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Rafid

@Extinct

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Differenr .. Brilliant job ... Loved it :D

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purplelove

@purplelove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

👏 Brilliant OS. Yes, completely different and unexpected. It was very well written. I felt so bad for both of them and at the same time wanted to scream "why didn't you at least try". Nice creative piece of writing dear. Great Job! 👏

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

WAOOO very strongg feeling bad fr Payaash

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Lovely os
Thanks for the pm

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Feels good to read something different once in a while...

Well I really don't care for Payal and Akash in the show anymore, because there's hardly anything left to their characters...but this was really good...I loved how you touched on what Payal feels, how it feels to be neglected by your own husband...I feel for the poor girl

Hopefully they will develop the characters and actually give them a backbone.

Edited by Arhi-Sarun - 13 years ago

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

wow - first story just about Payal n Akash. really enjoyed reading it.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Good Concept Something Different

I Liked It How Payal And Akaash's Marriage Is Not All Bitter Sweet

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Caroline_arhi

@Caroline_arhi

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

WOW, brilliant:)

No words!

Thanks for the PM<3

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Loved it !!!!!
It was Sooo different !!!!!
Akash and payal !!!! Loved how you have written it from payal's perspective !!!!!!
Superb !!!! Thnx for the pm !!!

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ms_1991

@ms_1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

i actually loved the last line of the story..but otherwise..yu tried sumn different..and its quite decent story..since akash has always been a goodie goodie charectar kinda stuff to think him as negative..but tht has nthn to do vt yur story..great work

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