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Posted: 13 years ago
So that's how you have them meet. Well isn't there a saying "curiosity killed the cat"
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally ASR meets Khushi officially ... 😆
His curiosity has been aroused and investigations are being done ...
If I recall from an earlier chapter ... Khushi does remember her interaction with ASR in the hospital corridor when her mother was sick ...
Shashi is clearly missing his darling daughter ... But has a large heart in letting her go to Delhi to get to know her biological father ...
Loved the update Kalyani ... waiting for the next ...

Edited by Kishmish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry sorry. Was in school. Reserved.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Fab update...👏

Thanks a ton for the PM..i appreciate bringing me in your loop!!!
waiting for the next one...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
at last they met again...
nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update!!!!!!
i was not expecting arnav to be in delhi!!!
hope we get some arhi moments before he return back!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read through your story...its very interesting, I especially like the way Khushi is going about getting her answers and her interactions with Ajit and her father... She seems very down to earth and mature.

her working relations with AKash is nice and poor ASR has caught the curiosity bug.

She has a wonderful relationship with Shashi and Madhumati...

I really really hope you keep this flow in the story, frankly I'm quite tired of Khushi being everyones punching bag..and I really hope thats not the way your heading.

Thank you writing and hope to read more soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
why is khushi calling shashi.. instead of babuji.. even if he is not her biological father.. i would have assumed she considered him father nevertheless..

awesome update.. it is weird that khushi and arnav doesn't recall their first meet.. i thought it was quite intense.. but they will remember in time.. hehehehe..

loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fluffyktau

Just read through your story...its very interesting, I especially like the way Khushi is going about getting her answers and her interactions with Ajit and her father... She seems very down to earth and mature.

her working relations with AKash is nice and poor ASR has caught the curiosity bug.

She has a wonderful relationship with Shashi and Madhumati...

I really really hope you keep this flow in the story, frankly I'm quite tired of Khushi being everyones punching bag..and I really hope thats not the way your heading.

Thank you writing and hope to read more soon😊

Thank you...I did like her initially in the serial as she gave it back good to ASR. All timid and irritating these days, I like this Khushi more 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
arnavz curiosity tells me that he gonna be back in town to india soon...the thing surprises me is that he kisses a girl and forgets her...loved it!

gr88 update...plzz update soon!

m luking forward to next arhiz encounter...n more than that i m still worried for khusi...the girlz been through a lot...lost her mother and then all of a sudden knowing shashi is not her biological dad...poor girl...hope she manages to keep herself composed in this hell turn of events!

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