Two Hearts-One Heartbeat ~A ManVeer SS~ Note on Pg50 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tannu-

Nice SS :)
nice concept...
jay in positive character...how i wished she to become positive in the show too..but ab kya faida jo guzra phir laut kar nhi aata...
the start of the story was beautifully expressed

cont soon :)
nd do pm me whenever u update :)

Hi Tannu😊...yeah the start (Prologue) was superb!! Oyshee actually has updated 2 parts, these are the links:
hope u enjoy them as well...BTW, I'm Tuli, Oyshee's cousin; Im replying from her behalf coz she cannot come online because of fever.
Edited by Tuli.Luvs.Uday - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope you get well soon Oyshee...take full rest as of now caz vrirals can be pretty nasty! Hope you have a speedy recovery!!! We love U!!!😳😳😳

@Tuli.Luvs.Uday, thanks for informing us...and thanks for replying to all of us!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan

Hope you get well soon Oyshee...take full rest as of now caz vrirals can be pretty nasty! Hope you have a speedy recovery!!! We love U!!!😳😳😳

@Tuli.Luvs.Uday, thanks for informing us...and thanks for replying to all of us!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

You're welcomeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Tuli.Luvs.Uday, how is Oyshee today?? is she feeling better? Hopes she gets well soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan

@Tuli.Luvs.Uday, how is Oyshee today?? is she feeling better? Hopes she gets well soon:)

SHE'S RECOVERING...QUITE BETTER NOW. HOPEFULLY SHE'LL BE FINE WITHIN A FEW DAYS😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tuli.Luvs.Uday

SHE'S RECOVERING...QUITE BETTER NOW. HOPEFULLY SHE'LL BE FINE WITHIN A FEW DAYS😳


Hope she gets well soon so we can have our part3😆😆😆😆...just kidding. No really, hope she gets well soon😊😊.

BTW, since ur her cousin, can I ask something? Just a hint ha😉😉...well, can we have a scene where we get to know how DS woke up in the next update? I know fbs like that will push the main story and might seem to people like dragging, but i'd love some more fbs of manveer...it'll only show us and prove how Manveer's bond became this strong :):) Just a suggestion😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan


Hope she gets well soon so we can have our part3😆😆😆😆...just kidding. No really, hope she gets well soon😊😊.

BTW, since ur her cousin, can I ask something? Just a hint ha😉😉...well, can we have a scene where we get to know how DS woke up in the next update? I know fbs like that will push the main story and might seem to people like dragging, but i'd love some more fbs of manveer...it'll only show us and prove how Manveer's bond became this strong :):) Just a suggestion😳😳

would let her know...thanks for the suggestion, Oyshee really hopes for feedback whenever she updates...it'll make her day😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆😆

thank god ur online...love to discuss this SS with someone...I see they do that in the UVC's...but whenever Im online, no one's around🤔
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Posted: 13 years ago
@tuliluvsarmaan...yeah me too...just like we used to when the show was on air!!! like the way all of us rushed to the forum to discuss the epis. :D:D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tuli.Luvs.Uday

@tuliluvsarmaan...yeah me too...just like we used to when the show was on air!!! like the way all of us rushed to the forum to discuss the epis. :D:D


exactly!!!! missing those days yaar...kaash DEK ab bhi chal raha hota...miss it every second!!

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