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Aashifa

@curledup

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Posted: 13 years ago

mwhahha!

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Its weird how I saw your name, saw OS and was like click! I am going to pray Magrib now :D I shall be back in a jiffy my love 😳

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

😛

Wow...different it is...but very consistent to their characters. Well done...especially the end...when he did what he thought was expected, and she accepted without questions...cause that's so like Payal. Again Khushi becomes her inspiration...hoping she goes after Aakash and tells him what happened, why, and why it would never happen again.

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KatnissEverdeen

@KatnissEverdeen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

I have heard and seen abstract art , similarly abstract OS!!!

Not everyone understands it but whoever does, they really know what it stands for.

Brilliantly written! the hollowness of Aakash and Payal's relationship clearly visible and the ending! summing it up to show how neither of them tried to do anything about their love.

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IPKKND team may be or may not be doing anything with Payash track but you make it a point to write about them.

I see your frustration! . Relax , nothing can be done about it as of now. Hopefully the team realizes it sooner and does something about the parallel leads.

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Everyone in the forum is kind of disturbed by lots of rumors and also the way the show is being dragged making it hard to digest how IPKKND has changed over the period of time, a request - Can we get something fun and happy to read from Nayika please😊,so that it spreads happiness around!!!

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 13 years ago

Its totally different from what you usually write. You know that I love whatever you write. But I couldnt somehow relate to this one 😔 Of course it is really very well written. No doubts. I guess there is some problem with my brain [;(]

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I loved it!! I loved how it was between Akash and Payal. I haven't seen many Os's like that. I especially loved the end. I hope Khushi is able to clear things up between them!! Thanks for the PM! 😃

Edited by --Aartzz-- - 13 years ago