Love : A Mistake? (RTMC FF) STORY CLOSED - Page 6

Thanks dear for liking it

u know Ankita u actually spoke my mind. Even i hav imagined vikrant as sameer while writing it but prefered to write 'assume any1'

Originally posted by: ankitabhatta

Awesume uds...i m imagining vickrant as sameer..bt vicks nd mugs ..naah..nd Rajjy nd Mugs... Awesume..!! jst waitin fr da day fr dm 2 b 2gether...i m imagining mugs in indian dress..nd she luks awesum...RTMC rck 2gether...dis ff iz gonna be awesum lyk d othr RTMC ffs...dis story iz rly beautiful ..u wrote it beautifuly..u r an amazing writer...keep it up..nd waiting fr da nxt Dose..plz ud soon..thnx fr da pm..!!

res...😊

Originally posted by: ridzzi

res...😊

mujhe pata chal gaya...

Res 😛 mera Network bhi sabse Tej 😉 ~~~~~~~~ EDITED

sabse tez hum h ji..

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

sabse tez hum h ji..

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pm k baad sabse pehle hum hi aaye h..

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<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">wow.. acha ud tha.. saady saddy and emotional tha..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">but di aapki language bhott achi kagti h.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">atmosphere bana deti h aas paas...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i lov it...dat way...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">den, veer k emotions as a child, vry well written...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">stry is of course a billow of emotions..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">neha ko attraction h sameer k liye..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">but veer ko ek dum hate karti h bandi.. so wat to do...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">veer ko kuch matt karna plz..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">mujhe veer jinda chahiye...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">wnated veer alive...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">taki neha ka ho sake voh..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">let him too enjoy his part of love...neha ka pyaar... best healing oinment hoga...uske hurts prr...😍</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">wow...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">neha sameer se jyada veer k baare main sochti h..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">yeh notice kiya maine...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">aise cheeze main jayda notice karti hun..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">bunk kiya clsses.. ache bache h.. meri tarah...😆</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">:D</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hmm...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">sameer se connected feel karti h ...🥺</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">veer se aur bh i jyada...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">veer usse itna irritate karta h, tease karta h...phirr bhi usse veer k baare main sochti h..🥳</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">n sammer itne papad bell ta h...tab sochti h neha uske baare main...phirr bhi veer se kamm..😍</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">voh kya h nadi.. ud saddy saddy tha..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">but main kudh ko hamesha khush kr leti hun...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">😊
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<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">ud sson di...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">lov u</font>

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thanks rashu for giving such a lovely comment.

I try to write well but still i couldn't manage to write like the language i have read in other rtmc ff's but thanx sweetu for appreciating it, it really encourage me to write well...

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

u r gr8 ... u have the fastest network 😉 😉 😉

ridzzi "sabse tej" 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

thanks rashu for giving such a lovely comment.

I try to write well but still i couldn't manage to write like the language i have read in other rtmc ff's but thanx sweetu for appreciating it, it really encourage me to write well...

Hye
I read ur ff..
It's fantastic yaar..
Neha is so nice & on other hand Veer is "Bigda Rais"
They both insulted each other so much..
& Veer spoiled Neha's Rangoli..
Poor Neha...saari mehnat bekar..
bt I think there must b a biiig reason behind Veer's bad behaviour..
giv d nxt Ud soon & don't forget to PM me..😊

Ok so this is d reason of Veer's bad behaviour..
His father...😡
Poor Veer...He saw all this wen he was small..wen he was a kid..
it's obvious to b rude I think..
bt yes He shud nt behave like that...he is always insulting Neha too much
If sum1 hav done bad wid u..that doesn't mean that no1 luvs u..
bt I think slowly slowly he'll b fine
& Neha is there Veer ko sudharne k liye..to chinta ki koi baat hi nhi hai..
waiting for d nxt UD⭐️