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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#321

wow...

luv dis ud...

u hav descrbd evey charctrs emotions perfectly...

Arnav uncle...Naina aunty..dere helplessness...care...

Sameer's care...his tension 4 her..

Neha...her pain..her difficulties...

Veer his inner conflict..his guilt...him tryng 2 right his wrong...

i luv ur writng...2 gud...

luvd al d uds..spclly dis 1...

Veer tryng 2 do sumthng 4 her...n neha smilng...

keep up d awesum work...

loads of luv..

sorry 4 ot replyng...

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#322

dil garden garden ho gya is ud ko padne ke baad
omg
dnt belive this ki veer stand 4 her n fight with those stupid girls
apne aap ko samajhth kya h wo
idiot girls bdi ayi veer ki gf
shakal dekhi h kya apni kbhi
oh no
neha ne fir mana kar diya...umm
mene socha tha wo uske saath long drive par jayegi
romantic baate karenge dono
dinner karenge
dance karenge in rain
veer neha ko purpose karega
thoda jaldi jaldi ho rha h na pari
chalo choda

bt yeh ud itna superb tha ki mein yeh sb sochne lagi
sry

ud soon
luv u

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

sorry for late commenting dear ...

u know these disaster exams...ufff !! chalo shukar hai khatm ho gayi

now I m free 🤗..pata hai bas kuch hi dino k liye phir bhi .forget it ...ye to chalta hi rahega

Now update...

update was superbbb !! as always 😛

in first part .Acp asked to Neha questionnare abt that night 😲 poor Neha .saari yaade taaza ho gayi hongi ...😭 pata nahi is sab ka anjaam kya hoga

satisfied thing is that .she was attending collage regularly...

and more satisfied thing was Veer asked her about her health😊... his arrogance ...was decreasing...hope so he wuld completely changed himself and Neh's bad fate...unfortunately he is responcible for that 😕

who was that Trikut Mahamaya's ...Veer usko bhaav nahi dalta...veer ne Neha se ekbaar baat kya karli...unhe kya fark padta hai...😡 Bichari Neha...phirse rone ki kagar pe aa padi 😭

Thank god...Neha's Hero Veer aa gaya ..hushhh usne sab sambhal liya 😊

but funny part was that Neha thought he is not feeling well...bcoz first he asked abt her well healh and second was being part of that he actually saving her .taking her side 😆

n last sentence she said to Megha ...

'He seriously needs to take rest. I'm sure he's not well,' said Neha getting lost in the memory of that incident. 😆

Oooh Fist time she smiled after so long 😛 that was very good improvement...and that was due to veer...⭐️

hope to see more n more changes in Neha...and move on inher life .

i know it is not that easy...but not that impposible ..she can do it

update soon

love u

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Thanks for pm
Sorry for late comment
after so many updates after sady sady updates!!
loved veer concerned for neha evenif its out guilt
i don't like sameer
is this mouli consider veer as her possession!
liked the way veer cleared her MU!! and scolded viewers!
and took neha's side!!
liked megha good frnd
hehehehe tht was funny "Take rest"
made veer too confused but neha coming back to normal
Happy half century dear😃

Edited by shruja - 12 years ago

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

hey sweetheart...nice update... read all the updates... wonderful...and amazing... keep it up...

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

plz give us a treat for new year by giving a long update plzzz

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A for Arpita

@A_for_Arpita

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#327

~::~ RT-MC FFs Awards Voting Starts Now ~::~
VOTE PLZ😊

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A for Arpita

@A_for_Arpita

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#328

By God! Kya Mix Emo thi ish part mein :-O

Today Arnav Made Me Cry, Kehte ha ek Raped Victam K Father ka Feelings koi Describe nehi kar sakta! But You Did It Di :-( Hats off 2 You 4 Such a Touchy Part...! Dil bhari ho geya,

Bechara Sameer, Jab apne saamne apne kuch Importent Things k saath hote Badlav ka Reasons samajh mein nehi aata tab Bohat Irritation hota, gussa bhi aataa ha aur bura bhi lagta ha, I Can Understand!

Neha Veer k choti choti adaatoon ko kitne aache se janti ha, kiu na ho? Akher Baachpan ki DOST jo ha,

Kuch Rishte Bohat Spl Hote Hain, Dosti humesa Pyaar se bada hota ha! Sid-Veer ka Rishta bhi kuch aasha ha, Dur rehkar bhi Dono Saath hain :-)

Neha ko waise dekhkar Veer ka Reaction Natural tha but thoda Funny bhi tha :-D

Well Neha ko Veer Sambhal lega so No Need 2 Worry,

OWESOME Part, Do Cont Soon...!

LOVE U DI :-*

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#329

omg its hilarious veer thought she's committing sucide...plzz cont soon...hope veer saves her...ofcause he would..yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat he kya Neha, silly me :)