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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

That was one awesome update!

ASR getting nervous is the 8th wonder of the world! 😆

Loved his nervousness and how flustered he gets trying to apologize. You have written it very well Zara! And she ran away seeing him? 😆 LOL

Just loved it totally!

And read your NOTE and yes you are absolutely right! People who are mute or with any defect doesn't like sympathy because they are strong from inside! And yes for a relationship understanding is more important! There was one Tamil film called "Mozhi" in which the lead heroine is Mute but the hero loves her. That film was just beautiful.This update reminded me of that film! :)

Awesome one Zara! 🤗 You have to appreciate me that in spite of my exams im being regular here! *Pats my shoulder* But for the next 3 days i cant be regular if there is any update! :(

Cheers!

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#282

beautifully written!:)

okay khusi suffered from sum kind of trauma so she doesnt speaks up...i love the way the story is progressing...gr88 work!

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Maira96

@Maira96

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Totally understand Khushi being scared of Arnav but wish she would have given him a chance to speak and say sorry.

Looking forward to finding out why Arnav has never met his father and that was sweet when he asked if it was ok that he loves his mom more than his dad. Totally understood what he was feeling there. 😳

You really described him trying to say sorry well. 👏

That girl! I'm here to say sorry and she's...She's bloody not in. Totally typical of Arnav. Getting mad at the other person because they aren't there when he wants to talk to them.😆

So Khushi doesn't talk because something has traumatized her. Really wonder what happened.

Totally understand Buaji's frustration and attempts to make Khushi talk. She just wants to see Khushi get better.

P.S Love her and Raja's conversations!❤️

A really nyc chapter 👍🏼

Totally agree with ur note. Everyone is different and has different things going on in their life that makes them different, that doesn't mean that they should be treated differently or worse than someone else is treated. They are just normal people like us and they should be treated that way! 😒

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priyah_reddy

@priyah_reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Awesome update :)

Totally understand Khushi's character and wat ur trying to convey through her character :) of cuz ppl with disability can lead their life happily and would live to see how Arnav and Khushi understand each other :) that in itself would be intriguing :)

Arnav is ready to apologize to Khushi but she thinks he is stalking her ??? Poor girl !!! She must be scared out of her wits to think like that :) hope Arnav finds the perfect opportunity to apologize to her without scaring her away ;)

Loved it !!!

Waitinggg for the next update :)

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shraddska

@shraddska

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Yay an update... I was waiting... can't believe you got me hooked already...😆

By the way thanks for the gift...

And I wasnt joking about the SP thing... the sheer magnitude of canvas that you have used is mind boggling... I can really imagine a large palatial house with gardens and green houses and fountains and servants hurrying around and everything...Kushal and Devyani, the aging King and Queen and Arnav their Prince... just what SP would want for a soap opera... and the plot too is amazing...

Hmmm now coming to the update...

The first para, arnav's restlessness and the way he sneakily looked at Khushi's (I hope) window, reminded me of the song Kuch to hua hai Kuch ho gaya hai...😆 I know... crazy me...

I found arnav very down to earth and close to his parents... His dream to live up to their expectations is so sweet...

The flashback where Muskaan teaches him to say sorry was wonderful...

Gosh 'the ASR' cant even make a proper excuse to meet her...😉

His hesitation of apologising reminded me of the episode where he practices to say sorry before she comes...

Oh!!! Khushi ran away from him...😕 Kind of expected that after the way he treated her and how she was scared of him...

But what cracked me up was...

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

I mean seriously Khushi? This girl is awesome... Sanka devi...🤣

The rest of the letter to Raja was cute and touching... I dont know what might've happened but buaji should give it a rest...

Fabulous update... loved it a lot...

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#286

I Can Totally Feel Khushi's POV . She Hasn't Been Meeting Many People & She Gets SO Innocently Afraid Of Them Fastly Naa :( She's So Cute Cause She Thinks Arnav Is Stalking Her ; O 🤗 Haha, Doesn't Ke Know That He Shouldn't Follow Girls ?! This Line Cracks Me Up . She Has Been Hidden From The Real World Naa . I'm Thinking How She Will React She Will Get To Know About Something Called Live In Relationship Which Arnav & Lavanya Are Having :| Awww, Arnav's Past Made Me Fall In Love With Him . ArHi Seems In Very Much Pain . Do Continue Soonish 😳 OHHH, So Khushi Can Talk But Can't Now Cause Of Trauma :|

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

HE'S STALKING ME!!!! I was just planting as Buaji told me to when that man popped up again! That Arnav Singh Raizada wants to kill me!!! I knew his temper was bad from the other night but this is really odd! Here I am trying to stay away from him and there he is wanting to shout at me more! Doesn't he know it's bad to follow girls around!?

loved the update love how he is distracted by her and want to say sorry loved the flashback of him and his mom loved the update he tried to apologized and she ran knowing his temper loved how she was writing in her dairy loved the update thanks for the pm

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: sruthirishi

will jus get bac after reading😃
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WELL-WRITTEN👏
Arnav's restlessness was well justified!!
i totally luved d portrait part-"What made Arnav adore this photo was their secret young smiles that told so much about their love for each other and her gentle hand that laid on his, on top of Muskaan's shoulder." aww thank you muchly
: "Dadi...Is it ok... to admit I love Ma more ...than Papa." - aww..how cute!!
: "I never got the chance to meet him?" -i'm confused there😕 all shall be revealled😆
the way muskaan said' even we adults make mistakes' was simply d truth!
his hesitations to say sorry -wht celse can v expect from d gr8 ASR😉
. That girl! I'm here to say sorry and she's...She's bloody not in.
kushi's fear was very natural..
d diary part was really cute..esp her selfless luv towards raja😃 yay thank you.
oopss ..jus got to know i'm first here🥳

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Originally posted by: -NishaSobti-
3rd gift!
I know this is stupid of me quoting all of this but I feel so happy xD

Loved your gift Zara! welcome!😃
To the update,
I'm glad that Arnav thought of an apology, like knowing his nature, I ,really didn't expect it.

Loved the memories of his parents, really sweet people I must say, wish to see and hear more of them if possible! yes there will be more.😳
Muskaan maa was the life of the family it looks like! A very lively person! definatly

Loved Arnav's question of whether you can love your ma more or not and loved Devyani's answer even more! aww thanks.

I loved the concept of Khuhsi writing to Raja everyday in her diary! And loved the strike too!
Aww, she can't speak? :( you shall find out soon.
I sure she'll express volumes through those doe like eyes! exactly.
And hope she gets better!

Arnav again you've done a fabulous job, sometimes I think i'll run out of adjectives to describe your work, I'm serious about this. *chuckles* thank you very much for saying so.

Summing up in one word- this update was fantabulous! xD

Love you! love ya!
XOXOXOXOXOXO

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Originally posted by: molten_lava
I loved the whole Arnav trying to apologise and Khushi running away from him.😆 thank youuu😆
One question: Why does Khushi write stuff to Raja? I mean he is a dog. How can he read it?😆
Or it is like she involves Raja too in her diary conversation? more about the diary soon about how she got it and what its for.
Ok, so Khushi cannot speak. I guess maybe she was too traumatised by some incident in the past.
And about being mute, I understand what you are trying to say because my own cousin brother cannot speak since birth. But he still leads a normal life like anyone and there is nothing wrong with it. Infact, such people are smarter and wittier than us and they want us to treat them normally. thank you for understanding.

And I really love this new concept in your story. It's unique.⭐️ yay!😳
And I love how Arnav gets flustered up in Buaji's presence.😆 buaji has that effect on people😆

ermm, one question: Why does Muskaan apologise to Arnav for not allowing to meet his father? I mean has Arnav never ever met his father? And isn't Abhimanyu the Raizada's son? Muskaan is the daughter in law right? Maybe I should wait for the forthcoming updates to find out.😃 some have figured it out, but utimatly yes you would have to wait if you want to be certain.

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Originally posted by: GayuArnav
That was one awesome update! thank you.
ASR getting nervous is the 8th wonder of the world! 😆 lol. very unnatural.
Loved his nervousness and how flustered he gets trying to apologize. You have written it very well. why thank you.😳 Zara! And she ran away seeing him? 😆 LOL..yes.😆
Just loved it totally!
And read your NOTE and yes you are absolutely right! People who are mute or with any defect doesn't like sympathy because they are strong from inside! And yes for a relationship understanding is more important! There was one Tamil film called "Mozhi" in which the lead heroine is Mute but the hero loves her. That film was just beautiful.This update reminded me of that film! :) thanks for understanding.😃
Awesome one Zara! 🤗 You have to appreciate me that in spite of my exams im being regular here! *Pats my shoulder* But for the next 3 days i cant be regular if there is any update! :(
Cheers! aok. no worries. thanks for telling.

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#289

awesome update!! khushi dairy writing tells how innocent she is... poor girl she is so afraid of him... arnav what does he expect after shouting at her last night that she would stay there and listen to him ... got to see a little bit of his past... he didnt ever met his father ..buaji trying so hard to make khushi speak... so now its clear that something happen in khushi's past which resulted to mute... only raja knows how it happened ah> cant wait for next part

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud
resvd...
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im officially in love with ur arnav...he sounds damn adorable wen he's frustrated...
loved it wen he actually wanted to ask her forgiveness remembering his mom's words... thank you for liking the arnav in my ff. 😳

so his father died before he was born...uh-huh kinda but yes.
poor guy...lost everyone... but still strong and holding on to those precious memories...
now i know y i fell in love with him...his characterization is amazing zara... hehehe😳
its soooper cute with the way u describe him...thanks

and khushi... whoa!!!
i knew she was just temporarily mute... so buaji asks her talk ah ha! yep. more info in coming update.
hope some other blasting incident akin to the past brings here voice back...
i sooo wanna listen to her banters...
and seriously...the girl needs to cut the poor guy some slacks... he just wanted to apologize...
i laughed wen u mentioned her scrambling away from him like he's after her hide or something...
and there goes his anger again...temperamental ASR...awwiiieee LOL thanks.😆

and as i already said...i love how khushi writes her diary for Raja like how she tells a friend everything that happens...
and Raja n khushi have a super bonding...yippeee... thanks for loving their bond. its a pleasure to write.

Arnav's mom Muskaan...wanna read more of her... she seems such a wonderful hearted person...
all her words that Arnav remembers increases my curiosity to know wat actually happened to her... will be revealed😆
and y did she have to lie to him about his own father... hmmm... maybe not to break his heart or something... yep. your right.

and this Kushal Dadaji... he has some secret too nah... but i like him... though he puts up a hard exterior...he has a soft heart... we shall see.

wow...the entire suspense element u are maintaining sooo well makes me want to read this entirely in one shot...aaahhh!!!!
will wait for the next update eagerly zara...LOVED THIS ONE TOOO

~~~ sam xoxo

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