may take 4-5 days

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tanuka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Rutu

Rutu hiding herself in an attempt to avoid telling Tanuka that she has not yet started writing the next part...and may take 4-5 days

its okay !!

but tanuka is very sad 😔😭

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Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

WTH!?! You're continuing this? 😲That is a pleasant surprise!

Nicely written Rutu. Wish the CV's had your imagination. Actually I wish the CV's were as obsessed with SwaRon as we are. 😆

I like the whole Rey's Mom's intervention. Seemed different.

And I really liked the part where Swayam's goes to see her just to check if she's okay. Typical Swayam. But whatever he may say, he still cannot resist Sharon.😉

I liked the entire paragraph where they had an eye-lock through the door and the pulling and the pushing of the door. Quite metaphorical that!😳

Eager to know how things pan out next. Thanks for the PM. Update soon!!

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Awesome update Rutu, and i can't express in words how happy i am that u continued.

Sorry for commenting in so late, was away.

Looking forward to the next update.

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Amruta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Beautiful OS Rutu..!! 🤗 👏

Beautifully penned down...😳 😳

it was really awesum...luved it to d core...❤️

update d nxt part ASAP n do pm me...i hav sent u a buddy req do add me...😊 😊

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: chimpukli10
it was awesum update Rutu..d way rey and his mom try to make his mood better..d way there silence was speaking for them.u know a tear drop from eye..when he said that there is never going to be us..do update d next part soon..

thanks vaishnavi for commenting...and yeah will update it in 1 day or two😃