Love : A Mistake? (RTMC FF) STORY CLOSED - Page 37

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome promo pari...
now i m really feeling sorry for sameer n neha...both were getting punishment for that mistake which they had never commited n sameer yaar he shouldn't have said those heartwrentching things to her, poor neha she is trapped between her love and the horrible truth of her life
he is actually thinking that she is trapping veer just couz she is fed up of him?, he is really out of mind
plz plz plz update soon yaar, now it's getting too much exciting
luv u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks pari...for giving promo .n such a big promo 😃😃
nicely written 👏

really it was very hurting ...when sameer said anything rubbish to her and to about her character 😡
He doesn't have any idea about from what she is suffering ...

plz update soon

waiting

love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
okey,
lets make it a practical reply, den my usual funny ones...

sameer jaise lakda milna koi badi baat nhi h, u see, every second boy is nice...he is nice to u,. respects u if u feed his ego, and be a model girl to him...he wil behave nice...

but the moment u show a little distortion to him to real u, he completely turns to real him...u see, hum thoda change hote h, vo poore change ho jate h...

so, sameer is not so special...bhot milte h uss jaise...its nothing great.
though he is better dan veer...

veer has turned a man, gud guy after committing such a heinous crime, and pushing neha to fathomless churning darkness...i cn neva forget it.. naah!...

so her track wid sameer, em satisfied...

luking forward to veer neha track.

cont soon di, i really enjoy the real touch of life in it
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for promo
sorry for late reply
so sameer broken neha's heart again
and worsen his already worst image!
wht will be reaction of veer & neha towards veer
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part pari...
wow veer waited till she entered in her house...n it made sameer feel jealous,
n mouli kasam se ekdum nalayak bandi h...kisi kam layak nahi...but then why it feels like her this tatic will make neha n veer come more closer to each other n maybe sumwhere it also made sammer away from veer n neha
hope aisa na ho, sab acha acha ho...
update soon...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
haila,...kya ud tha
thanks pari...
Muahhh
res

masttt rapchik n dhamekedaar part

i just loved it

waise ek dhamaka to sameer ke saath bhi hua...jab usne veer or neha ko saath dekha haye mein wari jaun kya scene tha by god

aise scene bade hi pasand h mujhe jealousy wale

or sameer...jalkukdaaa😡hui na jealousy ...i hate u...😡
forget it

acchi acchi baate karte h neha or veer ke baare mein

bt sirf ek scene...that is not sufficient for me..i want more

actually mein kehne hi wali thi ki next update kab milega but then ur note...😕yeh exams kyu hote h...mere bhi exams h...but meine to nhi kaha ki mein update nhi dungi

tum sab seriously padne wale ho na...isliye mere updates ki chutti karne par tulee hue😡yeh sab mujhe bilkul pasand nhi h

ek to itni acchi ud dekar excited kar do phir kaho ki update nhi kar sakte...yeh kya baat hui...mera dil hi 💔 diya

ek month mein ek update bhi nhi milega kya 😲...

mujh par taras nhi aata kya????kitne jalim log h h is duniya mein🥺

arey jalim se yaad aaya yeh mauli to badi hi ka2m@n* nikali
haye 😲veer ko aise dekha bhi kaise usne

uski aankhen nikal ke uske hath mein de dungi...she is ...samajh jao na
veer ko dekhne ka haq sirf or sirf neha ka h

or yeh sameer...kya socha tha or kya nikla nalayak...ghamandi..jalkukdi...or or badtameej or stupid kahin ka

samjhta kya h wo apne aap ko😈bander kahi ka

neha ko kitna humiliate kiya usne...jor se slap marne ko dil kar rha tha...agar mein hoti na kahi story mein to jor se maar hi deti by god

puri family hi aisi h kya...father...n two sons😡koi dhang ka h ya nhi

but i love the teasing part between neha n veer
scene of the day
loved it

next update plsss😃
mujhe pata h jaldi hi milegi
i know😃
h na milegi na

yes i know...mujhe pata tha ki jarur milegi

bye
love u

muahhh😳



Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful...wud love to some veee neha scenes
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update dear...

first mai lovely lovely scene...veer ka neha ko ghar mai enter karte hue dekhna😳😳😳
& un dono ko saath main dekh kar sameer ka jalna bhunna...ganda bacha🤢🤢🤢...

veer & his father's fight...i can feel the pain of veer...how can a person (veer) tolerate his father wid another women...besides his mother...😭😭😭 yeh bhi gande bache(sameer) ka ganda papa..

veer & neha fighting...purane din yaad aa gaye😳😳😃..
is mouli ka to mai khoon kar dungi...agar fir se veer ke paas bhtki to.😡...

& sameer hurts neha badly..feeling bad for her😭😭
amazing update...plzz update next part sson
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Posted: 12 years ago

Kitna bada update, wow!..ekdum dil bada kerke likh tha I feel, gud…aisei hi bade bade update diya kroo.. :D

Beginning-wow! And sweet,..veer waited till she entered house…he is turning a MAN! Yo!,

Hm, sameer ne dekha ye!..n he is turning jealous(I used a straightaway word) JEALOUS. He is a gud guys,..simple guy, too simple, wid actually no distortion-nothing great..but he is better dan veer earliar..ab veer bhi acha bacha bann rha h…

Neh ais turning charming n blithe agn- I missed her dis way!..

So many transformations together- so story is on full rock..

Kuch ho na ho- moral of dis update is- MOULI GETS WHAT SHE WANTS!..:p :/

Itni baar mention kiya apne ki yaad hi ho gya :P.. so plzz, do inform me weneva she wants(by accident) a slap on her face, or punch on her snout or kick on her butt!...i will do it wid great pleasure n not a bit inconvenience :D

The bestest ever visualary effect u hv written in my knowledge-She pressed up against his back and ran the tip of her bright red manicured finger down his arm, leaving a trail of goose bumps in her path. –wid every consecutive wrd a slidshow strted finally being a vdo in flow. I just noted it n found it worth quoting- so doing it :D

Veer has started changing himself for better…he is keeping track of neha… :D hope veer evn saw wat happened in last. Sameer broke neha.

:'(

Dining table scn ws way to gud, reading it ws a treat-specially veer's expressions n act just added to it for best-

Scn ws real-

Veer n father's relation is still a juncture- critically weak!.

And his father saying him to not address his step mom rebuke-ly ws not fair- his hatred to his step mom in justified…I hate her too..

Lovely update- embedding very emotion in it!..very nicely oriented.

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Posted: 12 years ago
agli baar hum jaise andho k liye thoda bada text size mei post krna plz..

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