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Just came across this story...read it in one go...

So finally the suspense is out...but still Arnav n Khushi are not in any way blood related, right?since Khushi's biological father's Arnav's Bua's husband...(just to b clear)waiting for Arnav- khushi meet...Akash n Payal are a cute couple...so are Arnav's parents dead.???ok, waiting for the next update

interesting and extremely intriguing...

WOW! I missed on so many updates. Read all of them. SO to begin with - Why did arnav change his decision to drop the South Africa trip?? Khushi met her biological father and we know now that he is Ajit's sister's husband. Shashi is already feeling insecure but I loved madhumathi in this the way she handled his insecurity. The caharacters in your FF are very mature. I want to see how how khushi handles the truth? Ajit-Khushi bonding is so warm. And how does khushi know telugu? It felt very near to me as I have telugu roots too. Khushi said she initially wants to meet only ajit's wife. and now she wants to teach payal telugu. Soon I am sure she will be attached to the family before anyone knows it. Waiting for you update. Awesome job

Woww...awesum ff, read all 9 parts in one go...beautifully written.

Chapter 1 - ArHi in Bangalore! What more cud i ask!
I am missing my hometown so much now that u mentioned Mr Anant Nag and ITC Gardenia :(

Chapter 2 - Oh they are in Delhi now...i love the description of her clothes and the confidence Khushi has here..waiting to know the contents of the letter!

Chapter 3 -
Oooh a well educated Khushi - loving it!
PayAsh here also but thank god for small mercies u made Payal have a career and she's good at it too!
Again the mystery behind the letter...she has a job waiting for her back home! Curious as to why she came to Delhi then!

Chapter 4 -
Manu who? No Manu in the character sketch :D
Mystery after mystery!
ChachaJi so he considers himself Shashi's brother..Y is Khushi crying she wanted things to be decided for her right? then again she is thankful , for what? was the pressure back home too much i wonder...oooh waiting for the story to unfold!
Again thankful that BuaJi also has a job - her own botique!

Chapter 5 - Oh nooo ...Khushi knows and we dont know as yet !

Chapter 6 - So there's a Lavanya too LOL
I really like how u are holding on to the mystery and moving the story forward ...placing pawns!

Chapter 7 - Awesome! Ha ha ha ha!
Anjali not a pativrata - u seem to be making right all the flaws in the women in the serial:))))
Women with careers and affairs-approving only coz Anjali is so sad in the serial !
Maybe Shyam's the meek one here? Lets see...
And here, again Shashi meets the cheater spouse!
Good one!

Chapter 8 - Oh wow ... So Shashi is not her biological father and the one who is wishes he had a child like her!
How does Ajit know all this? Hmm Shashi mustve told him. WHy are they all keeping Manohar in the dark then? Waiting for Manorama's entry to understand :)
Good update!

Chapter 9 - Am glad Khushi has her sense of humour around inspite of being shaken like that!
Sounds like loads of fun- Payal scaring Akash with chaste Telugu scoldings.

i realize most of the questions i kept asking have been answered in the next chapters but i was reading the FF over a span of days whenever i had time so i didnt want to edit my comments!

Waiting for ur next update..in both...I will be stalking :D

Originally posted by: preetihere

Chapter 1 - ArHi in Bangalore! What more cud i ask!
I am missing my hometown so much now that u mentioned Mr Anant Nag and ITC Gardenia :(

Chapter 2 - Oh they are in Delhi now...i love the description of her clothes and the confidence Khushi has here..waiting to know the contents of the letter!

Chapter 3 -
Oooh a well educated Khushi - loving it!
PayAsh here also but thank god for small mercies u made Payal have a career and she's good at it too!
Again the mystery behind the letter...she has a job waiting for her back home! Curious as to why she came to Delhi then!

Chapter 4 -
Manu who? No Manu in the character sketch :D
Mystery after mystery!
ChachaJi so he considers himself Shashi's brother..Y is Khushi crying she wanted things to be decided for her right? then again she is thankful , for what? was the pressure back home too much i wonder...oooh waiting for the story to unfold!
Again thankful that BuaJi also has a job - her own botique!

Chapter 5 - Oh nooo ...Khushi knows and we dont know as yet !

Chapter 6 - So there's a Lavanya too LOL
I really like how u are holding on to the mystery and moving the story forward ...placing pawns!

Chapter 7 - Awesome! Ha ha ha ha!
Anjali not a pativrata - u seem to be making right all the flaws in the women in the serial:))))
Women with careers and affairs-approving only coz Anjali is so sad in the serial !
Maybe Shyam's the meek one here? Lets see...
And here, again Shashi meets the cheater spouse!
Good one!

Chapter 8 - Oh wow ... So Shashi is not her biological father and the one who is wishes he had a child like her!
How does Ajit know all this? Hmm Shashi mustve told him. WHy are they all keeping Manohar in the dark then? Waiting for Manorama's entry to understand :)
Good update!

Chapter 9 - Am glad Khushi has her sense of humour around inspite of being shaken like that!
Sounds like loads of fun- Payal scaring Akash with chaste Telugu scoldings.

i realize most of the questions i kept asking have been answered in the next chapters but i was reading the FF over a span of days whenever i had time so i didnt want to edit my comments!

Waiting for ur next update..in both...I will be stalking :D

What Khushi had with Arnav was an Intense and grueling session ..
But then she remembers him right 😆
Poor Shashi, he is fighting his insecurities well !

You get kissed by THE ASR and you dont even remember his face??? Scarlegious...but u are forgiven baby...u were going thru rough time