SwaRon OS-Joining the broken pieces of heart?part3 - Page 14

Part3-aftr readin dis updte d frst thng cme 2 my mind...kash kash ye d3 mein hota...dis updte fulfilld d bggst missing link in d3...d shivam's party sequence..i don knw y dey nvr brng dis topic up...lvd deir convo 2 d core...😃d mch needed cnvrsation...full of intensity...swayam's guilt...alwys thnkin bout sharon's cmfrt..deir kiss...as sharon said...bth wre kissin...bt our majnu alwys blmes hmslf...dts hw he is...dats hw our swayam z...selfless...nd u gve in dis updte d ques dat i alwys wntd swayam onscreen 2 ask sharon..."where wl dat leave us!"in d shw dis ws alwys shwn(bfre trial rlnshp) sharon needs swayam but wnt accept her feelins...leavin swayam hurt nd sharon cnfsd...lvd d kiss at d end...it ws dmn passionate...nd also lvd wen sharon ws urgin swayam 2 say dse 3 magical wrds...

Ah..im alas dne...all in all...a fine piece of swaron wrk...a fine piece f writin...a gr8 stry...one f my bst swaron reads...👏👏

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Dis wrtin of urs z ne of dse wch brngs d SWARON INTENSITY again bak 2 lyf...dis ss ws sooo swaronish...nd lve it a looot...

Part1-lvd d sequence dat u chse...classroom shwdwn...one f d bst swaron scnes in whle of d3...nd d mst intense one...i lykd d fct dat u mjrly wrte bout sharon pov...in d soap we usually get 2 c swayam's pov(dat 2 rare nwadays)...sharon's thnkin alwys rmns missin in d srl...evn in dis sqnce dey didnt shw proprly wt she went thru...bt keep dat tpc asyd...u cme as a saviour...u tuk us to swaronland nd girl it ws full of beauty...u ptryd swaron's emotion wit total perfection...deir agony...deir frustation...phew...i don knw whethr i wl b able 2 expln nycly...bt all d thngs wre bang on...deir kiss girl...deir kis...it ws magical...sooo intense...swayam feelin guilty f syn sch hrsh wrds 2 sharon...sharon on d odr hand hurt...awesme...i totally suck at writin nd explnin thngs..dus u hve to bear sch a jmbld up cmmnt...😛😛

Yeah I focussed more on Sharon POV, that was the most needed and if at all they had shown about the same, the story would have kick-started then and there. Anyways I quite understood what you wanted to say from your comment, even if you found it jumbled up, it still means alot to me. So yeah thanks😳

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Part2-i ws sooo happy wen u tld u wud cntinue dis os...nw d updte...andr awesme piece of writin...it ws rch with awesme use of wrds...swaron...dis updte gve us sch awesme sequences...deir door scene...i ws lft speechless..deir longin 2 c see each odr..deir pain...sharon wrryng bout swayam...😳dey wre seein each odr thru d door slits..it ws awesme thnkin...take a bow..den wen d door opnd dey fell...nd i ws soo sprsd dat swayam didnt hit head due 2 sharon's palm...andr sprb thnkin...absolutely lvd d updte 2 d cre...🤗

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Part3-aftr readin dis updte d frst thng cme 2 my mind...kash kash ye d3 mein hota...dis updte fulfilld d bggst missing link in d3...d shivam's party sequence..i don knw y dey nvr brng dis topic up...lvd deir convo 2 d core...😃d mch needed cnvrsation...full of intensity...swayam's guilt...alwys thnkin bout sharon's cmfrt..deir kiss...as sharon said...bth wre kissin...bt our majnu alwys blmes hmslf...dts hw he is...dats hw our swayam z...selfless...nd u gve in dis updte d ques dat i alwys wntd swayam onscreen 2 ask sharon..."where wl dat leave us!"in d shw dis ws alwys shwn(bfre trial rlnshp) sharon needs swayam but wnt accept her feelins...leavin swayam hurt nd sharon cnfsd...lvd d kiss at d end...it ws dmn passionate...nd also lvd wen sharon ws urgin swayam 2 say dse 3 magical wrds...

Ah..im alas dne...all in all...a fine piece of swaron wrk...a fine piece f writin...a gr8 stry...one f my bst swaron reads...👏👏