Two Hearts-One Heartbeat ~A ManVeer SS~ Note on Pg50 - Page 8

@Tuli.Luvs.Uday, @Shals, @kakacool123, @lilybabes, @Aman Ali, @Mahi, @xxDaydreameRxx and @Add123

Guys...okay, u have made me blush this time😳😳...itni tareef matt karo, main sarr char jaungi😆😆😆.
okay,keeping jokes aside, thank you SOOO much for the lovely comments...whenever i read your comments, i feel like dhinka-chika-ing thinking i could make my dearest buddies smile...this means a lot more to me than anyone of u can imagine!!! i love you all!!!

And thanks for liking my result of my out-of-control imaginations...kya karu, i cant get rid of manveer from my head, they r there 24-7...so, im just jutting them down and pakaofying u all😆😆😆...thanks for bearing with me, love ya!!
Accha, Tuli, my eccentric cousin😆😆😆😆, has been eating my head all day today wanting faces for the new characters ive introduced (living within walking distances and being my Mom's fav. niece really has her all over me, I tell you🤢🤢🤢 - firse VB agaya yaar!!! Main kya karu?? Mere toh voice-box mein VB aur Manyata ka bhoot char gaya hain!!!. So, the point is that do you think i should?? Or I'll just let it be, let you guys pick up faces in your thought. Kya Karu? Plzz reply, coz then ill have to consider casting issues😆😆😆😆

happy friendship sweets..🤗 god bless u...😳

Sorry sorry sorry I know I am super dooper late 😕
But I did read both the partsof Chapter 1 as soon as you uploaded them, just couldn't comment earlier since Ramadan has been keeping me occupied most of the time 😳
Anyway let me get started on the comment. Oyshee this was MIND BLOWING!! The dream in part one was so amazing. The way they are running around everywhere and reliving their childhood through such antics was so adorable. And the last line in this part really touched my heart:
Still wishing Khasmanu-khaane...still waiting..
And then comes the continuation of Part 1 which was a master piece. Seriously Oyshee I am loving this SS already. The concept is so intriguing. I have read stories in which Manyata goes missing or goes through such accidents, but doing that to Uday in your story is something really very interesting as through this, we'd be able to see the vulnerable side of Manyata too and this way, her love for Uday would be tested. Right now I am actually more curious to find out the back story of what exactly happened that led Uday and Manyata to this mess. I know I know that there is still time to reveal that, but as they say,curiosity kills the cat 😛 . Lol. I really loved this part because you described two different sides of Manyata in it. One is the Yuvraani in her who will never back out from her duties no matter what, and the other is of a helpless lover who is just waiting for her love to return back to her and is not losing hope. That was fabulous. And finally Uday shows some movement. Can't wait to see him fully awake. But maybe he has a memory loss or something. I should better not guess. Lol. I am just going to wait for the story to unfold. Till then keep surprising me 😉
Once again, brilliant piece of work. Update the next part soon because I seriously can't wait to read more.
P.S: Happy Friendship's Day! 🤗

SINCE YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND, ALONG WITH BEING MY BEST COUSIN SIS. WHOM I'VE ALWAYS FOUND BESIDE ME...I JUST WANNA SAY OYSHEE THAT I LOVE YOU...IM REALLY LUCKY TO HAVE A SIS. LIKE U...HAPPY FRINDSHIP DAY!!