Love : A Mistake? (RTMC FF) STORY CLOSED

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

i just read the cs,prologue, and first part...n i luved it...

awesome story...plz do continue...

eagerly waiting for the next part

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

lovely part😃

maza aa gya first part me to😛...oh to apni mugs sabki laadli h oh so sweet😛yeh badi maa kitni acchi h mugs ko rangoli bnane ko di😛...or yeh sameer ke iraade mujhe nek nhi lag rhe h 😡abhi se hmari mugs ko line mar rha h idiot😡...but i love mugs in this ud...but bhot short thabada ud chahiye aaj😛

milega?????????😲

or with rt entry😉pls ud soon plss plss plsss

love u n ur story very much😳

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Res this commment is for two updates

First update

Awesome samy . 👏 👏 👏

u wriiten very nicely ...

loved neha's morning style 😆...waking up period ...metoo takes atleast 15-20 minutes time to wake up ( ma bulati rehti h n I m saying Bas 5 minute aur ma n vo 5 minute extend ho jate h )😆

Lovely description 👏

loved the bonding between Neha n Singhaniya family . 😊

n she gave work to made rangoli ..wow 😛 n

that sameer is phraising her beaty ... to hai hi apni neha itni sundar 😃

But agar vo Veer hota to aur bhi jyada ...sabse jyada khushi hoti ...anyways vo bhi hum logo ko jaldi dekhne ko milegi ...😉

shitt who said that ...he must be veer ...he spoil Rangoli I guess

Update 2

He spoil her Rangoli 😲n her 1 hrs hard work ...😭

sab spoil ho gaya

but instead of apology he is scolding her tospread that dirt 😕

But Neha also knw that he will never understand ...She tried butis useless

He said her aweful face 😭 I m thinking of praising her beauty n U Veer .😭

she isthe most beautiful one ..Ekdin tum khud hi kahoge ...I m sure .uski taarif karte karte thakoge nahi 😃

bas muje us din ka intejar karna h 😳

n what's matter of his mom dad ..His father has second family 😲

that might be reason of veer's rude behaviour and her addiction

Loved update 😊

well written 👏 👏

thanx for pm

update soon

love u⭐️

Edited by sonalimurat - 13 years ago

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

lovely ud samy

loved it thoroughly

omg first scene...kya horrible scene tha by god

kya fighting scene...well hmari neha mein veer ki wife banne ke saare gud h...kya straight forward answer diya usne veer

bt why veer hates her??jst becoz she was his employ?

Bchari ki saari mehnat kharab ho gyi...felt bad 4 her

pehle mujhe veer par bhot gussa aya fir pta chala ki wo aisa kyun h becoz of his father

i hate his father...poor neeta...wo bhi kuch nhi kar sakti

thanks samy 4 today's dose

i just loved this story...n excited 4 nxt part

i know there is no need to say bt fir v formality ke liye bol rhi hun

ud soon
luv u samy

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

samy

Nice Dose 😆love it

but if we addict to one dose par day atleast then it would be difficult for u sweety . 😉

then you must have to give update jaldi jaldi 😆

love u

thanx dear for these two doses 😊

Edited by sonalimurat - 13 years ago

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

that was just amazing...fabulous job...

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

reso jii

hum late ho gye 😭

~~EDITED~~

god tension hi tension, herr jagah tension hi tension...

o no, pehle tho neha n ki bilkul nhi banti...

neha n veer ki jodi ka naam tho decide hi nhi hoa..

veha acha h, mujhe acha laga,

so main tho veha hi bolungi...

veha ekdosare se kitna hate karte h,

ek dosari ki jaan bhi lelenge ek dinn...

veer ko dard h,

hmm.. uske dad ki second family of course usse pierce karti h, but herr lover aisa nhi hota veer..

believe in relation n love..

kab tak iss fake life ko jioge...

i noe, deeply, veer is in need of love...

he is searching for love.. yes..

neha degi usse ek dinn...

di aapki language bhott achi h, ..

jagda wala scene mujhe dil se bhott acha laga, wonderfully written...

mujhe lagta h neha ko nhi pata ki veer ka aise rude hone ka reason kya h- .i.e. uske dad ki 2nd family.. yes..yeh bhi neha ko nhi pata hoga..

hope she will help him..

but neha ko tho sameer se pyaar hoga na!..

o no..

rula deta h yeh fact mujhe😭..

koi nhi.. ud soon...lov u

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Shraddhamurat

@Shraddhamurat

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

The update was awsum...

Neha and Veer always fi8ting...their insulting session was fun...veer ye acha nai kiya Neha ne kitni mehnat se banayi ti rangoli...bt veer ne sari bigad di...
Yaha to wo situation ho gayi
ULTA CHOR KOTWAL KO DATE...
Veer k dad ki dusri family...hmmm lagta h veer k is wierd behaviour ka reasn yahi hai...iska b kuch zamela hoga...

Edited by Shraddhamurat - 13 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sonalimurat
samy

Nice Dose 😆love it

but if we addict to one dose par day atleast then it would be difficult for u sweety . 😉

then you must have to give update jaldi jaldi 😆

love u

thanx dear for these two doses 😊

Hmmm I know re , it happens when we like something, we want it on a regular basis 😊 😊

But I am feeling very lucky & I am very happy to know that u all liked my not so polished work 😳 thanx to all sweet frnds.

I luv you all

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

amazing...superb...👏

i knew that veer hi hoga,,,,,,,,,,,and aisa hi kuch hua hoga...bechari ki saari mehenat pe paani oh paani nahi shoes pher dia...

n by god kya fight shight thi,,,,,,,,,,,,maza a gayi,,,,,,,,,,,,,bhayanak thi...

i mean fully serious ho k lad rahe the,...,...and veer tho full too mood main tha neha ki insult karne k liye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but loved neha's replies,,,,,,,,,,,,,,super great...

but what was that veer's father has another family,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,???????...

sry for commenting so late...

continue soon...

luv u...😊