Love : A Mistake? (RTMC FF) STORY CLOSED - Page 5

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reso jii

hum late ho gye 😭

~~EDITED~~

god tension hi tension, herr jagah tension hi tension...

o no, pehle tho neha n ki bilkul nhi banti...

neha n veer ki jodi ka naam tho decide hi nhi hoa..

veha acha h, mujhe acha laga,

so main tho veha hi bolungi...

veha ekdosare se kitna hate karte h,

ek dosari ki jaan bhi lelenge ek dinn...

veer ko dard h,

hmm.. uske dad ki second family of course usse pierce karti h, but herr lover aisa nhi hota veer..

believe in relation n love..

kab tak iss fake life ko jioge...

i noe, deeply, veer is in need of love...

he is searching for love.. yes..

neha degi usse ek dinn...

di aapki language bhott achi h, ..

jagda wala scene mujhe dil se bhott acha laga, wonderfully written...

mujhe lagta h neha ko nhi pata ki veer ka aise rude hone ka reason kya h- .i.e. uske dad ki 2nd family.. yes..yeh bhi neha ko nhi pata hoga..

hope she will help him..

but neha ko tho sameer se pyaar hoga na!..

o no..

rula deta h yeh fact mujhe😭..

koi nhi.. ud soon...lov u

Originally posted by: Shraddhamurat

The update was awsum...

Neha and Veer always fi8ting...their insulting session was fun...veer ye acha nai kiya Neha ne kitni mehnat se banayi ti rangoli...bt veer ne sari bigad di...
Yaha to wo situation ho gayi
ULTA CHOR KOTWAL KO DATE...
Veer k dad ki dusri family...hmmm lagta h veer k is wierd behaviour ka reasn yahi hai...iska b kuch zamela hoga...

Originally posted by: ridzzi

amazing...superb...👏

i knew that veer hi hoga,,,,,,,,,,,and aisa hi kuch hua hoga...bechari ki saari mehenat pe paani oh paani nahi shoes pher dia...

n by god kya fight shight thi,,,,,,,,,,,,maza a gayi,,,,,,,,,,,,,bhayanak thi...

i mean fully serious ho k lad rahe the,...,...and veer tho full too mood main tha neha ki insult karne k liye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but loved neha's replies,,,,,,,,,,,,,,super great...

but what was that veer's father has another family,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,???????...

sry for commenting so late...

continue soon...

luv u...😊

Originally posted by: tejjo

lovely ud samy

loved it thoroughly

omg first scene...kya horrible scene tha by god

kya fighting scene...well hmari neha mein veer ki wife banne ke saare gud h...kya straight forward answer diya usne veer

bt why veer hates her??jst becoz she was his employ?

Bchari ki saari mehnat kharab ho gyi...felt bad 4 her

pehle mujhe veer par bhot gussa aya fir pta chala ki wo aisa kyun h becoz of his father

i hate his father...poor neeta...wo bhi kuch nhi kar sakti

thanks samy 4 today's dose

i just loved this story...n excited 4 nxt part

i know there is no need to say bt fir v formality ke liye bol rhi hun

ud soon
luv u samy

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Thank you dear, I am feeling really happy that u all lovely ppl are actually liking it...

this is becoz one of our lovely writer samy...u r amazing swthrt

Originally posted by: tejjo

samy next dose kab milega?

sorry dear for not posting d next part yesterday nd today also i won't b able to post it ;( ;( but i will surely post it by weekend.. Pakka

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

sorry dear for not posting d next part yesterday nd today also i won't b able to post it ;( ;( but i will surely post it by weekend.. Pakka

ok will waiting:)

nice update of both parts.loved the nokjhok of neha and veer.sameer is nice guy.update soon

thanks for writing & sharing new RTMC FF
sorry for late comment
beautiful character sketch and pics too
different style of ff
so veers character is spoiled
and neha's goody goody
ohh n she is love with sameer? :(
is it love or just attraction?
neha is veer's employee's daughter
but very much close to their family
and veer hates her whereas sameer loves
the letter is written beautifully!!
but did she is not marrying to veer at end?
will wait for tht!!
veer's father had 2nd family
might be its cause to veer spoiled

Awesume uds...i m imagining vickrant as sameer..bt vicks nd mugs ..naah..nd Rajjy nd Mugs... Awesume..!! jst waitin fr da day fr dm 2 b 2gether...i m imagining mugs in indian dress..nd she luks awesum...RTMC rck 2gether...dis ff iz gonna be awesum lyk d othr RTMC ffs...dis story iz rly beautiful ..u wrote it beautifuly..u r an amazing writer...keep it up..nd waiting fr da nxt Dose..plz ud soon..thnx fr da pm..!!