Love : A Mistake? (RTMC FF) STORY CLOSED - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
nice concept sweetie...loved the cs...do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
wo wat a start. 👏
she is getting married

hope v r not gonna get ekta kappor angle of love that is b4 u marry ur true luv u shud b married atleast once 2
someone else and after u divorce ur true love u shud atleast marry again b4 reuniting wid him again. thats ekta
kapoor classified twistng of super love story😆


but i know it won;t happen here
so i gues u r gonna show the story in past n present as in
flashbacks wil dominate further updates
i think after long series of flashback
then in present and our hero will claim her

gues veer must b some where sulking , with bottle of liquor ,
he must be not aware of his feelings
or wud be guilty that he broke her heart.

superb idea for climax ,she wud get maried thinking sammy is in groom's place , it will b veer

as the family is sooper nice (thank god 4 that. me so don't want negative members)
so they might come 2 know the truth act their part.
but this too soon to predict.

btw the pics ridzii gave soopeerr awesome⭐️

u r fab writer👏
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Res 😊
will edit tommorrow .
Prologue is awesome
lovely yar
So hamari Neha ki shadi ho rahi hai 😛
par kisse????
like the way u explain abt her mehendi n preparations going on in surrounding ...
ur description is Awesome 👏 👏 👏
n that letter is is fab ...Very nicely written
main ek assumption batau ...I think 🤔 ...Neha ki Veer se shadi ho rahi hai n vo sammer ka letter padh k use yaad kar rahi hogi .
again meri soch ...pata nahi sahi hogi bhi ya nahi 😆
But ud long tha par hume addat hai ...itne long us's padhne ki ...so u can make it as long as possible 😉 Hamara to fayada hi fayada hai 😆
update soon
love u
Edited by sonalimurat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

nice concept do continue soon.please pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
res wil edit soon...
~~EDITED~~

o me god..
di aapki writing bhott sunder h, i mean language..
bhoot hi awesome h,
simply cool,..
i cud imagine it.. visualize it

tho neha ki shaddi ho rhi h...

voh pata nhi, veer se yah sameer se...

coz jo bhi past tha..
voh tho neha ko bhott jyada pyar karta h..
jan se bhi jyada..
jaann se bhi jayda
..
sachi...
bhott emorional n meaningful tha letter...
mujhe bhott acha laga padhna voh...
sahi main, kya wrds use hoe h..
vry exciting h jii stry..
but kya h na, mujhe rt k ilawa mc k saah koi jhachta nhi..

thoplz, rt ka love, aap sameer se bhi jyada beeter dekhana...
rtmc evergreen..
god yeh jodi tv pr kab aayegi???

di thnx for such a suspencing n sweet stry..
flashback k bhoot scenes aane ki sambhavna..
hmmm...

ud soon di, lov u...





Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
@pranita, she has written this letter to her love nd not her childish crush nd i have mentioned dat they r looking perfect wid each other, do u think ny1 else will look perfect wid ou mugz??? ;) ;)

Originally posted by: pranita1202

<font size="4">wo wat a start.👏</font>
<font size="4">she is getting married</font>

<font size="4">hope v r not gonna get ekta kappor angle of love that is b4 u marry ur true luv u shud b married atleast once 2</font>
<font size="4">someone else and after u divorce ur true love u shud atleast marry again b4 reuniting wid him again. thats ekta</font>
<font size="4">kapoor classified twistng of super love story😆</font>


<font size="4">but i know it won;t happen here</font>
<font size="4">so i gues u r gonna show the story in past n present as in</font>
<font size="4">flashbacks wil dominate further updates</font>
<font size="4">i think after long series of flashback</font>
<font size="4">then in present and our hero will claim her</font>

<font size="4">gues veer must b some where sulking , with bottle of liquor ,</font>
<font size="4">he must be not aware of his feelings</font>
<font size="4">or wud be guilty that he broke her heart.</font>

<font size="4">superb idea for climax ,she wud get maried thinking sammy is in groom's place , it will b veer</font>

<font size="4">as the family is sooper nice (thank god 4 that. me so don't want negative members)</font>
<font size="4">so they might come 2 know the truth act their part.</font>
<font size="4">but this too soon to predict.</font>

<font size="4">btw the pics ridzii gave soopeerr awesome⭐️</font>

<font size="4">u r fab writer👏</font>

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing and captivating start...the letter and its lines are so beautiful...❤️
surely love is'nt a mistake...would love to read further...
continue soon.
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
hi samy
i luv u yr

what a story!!what a start!!what a ud
loved it

wo letter padhkar mujhe bhot maza aya sacchi
kya prologue tha ekdum jhakasss

bt wo letter kisko likha h usne veer ko ya sameer

mera dil keh rha h ki veer ko bt situation to kuch or h shaadi mehndi n all that to kya wo letter usne sameer ko likha h

becoz as u wrote in cs that she hate him to sameer ke liye hi hoga

yeh kya samy u told that this is long update bt kitna chota tha kam se kam hint to dena tha na ki wo letter mugs ne kisko likha h

ab mujhe neend kaise ayegi?

Yeh shaadi sameer ki or neha ki to nhi ho rhi na
pls me behosh ho jayungi itne saare twist n turns
oh god samy pura update dena chahiye tha na
bechare readers ko pareshaan karna galat baat hoti h

precap bhi nhi diya
agar yeh shaadi sameer or neha ki ho rhi h to pls jaldi se divorce kara dena or phir veer or neha ki shaadi...hehehehe maza ayega

just kidding yr bt pls ud soon
luv u n ur story
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Res
will edit tomorrow till then don't like my post.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Interesting prologue di...
Loved your writing style...esp a few paras in the letter...and the last line
Eager to know the circumstances of her marriage
Cont soon.
Lov u...

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