Love : A Mistake? (RTMC FF) STORY CLOSED - Page 34

Originally posted by: disha15

Ok,so that was one hell of an update. hey Disha, yaar I didn't get u on this 😕 Well written! 😊

kya karu, me thodi mand buddhi hu

Now story is turning the way I m loving to read it evn more..one thing I wanna say.

Your charcters our serious, theme is serious..making me really involved in it.

One more thing I want you to assure me di is…

Di I want really something solid from veer's side wich can make me forgive him…

I want, just lov shudn't be the reason neha shud forget him..

I want u to make him man, respect women,repent….most imp. He shud pay for his horrendous dare dat night.

Kaise hoga? Vo aap jano…

But I want something really justifying di…

Father remembering his daughter's childhood ws really awesome to read.a vry touchy para that ws.

So, neha is searching for him??? Good…but why???

Kitni daring ladki h- baaz nhi aayegi…(but best prt is, she is regaining anew…))

Veer is turning caring…I liked it.

N specially his determination- he wont let her hapn anything now…

Her balance lost- well I knw he wont her hapn anything…but let her atleast slip once..then he will realize to what awesome extent he cares for her….((jaan atak jayegi jaise hi she will slip frm ground))

"how some people changes your mood, delights your heart. How far they may be but their soothing voice and friendly talk makes you feel better."---yes, iss line ka short form h-FRIENDS…. evn evry kind of filthy word for u frm their mouth sounds so gud...

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Thanks to all my dearies for ur lovely comments 😊ur welcome🤗

Part 17:

Next day in college, Neha's encounter near the college gate was the latest topic of discussion in campus and the catch in this was how Veer scoffed THE HOT BABE. The news reached to Sameer as well. He's relieved at first but soon his relief transformed into a small frown. Like others, he couldn't digest the fact that his brother helped Neha. Even he's noticed Veer behaving strangely and now this'' it seems everyone and everything around him has turned out uncertain and somewhat weird.wo to hona hi tha u know what pari mujhe bhot accha laga yeh scene😃

Even Rohan(i hate this boy😡) was shocked to know about the entire incident and felt little bad for Mouli but only little bad'. And much better as, she's always ignored and dumped him just because she keep chasing Veer and today, seeing her dull face is actually healing his bruised ego'. He smirked at Mouli and her gang sitting next to him and moved on in search of Veer who's missing since Morning.

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"That car Arnav'.. that car," said ACP sitting in his chair and dwidelling a pen in between his index and middle finger, "we have to find out that vehicle. If we succeed in finding out about it, this case will get it's path."

"But we have to search for other clues also," asked tensed Arnav to his friend.

"Other than that, we don't have any eyewitness except Neha and she don't remember much of the accuse's identity. We got just that small button from her and that's it. Medical examination won't be of any help in this case. That auto driver don't know what happened before he helped Neha," explained Ajinkya.

"Hmm, you are right. But we don't know anything about it, I mean did Neha tell you anything about that car, how it looked or it's number or anything?" responded Arnav who was thoroughly engrossed in the thoughts, "I don't want to ask her anything related to that incident, because I know it'll only dig my child's wound," said angry but helpless father. Arnav is happy to see that his daughter trying her best to return to her normal life.

Arnav is a tough person and capable of handling anything that comes up to him. Today, the life he's living is made up by his efforts and hard work. He never surrendered himself to any situation, not even when his beloved wife, Swati left him all alone with an infant to face this life. He'd promised her that he will always give the best of everything to their Neha, he'll take the utmost care of their princess and yes, Neha is a princess of their small world. He remembered, how happy he was when he got to know that soon he's going to be a father, how he and Swati used to fight foolishly over the topic that whether it'll be a girl or a boy and how he succeeds everytime that it'll be his doll.

He remembered when he first saw infant Neha, sleeping peacefully & fearlessly in the craddle next to Swati's bed, those images of gorgeous adorable infant having pink and chubby cheeks, having cute little nose, red tiny drooling lips and milky complexion. To see her sleeping there, bundled in pink colored cloth, a tear of happiness escaped from his eye and he rushed towards baby and picked up her in his arms and almost danced in the room and Swati laughed to see her husband going insane. Having Neha in his life was like falling in love again, both with his wife and his daughter. It was like Neha began the world again for them. She is an inestimable blessing and bother of his life. After Swati's sudden departure from his life, he's alive just for his daughter, for his Neha. Baby cries, gurgling laughter and pictures of baby Neha are still afresh in his mind but soon it's replaced by helpless loud cries, uncontrollable sobs, empty eyes and trembling figure of his young daughter. Someone ruthlessly rumpled his child's life and crushed all the happiness of their life. And here he is totally helpless, couldn't do anything''' could do nothing'..(this show a love of a dad for his jigar ka tukda..neha to mere bhi jigar ka tukda h veer bhi h😳,,,,,arnav uncle ki dhukbhari khani sunkar rona aa rha h bye god😭he's so strong man n father to)

ACP Ajinkya got up from his chair, moved towards his friend and saw Arnav's enraged expressions. ACP placed his hand on his friend's shoulder which brings Arnav back to the present.

"Look Arnav, I know what you must be feeling and going through. You will only feel better if that bas***d gets punishment and for that we have to force her to recollect something or the other from that night. More than two weeks are over now. We just can't keep bitting around the bush."

He had a point, Arnav thought. With this thought he go up from his seat, bid a goodbye and walked out of the cabin where his mind is still thinking about how their life took sharp turn and everything just changed for worst.😭

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Breaking the silence of the surroundings his phone shrilled which made him look at the gadget and it was flashing a very familiar name. He pressed the received button and held it to his right ear,

"Hey buddy, Wassup?? I'm so happy to know that you have had saved my number," an exctied, warm and friendly voice came from the other end.

"Oh, so you are still alive. And hell with you and your number," Veer sneered🤣(abhi pata chala kii wo uska dost h dosto se koi seedhe muh baat kyun nhi karta😃)

"Quiet expected welcome from your side but Bro I was too busy in last few days in all these trainings and examinations. I saw your messages and thought to give you a call, once I get some free time," Sid gave an explaination and continued,"but what on the earth reminded you about this brother of yours?"😳i know sid but i want ki veer khud btayae

"There was nothing to entertain, I was getting bored and that boredom reminded me your clown face, so dialed your number just to get some fun," Veer mocked but already feeling much better inside to hear Sid.frnd hote hi aise veer😊

"Oh, that's a blashphemy. This is hard to believe brother that Veer Singhaniya is lacking out of entertainment, the guy who can make hundreds of girls curl around his little finger. What day has come' if you start lacking all this then what will happen with our male community? I can't handle this shock," Sid replied in the same wicked tone and started to giggle.

"Just shut up," said Veer rising to his feet and snapped back, "Wash out your fithy thoughts, 24x7 you think of this only."😉sid bachke raho veer se kahi aisa na ho ki phone me se ek punch maar de

Sid laughed to hear the irritation in Veer's voice.

"Okay enough of it now," Sid said finally, "tell me howz you?"

"It doesn't matter, so forget. Tell me about you and how is our KAMDHENU?" asked Veer casually.what is kamdhenu (girl ka naam h kya)

Sid sighed and continued, "We both are fine here and it does matter. I don't know about other but your welbeing does matter a lot to me," Sid said this with a deep affection and seriousness. After that there was a silence on either side for few seconds.

"What about Sameer? Where is he? I didn't hear him for long. How's he doing?" asked Sid to break the awkaward silence.😡thik h wo bhi kakai bankar baitha h ruth mahal me..huh!😕

"Umm, yeah he's also good," Veer lied but hastily continued, "When you two are coming to Mumbai? Grandma and Maa are eager to see you both."

"Not possible in this month but we'll surely coming in the next month. We are going to come for a long break," said Sid excitedly, "Veer, I have to go now. Talk to you later." And the call ended.

Veer is feeling relieved after this small talk and it always happens with him whenever he talk to Siddarth. Siddharth has this ability to make him forget all the problems and make him feel better. Once again Veer settled down on the dusty steps of the Church and the earlier piercing silence has into the peaceful one. He wondered, "how some people changes your mood, delights your heart. How far they may be but their soothing voice and friendly talk makes you feel better."😃yeah its true some people have the power to change ur mood like mere do anmol ratan rajat n mugdha😆

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Her eyes scanned the parking lot, she searched him in the cantin and in campus area, but he's nowhere. Today also, Neha has come to the college with Megha. She's already feeling better and the time she spent in college keeps her mind busy which helps her to keep all disturbing thoughts away. But now she's completely focused in search of him, "but where is he?"oye abhi se itni bekrari wow so sweet😃

Since morning she's looking for him but he's nowhere. "Is he present today? Whom should I ask? Rohan'. No no' not to him'." Thinking this she moved out of campus as there is no hope to find him in any class or library, so she moved out of the gate. She saw some boys standing there, few of them waved their hands to her to which she returned a smile. Feeling defeated, she thought of going back to library and join Megha with others.

And suddenly, she remembered the old church behind their college. He could be there. She'd visited that place many times but only when she's accompanied by someone, at first she's little hesitant to go but then, she's to meet him before going home today and there is every possibility that he could be loitering there for nothing'.how?/kaise pata chala ki veer church me h...oh dil ki awaz 😳

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Neha was walking along the walls of the college compound, trying to hold the traces of her long silky hair which are blowing with the cool breeze and blocking her vision. Her college bag was hanging over the left shoulder. She looked preoccupied, wistful and enchantigly beautiful.wo to h

Soon she reached to this isolated peaceful place. She stilled at the spot and looked around the area and found nothing. Her hope to find him at this place evaporated.

There were weeds growing in between some cracks in the stone, and the ground in front of the structure was overgrown with the grass. And yet' the magnificent building seemed to exude an unmistakable aura of spiritual power' The door to the Church was barricaded with huge lock. The girl halted in her track and stared at structure and peaceful green surrondings in silence. In the warmth of sun's rays, a cool and scented breeze was playing around the surrounding trees and plants and the wild flowers that were growing abudantly all over the place.very nice description pari😛

"It's beautiful," Neha whisperred to herself.

Then her gaze falls on the relling near the clif. She slowly moved a few steps ahead, her beautiful eyes taking in the haunting grandeur of the place' soon she reached towards the clif from where she got a magnificent view of entire city. Amazed by the beauty of this spot her hands reached to the cold iron rods of barriers constructed to avoid any kind of accident.oho😲

There was an impulsive wish to look down from the clif point and to satisfy this eagrness, Neha slowly climbed on the relling while her eyes still fixed on the brilliant view in front of her. She tightly held the metal rods for support and looked down at the green carpet of nature spread across miles and miles.

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Immersed in troubling thoughts, Veer walked along the lush road that led to the other side of the old Curch and clif point. Afer restlessly wandering through this place for past few hours, he had been returning home in exhaustion, when his steps had turned towards the little path, the clif came into view, after the slight curve in the path, the vision he came across shocked him into immobility.

Neha was standing on the old parapet near the clif point, looking down and bending more towards the other side. The subconscious fears and uncertainties began rising to the heights and faint ripple sign of danger darkened the air.

He stared at her frame; dangerously so close to the accidental point. He couldn't find his voice as the horror struck to him.His insides turned into ice, Veer turned chalk-white and staggered a little backwards. For a moment his brain went numb and couldn't think of anything to stop this horrible unfolding scene.kuch to karo yr

He wanted to rush and pull her away but it seems his legs glued to the spot and he lost all his strength to act wisely. What is she being upto? No'. no'this can't happen. She can't do this. She's trying to end her life, because of me. Whatever I've done to her is the reason behind all this. That day I lost my senses and spoiled everything but not today. Nothing can go wrong with her anymore. I won't let it happen.yipeee hero ki dhansu entry hone wali h wah kya baat h😳

Brushing his fear aside and gathering all his might, he looked at her and thought of shouting but No, if I shout she may loose her balance and'..

Finding some movement in his feet, he strode forward as quickly as possible to stop her from committing such blunder.

As he reached near her and raised his hand to caught hold of her arm, Neha spun around and her gaze collide with his frenetic one. Taken aback to find him few feet away as she was compltely oblivious to his presence

"What the hell are you trying to do?" he shouted. His voice was hoarse and completely shaken.daant diya bacchi ko

His sudden shout startled her to the core that her hold loosened and she lost her balance.😡awwwab kya hoga bachao usse koi to bachao yr