Love : A Mistake? (RTMC FF) STORY CLOSED - Page 35

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Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first
yipeee

res

very very very nice update pari

loved it a lot

matlab me bata nhi sakti ki mein kitni excited hun is update ko padhne ke baad

purane neha or veer wapas mil gye

actually missed them

kitne dino baad un dono ko ladte hue dekha


n best thing is that ki sirf wo dono the

sammer ...haddi nhi thi bich me

both updates were rocking

n u are always rock pari

oye hoye lift shift...wo bhi veer ke saath wo bhi raat ke 10 baje wo bhi akele

ahem ahem

kya baat

mujhe love ki smell aa rhi h

jo ki bhot jaldi hone wala h

and veer ko usne pyaar se gdnt bhi bola without any jhagda

uff or kya bolu veer is there untill she hadn't entered in her house

oye hoye

lovely n caring boyfrnd ki saari properties h veer me
handsome to wo h hi

or wo mauli wale scene me na muhhe mere shoes nhi mile nhi to wo is part me ugly face ke saath hoti

well overall rocking update

but yeh kya where are u going pari??

few months what??2 or 3 months

pls kahi mat jao hume chodkar plsss

hume itni pyari pyari update kaun dega

mujhe nhi pata pari mujhe update chahiye wo bhi aise wali hi

i don't know anything

😭are u really going???or u r busy??

fir hume update kab milega???

ab toh yeh bhi nhi bol sakti update soon

kattiii

i don't love u

bacchi ka dil tod diya...but loved the updates😕
bye



Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..lovely update..
their bond is becoming strong.. 😊
sweetsanyo thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooo..sachi mei double dhamaka ho gya...

but ye nhi expected tha ki aap ek aur dhamaka de dengi- ki u wont be able to update for long...

veer's excuse- that innovative ghost story- seriously ws a authentic scn indeed...laghter in full role...

megha is perceptive , atleast to her gud frendz...

she is really vry gud in leaving neha behind on tournament venue..

umang- was a fast forward episode- i quite liked it still...neha saw veer matching in umang- n evn praised him-- me vryy happy.

bike ride, man i loved dis prt very much- beautifully oriented- and dialogue just rocked ...

@ VEER- ghost uglier than neha?...HAHAHAHA...kyu nouli ko nhi dekha kya kabhi ??? 🤣

di, i had a big frown on face wen u wer TAREEF-Y-ing mouli..but stilll hiden sarcams made me happy...

n wateva that elocution topic ws- some commision...
uske bare mei tho muje bhi nhi pata h :p


really admiring the way u are trying to bring veer in ur gud books...

heart pains wen i read neeta's prt.. :'(

super duper updates
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PariK


First of all sorry ki I'm replying so late that too after posting new updates 😔 and I assure u Rashu ki Neha won't forgive him just for love... no girl can forget and forgive such a hineous crime jiski wo khud victim hai... no matter how much intense her feelings for that man... u will see Veer repenting too much for his dare... nd he'll beg for mercy but everytime only judicial punishments are not the only way to punish... let's see what happens...


i get it di...samjh aaya ache se what u wanna say...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the updat and thank u so much 4 double updt...cont soon
ridzzi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh that was amazing pari...n thanx for the double dose...🤗
well frankly saying i throughly enjoyed both the parts...i felt so good that veer actually waited for her after the competition...after that incidence he is taking a lot of care of her...
and loved their fight at church and then their retrot-retrot on bike...❤️.
update soon...sry for being late...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting update..

liked it alot..

cont. soon..

thxn for the pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late commenting dear ...
ohh ma...u gave two updates 😃 😃
itni khushi ...hume sirf updates milne par hi hoti hai ...
A big hug for you
Now update ...
Both the updates are very very nice ...👏 👏
like all college day festivals ...in my college also compitions are going on ...n it's fum to participate in each function ...
Neha took part I mean forced to be part of one compition ...
Very good...n veer attended that was wonderful 😛
Neha akeli reh gayi 😭 ...but not to worry Veer hai na
n veer's concern about Neha's well was ... has to be noted ...
he was very anxious for her ...
love the interaction between Neha n veer...on Bike 😊
He was gazing her through mirror...hmmm 😉 what we can called that 😆
he lower his speed of bike ...wahh !! .she smiled in between ...ohh so sweet 😛
okey ghar pahuch gaye ...sahi salamat ...hush!! veer's task has been completed
update soon dear
waiting ...to get all good forever
love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
when will get a ud???
u know na mein bhot besharam hu...😊
itni jaldi kaise picha chod dungi

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
part 17
awesome update!!
so sameer too realise change in veer
ohh acp making efforts! and tht car too lying at rohan's place
liked whole description of sweet memories of arnav of neha's childhood
loved how sid made sooth veer's heart
but who is kamdhenu?
he was thinking of wht?
neha doing suicide!
Edited by shruja - 12 years ago

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