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Posted: 13 years ago
Has Khushi Been Protected From The Harsh World Or She Knows About It ?! Reading About Her It Seems She's Damn Innocent & Totally Confused 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
i dnt kno i have this feeling that arnav's dad has a past and that is related to khushi sum how
i dnt kno like u kno the waii he reacts wenever he heard khushiz name
like no doubt hez rude to all the servants but then hez extra rude and mean to khushii so ye

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Posted: 13 years ago
she cant speak? 😲 i mean..how..i mean..i dont knw. I didnt expect this. This fic is full of twists and surprises. I love raja..he is quite adorable..i never liked dogs but raja makes me love them..for kushal i dont knw what his problem his. Lets see if arnav apologises to khushi and if yes..then how. Amazing update. Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry this comment came a few days late, been busy!

Wow...I'm loving the concept of this story and I'm so thankful that you PMed the link for this ff!
I love each of the characters and how carefully you have created them,
def not fond of Arnav's dadaji, but it seems like Arnav has great respect for him more than anything and like in the show Nani really wants Arnav to be with a good life partner and what not,
I ADORE~ Khushi's character and her pet Raja (he's adorable if I may add!) and I love how you added depth to her character by preventing her from speaking, is she permanently mute or due to an accident? and if so (if it's an accident,) it seems like Arnav's dadaji might have something to do with it? and more than anything I feel like as the story moves forward Arnav's dadaji is going to be the biggest obstacle for both Arnav and Khushi, and maybe be the initial reason why Arnav may hurt Khushi even more or not be with her since he respects his dadaji dearly,
I feel so bad for Khushi but I'm also glad they're first meeting was like this, cuz Arnav has realized what he's done and he will do something (hopefully) to redeem his mistakes, hopefully that leading to a friendship and later love? :D XD maybe I'm going way too into the story
but I'm VERY excited for this ff and I really hope you do update soon :3 and thank u for the sending me the PM :D

p.s I LOVE the pics and interior u have chosen, they're very pretty! loved the pics!
Edited by SaJanLuv14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohhh, things are making a bit more sense
cant wait to see where you take this
looking forward to how arnav apologises
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJanLuv14

Sorry this comment came a few days late, been busy! Its ok. thank you for your comment!😃

Wow...I'm loving the concept of this story and I'm so thankful that you PMed the link for this ff! no, thank you muchly for your comment. means alot.😳
I love each of the characters and how carefully you have created them,
def not fond of Arnav's dadaji, but it seems like Arnav has great respect for him more than anything and like in the show Nani really wants Arnav to be with a good life partner and what not, Yep your on the right tack about that.😊

I ADORE~ Khushi's character and her pet Raja (he's adorable if I may add!) and I love how you added depth to her character by preventing her from speaking, is she permanently mute or due to an accident? and if so (if it's an accident,) it seems like Arnav's dadaji might have something to do with it? and more than anything I feel like as the story moves forward Arnav's dadaji is going to be the biggest obstacle for both Arnav and Khushi, and maybe be the initial reason why Arnav may hurt Khushi even more or not be with her since he respects his dadaji dearly, I feel so bad for Khushi but I'm also glad they're first meeting was like this, cuz Arnav has realized what he's done and he will do something (hopefully) to redeem his mistakes, hopefully that leading to a friendship and later love? :D XD maybe I'm going way too into the story Yes you areee😆 but thank you it shows your interest. I'm so glad. i have written up all the updates for this FF. Its just a matter of posting them at the right time😆. Thank you so much for liking to story so far.
but I'm VERY excited for this ff and I really hope you do update soon :3 and thank u for the sending me the PM :D welcome!

p.s I LOVE the pics and interior u have chosen, they're very pretty! loved the pics! Yay! Thank you!😃


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Edited by -Zara- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
love how devyani always stands up for khushi, madhumati and aman against kushal
he is so mean
what did arnav realize??
im loving every chapter so far
it's so interesting
loved how raja threw the file in the pool😆
continue soon dear
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoop! 😃
Just finished reading all the four chapters!
Wow, I should thank you for that PM because this is a very intriguing story! It has so many secrets and so many plots that are yet to be revealed.⭐️

So Madhu and Muskaan were besties, and Muskaan gets married to Abhi and has Arnav, but then they both die.
Aww thats so sad why Arnav is always left an orphan? :(
but it makes his pain emote a million times better that way :)

Im assuming Shashi is Buaji's bro here as well, and he's no more too? :(

Dadi is so adorable in this FF. Love her how she equates everyone with herself and doesn't go by the usual status.
What is Dada's problem? He seems too shrewd.
Does he have something against Khushi and Muskaan?
Was he against Muskaan's wedding into the family?
He hates Khushi?
Why?
And why does Khushi have to be hidden from the public eye?
Omg soo many questions buzzingg!!

But Im glad I got this straight- Khushi cannot/doesn't want to speak?
omg that is sooo original and unexpected.
You've woven the story so well since the beginning that not once did I notice that Khushi was devoid of dialogues and that her only mode of speaking was via the diary.
Omg what is that to Khushi's past that impels her not to talk?
Arnav is gonna be sooo guilty after this!
I like how you've stuck to Arnav's character here and portrayed him this way! 😉

And I must say- I love your writing! Its brilliant!~

Amazing FF. Im gonna be commenting regularly here. Please PM me, okay? 😳
I'll buddy you! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Your FF is very interesting! I re-read all the parts and realized that Khushi hasn't spoken once! Wondering is Khushi really mute? I am eager to find out what is in Khushi's past that makes her unable to speak.

Saw the pictures you put up to make the imagery and they are awesome I can really imagine what the house looks like and it is totally different than what I had been imagining when reading the story before. 👏

Kushal's behavior really angers me. I really wonder what he has against Khushi but his character reminds me of how Arnav use to act in the show at the very start.

I was so angry at the women at the start! No one has the right to treat some one badly or say something so mean! No matter what! Just because something is wrong with Khushi doesn't mean she deserves less than anyone else or that she is too low to be accepted by them. 😡

Raja made me laugh, happy that at least Arnav got taught a lesson and really hope Arnav goes and apologizes to Khushi.

And is Khushi's past connected to Arnav's past and Muskaan?

Really really loving your story! And it looks like it is going to get even more interesting soon 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jessicad

Whoop! 😃

Just finished reading all the four chapters! yay!
Wow, I should thank you for that PM because this is a very intriguing story! It has so many secrets and so many plots that are yet to be revealed.⭐️ thank for your comment.😃

So Madhu and Muskaan were besties, and Muskaan gets married to Abhi and has Arnav, but then they both die. not at the same time but yes. Aww thats so sad why Arnav is always left an orphan? :( but it makes his pain emote a million times better that way :) glad you think so.

Im assuming Shashi is Buaji's bro here as well, and he's no more too? :( yep shashi is her younger bro and yes has died. more into that soon.

Dadi is so adorable in this FF. Love her how she equates everyone with herself and doesn't go by the usual status. What is Dada's problem? He seems too shrewd.
Does he have something against Khushi and Muskaan? you tell me.😉
Was he against Muskaan's wedding into the family? don't know😆
He hates Khushi?
Why? you'll have to see why.
And why does Khushi have to be hidden from the public eye? so she isnt questioned and therefore hurt more by peoples comments.
Omg soo many questions buzzingg!! yay!😆

But Im glad I got this straight- Khushi cannot/doesn't want to speak? yep.
omg that is sooo original and unexpected. thank youu😳
You've woven the story so well since the beginning that not once did I notice that Khushi was devoid of dialogues and that her only mode of speaking was via the diary. me being sneeky😆
Omg what is that to Khushi's past that impels her not to talk?you'll see soon.
Arnav is gonna be sooo guilty after this! yep.
I like how you've stuck to Arnav's character here and portrayed him this way! 😉 i try but the arnav in my ff looks up more to his elders and past.

And I must say- I love your writing! Its brilliant!~ oh yay!!!!! thank you saying so.

Amazing FF. Im gonna be commenting regularly here. Please PM me, okay? 😳ok!😃
I'll buddy you! :D


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