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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

Kalyaani, really liked the first chapter.

Looking forward to the enfolding of the story. Continue soon!:)

-Sona

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey!!

You are writing and so well!!

I am intrigued. For reasons I cannot even begin to explain.

Keep me posted. This promised to be a great journey!

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Hi,

Interesting story.

Touching description of the thought processes in a hospital environment

You write well. Bookmarked.

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey there!!!

Is this your first attempt in writing?If so, you are doing extremely well...

Would love to read more from you...

I m just curious, any special reason for Arnav being adamant to buy that hospital?( other than the now CMO's rejection,that is)

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Ooohh! Me Likey!! In Fact- Gargee Luuurved the concept and I am waiting eagerly for the plot to unfold. A beautifully written and described chapter Hon- Keep up the great Work!👏

Thank You for the PM!

Cheers!

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Like it?

K, i frikking loved it!!

First attempt at writing? kidding, right?

i liked, scratch that, LOVED the concept

Waiting for the next one =D

Update real queecckkllyyy, or i wont update TIAD and Glass.

Yeah, i blackmail =D

Thankyou for the pm!

Love,

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

You have perked up my interest..interesting concept..will be eagerly waiting as to how the story is going to unfold.

Must confess that the hospital setting did dampen my spirits initially, but the kiss did wonders to it. ;)

Thanks for the pm.

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Captivated! I do hope you continue. Why would you not? I see so much potential for dramatic conflict. I love your conception of Khushi--that feisty energy and brashness. Looking forward to more.

Maya

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Foremost, let me tell you Kalyaani, I am a great admirer of Lewis and I never had come across this amazing quote of his. Loved the quote and thank you for bringing it to my attention.

Now about your write-up...I love your control over words, confident balancing of moods and thoughts and I am so in love with the style of writing you are an owner of...do continue for I would like to see more of it to actually see the essence of your writing passion!!