SwaRon OS-Joining the broken pieces of heart?part3

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Rutu you updated Loved it gal, you are just awesome. Hahaha only swaron can laugh at their own plight during their confession, coz they are an ajeeb pair just out of the world. yaar you have done a wonderful job, end part mai when all the gang wants to peek in on them and rey stops them, Rutu the whole thing is so true to life, so like what s happening D3, very well done yaar, masttt. Really swaron is most the amazing couple ever and your writing mashallah it is just the sweetest. Thanks so much.

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

mindblowing last part😃

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sravani

@Blessedfool

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Rutu,fantastic job done there.I loved Sharon's longing to get Swayam back.Swayam can't change,can he ever?? This guy loves her so much to even leave her for her own good.I loved how he says "That's not the answer" after the kiss.Start another FF,please.

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Trushna

@swaronland

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

very beautifully written part👏

loved the way sharon confessed & said those cheesy lines was so cute

aww she kissed him☺️

UNO game😆

loved its ending it was really sweet❤️

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

very very well written n expressed..both swayam's n sharon's part...way 2 go rutu...always luks forward 2 ur os...dey r super awsum n damn romantic n most importantly dey r swaron os...😊😊😊thanks for d pm...start a new one soon..

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

first of all sorry i didnt commented on second part...

amazing update...their first kiss..heavenly...

perfect ending...one thing...sharon doesnt beahve so maturely yaar...i mean bahut kuch samjha gayi...shockd...

nice one yaar...plzz write more...

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swayamsharon

@swayamsharon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

hey it was awsome!!!
beautifully written!!! i really loved it!!!
sharon pov was nicely explained, always want swaron to talk like this, itz pleasure to read it in yr update!!!
swaron convo, kiss, hug & sleep all were awsum!!!
whenver u say this is last part, i want u to continue but u ended very well!!!
thanks 4 pm!!!

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Awesome update rutu
Ending was really amazing
Can't expect sharon to say those cheesy lines
Just loved it

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

oye rutu!

I know those were your lines thats why used it!

loved your lines thats why mentioned here! no worry i'm not stealing it! do you forgot that i'm indeed a fan of yours...looks like you forgot it!😕

just kidding no offence!😵

well.now coming to *the update*;

it was bang on! loved the essence and the flow..swayam continuously resenting the idea of talk was well described.his turmoil could be very well judged from your vocabulary! he trying hard to not to break down infront of her was really amazing! in cotrast sharon was trying hard to mend herself or i should say their equation so that they could turn it into a relation!

living the moments where the gang sneaks in! and rey's thought was on spot right because they both are unpredictable..no one other could never sense what's cooking between them!

summing it all,it was a great update! and it ended in a perfect manner!

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: swaron_d3
oye rutu!
I know those were your lines thats why used it!

loved your lines thats why mentioned here! no worry i'm not stealing it! do you forgot that i'm indeed a fan of yours...looks like you forgot it!😕
just kidding no offence!😵

Was pulling your leg ananya, bura mangayi kya?😳

And you are my fan , baapre mujhe chane ke ped pe mat chada..😆