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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#271

resvd...

*edited

im officially in love with ur arnav...he sounds damn adorable wen he's frustrated...

loved it wen he actually wanted to ask her forgiveness remembering his mom's words...

so his father died before he was born...uh-huh

poor guy...lost everyone... but still strong and holding on to those precious memories...

now i know y i fell in love with him...his characterization is amazing zara...

its soooper cute with the way u describe him...

and khushi... whoa!!!

i knew she was just temporarily mute... so buaji asks her talk ah ha!

hope some other blasting incident akin to the past brings here voice back...

i sooo wanna listen to her banters...

and seriously...the girl needs to cut the poor guy some slacks... he just wanted to apologize...

i laughed wen u mentioned her scrambling away from him like he's after her hide or something...

and there goes his anger again...temperamental ASR...awwiiieee

and as i already said...i love how khushi writes her diary for Raja like how she tells a friend everything that happens...

and Raja n khushi have a super bonding...yippeee...

Arnav's mom Muskaan...wanna read more of her... she seems such a wonderful hearted person...

all her words that Arnav remembers increases my curiosity to know wat actually happened to her...

and y did she have to lie to him about his own father... hmmm... maybe not to break his heart or something...

and this Kushal Dadaji... he has some secret too nah... but i like him... though he puts up a hard exterior...he has a soft heart...

wow...the entire suspense element u are maintaining sooo well makes me want to read this entirely in one shot...aaahhh!!!!

will wait for the next update eagerly zara...LOVED THIS ONE TOOO

~~~ sam xoxo

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Nice update.

A small glimpse into Arnav's past. Painful and happy.

He feels remorse. It is so nice to see.

But he terrifies poor Khushi.

M guess was riht again, in regards to her. Am I awesome or what? [I just read a lot😆 Im a nerd🤓]

Im waiting for the next one!

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shivu124

@shivu124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Umm k I m confused Wht does she mean by she aske me to talk .
Love the update

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

3rd gift!

I know this is stupid of me quoting all of this but I feel so happy xD

Loved your gift Zara!

To the update,

I'm glad that Arnav thought of an apology, like knowing his nature, I ,really didn't expect it!

Loved the memories of his parents, really sweet people I must say, wish to see and hear more of them if possible!

Muskaan maa was the life of the family it looks like! A very lively person!

Loved Arnav's question of whether you can love your ma more or not and loved Devyani's answer even more!

I loved the concept of Khuhsi writing to Raja everyday in her diary! And loved the strike too!

Aww, she can't speak? :(

I sure she'll express volumes through those doe like eyes!

And hope she gets better!

Arnav again you've done a fabulous job, sometimes I think i'll run out of adjectives to describe your work, I'm serious about this. *chuckles*

Summing up in one word- this update was fantabulous! xD

Love you!

XOXOXO

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: shivu124
Umm k I m confused Wht does she mean by she aske me to talk .
Love the update

buaji keeps asking her to speak hoping that khushi would start talking again.

xxx

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

I loved the whole Arnav trying to apologise and Khushi running away from him.😆

One question: Why does Khushi write stuff to Raja? I mean he is a dog. How can he read it?😆

Or it is like she involves Raja too in her diary conversation?

Ok, so Khushi cannot speak. I guess maybe she was too traumatised by some incident in the past.

And about being mute, I understand what you are trying to say because my own cousin brother cannot speak since birth. But he still leads a normal life like anyone and there is nothing wrong with it. Infact, such people are smarter and wittier than us and they want us to treat them normally.

And I really love this new concept in your story. It's unique.⭐️

And I love how Arnav gets flustered up in Buaji's presence.😆

ermm, one question: Why does Muskaan apologise to Arnav for not allowing to meet his father? I mean has Arnav never ever met his father? And isn't Abhimanyu the Raizada's son? Muskaan is the daughter in law right? Maybe I should wait for the forthcoming updates to find out.😃

Edited by molten_lava - 13 years ago

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-Hope-

@-Hope-

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#277

That was an awesome update! Aww, Arnav's flashback's were so beautiful..

I'm glad that Arnav wants to apologize unlike Arnav before in the show, I'm also a bit happy that Khushi ran away from him. Great update!

Thanks for the PM and continue soon :) Can't wait for the next update! 😊

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Beautiful Update!

Arnav feeling restless & guilty for being so rude to her.He is sweet though.But conscious is not letting him rest.Even though he unknwingly has been bad to her...he knows..that he needs to apologise.but just trying to push back that thought.

Next,I loved the memories of muskaan he recollected.First,he questiond hs mum whether she thinks he will be successful like hs dad...& she replied that she knws n NOT think.I was touchd by ths... mum always gives the hope & confidence..& I LoVeD it!

The next memory he had was hs mum apologising...and I liked that hs brain fetchd the memory that drived him to try apologising to Khushi.
So he dint see his dad...!he died before hs mum.

I love arnav relationshp with both devyani & khushal(even thou he is arrogant)...its understanding..n arnav respects them alot.So I was right he isnt that khaddoos.😆

Khushi is still terrified of hm...poor girl..first of al she hardly allowed to see people..n wen she meets they scare/hurt her...So she was bound to be scard by hs approach!

So buaji is asking her to try and speak...and she is upset as she is unable to do so...helpless n angry at herself.She is going thru lots...
awww...Raja is always there by her side!
Arnav Beware of hm!😆
Hopefully he wil be successful soon in sayin Sorry!thaanks for pm!wil wait for next part.:D

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#279

This chapter was super nice 👏

Loved the fact that Khushi has occupied Arnav's mind so quickly even if it is only guilt 😉

So whatever happened to Khushi... doesn't Madhumati know the truth, it looked like only Raja knows what really happened & why Khushi is mute, have I got it right ?

Hmmm... Arnav's failed attempt @ sorry, that was bound to happen, how can he expect Khushi to stand still in front of him after his behavior the previous time, hope our hero handles it better next time 😆

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tsultana

@tsultana

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#280

that was a beautiful update. U write soo well! I love the portrayal of khushi n arnav. He went to apologise was freshing. I am eager to read the upcoming updates. Great wrk

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