Bewafa Hum Nahi The (RT MC) ff - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
super nice yaar...i mean too good...
so sparsh's prince charming's name is akshat...nice name...Mr. Adonis(Akshat)
aman n asmik r twin brother but their behaviour are far more different from each other...i really luv aman
n both sparsh n akshat are not able to recognise each other...thank god otherwise god knows what will happen
n sparsh is full latoo on her Mr. Adonis...ha lage raho...but he was hurt...that asmik is a b***d...liked akshat's attitude
update soon
luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...
nice name Akshat,...
pls do cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
like aman...he seems to be always there for him...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really mst update...
Luved aksht's attitude... D way he toked to dat jackass...
Aman is soo sweet... Chlo koi to hai jo akshat ki care krta hai...
Luved der conversation...
N aisa kya kiya tha sprsh ne yaar...
Hope get 2 know soon...
N princess sprsh drooling over HIM... Wooow...
Amazing ud... Thnx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
o ma god..
hence proved...
be her a princess, but she is a girl first...
not a girl..
now a grown up girl..
evn more particular, young lady ...
fine lets jump to strt again..
well last scene se meri nazar hatt nhi rahi h,..n sparsh ki akshat ke butt se...
but cmnt tho pore ud ka dena h na..

ud se yaad aaya,
akshat nice name..
jahan takk meri brain ki knowledge jati h, it means rice...rice grain..

naam acha h...really gr888 choice di...

sparsh n akshat...

1) spashat.
2)aksharsh
3)spaksh
4) yah phirr akspar..


ma fav ws 3) spaksh...

hmm..
aman.. sachi main, he is complete reversal of his bro...
ab i m sure, dat twins frm birth, need not b twins frm behaviour..
he is a lovely creature.
n may be a only royal wid heart in chest...which cn feel feeling n pain of others...

aman's called a weakling in family..
well i highly object ma lord...
coz, humbleness is a strong behavior...

oops! ab yeh aunty kaun h...
sure koi badi bemaari huongi..
isliye tho asmik ka bhi mouth shut ho gya..
finger crossed...

jack ass...
dono ne kaha..
sooperbo co- ordination...

d things afta which i badly want to kill anyone is..
wen i m hurt, its bleeding.. n dey ask- is it hurting.. ???
of course yaar..i have a nervous system, dat too working properly..

second thing is,
wen phone rings in b/w ma sleep, n caller asks- are you sleeping..

i mean, u idiot, afta ruining ma sleep n waking me up, u r asking dat i m sleeping..
is it ma bhoot talking to u on phone... :P

aman calls him little one..

oyieee!!..
velly velly cho chweet name..

sparsh cried bitterly in frnt of aman..
agree, she is guilty, but aisa hoa kya tha yaar????
i mean, aisi kya mis- understnding h ki ye sab itna serious ho gya ki askhat is nt ready to leave her alive...

one thng i noticd here ws- his family is rude to him too.
u hv written...evn his family use those dirty wrds fr him...

poor soul,
feeling evn dose wrd of solace frm aman to embarrassment...

true said,

environment play big role in ones mentality...

sparsh, yeh baby,
u r a royal...
a decent royal..
but tum dekh lo, koi nhi, tumahri hi banda h voh..
u cn see.
humne balki tumne dekh liya h,
but hum kisiko nhi bolenge ki princess sparsh has her eyes on.. ahem ahem..

finally dese magical wrds comes to dis ff also...

di, remember dem???
wait, u said one thing more..
god, asmik treat him brutally den a wild..
he is freak...

iss pr tho main domestic violence ka case kerr dongi...😡

well iss ud main maine asmik ko galli nhi di..
o come.. main royal nhi hun, i dnt dont hav to b decent n all n all..

main tho haq se, chilla chilla k galliyaan dongi iss asmik ko,

suno,..

K*TT#, H@R@MI...S@@L#,..CH@TUIYE... M@@ K! @NKH,,..B@H#NCH%DD... M@D@RCH%DD,,,...

di, maaf krna...
but mjhe unn logo ko gaaliyan dene main sharam nhi aati jo insaaniyaat(humanism) ki limit na samjte ho...

d way u said abt his injuries..
like, he is rewarded by new ones, not wid a break of healing the previous..

god, i tell u, iss KUTT# NE Akshat ka kitna blood waist kiya hoga.. den, fibrinogen, thromboplastin waste kiya hoga...

really...
hum biology students ki biology kabhi picha nhi chaodegi..

lov u di,
..

aap ud ker sakte ho jab aap free ho..
but mera cmnt shyd late ho jaye..

bye, tata
phirr milenge, chalte chalte




Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for update n pm
awesome update!!
sparsh is not ur possession u idiot!!
and wht prob he have with mr. adonis?
thank god aman is there to save him!
but who is this aunt chitrangada? asmik scares abt her! heheheh
so Mr. adonis name is akshat nice name! and aman is caring for him!
and wht sparsh done with akshat? aman knew it!!
ohh our princess drooling over her mr. adonis!
princess shouldn't do tht dear
but u can as ur heart say it
go on!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry 4 replying late..
ud was suprb..
So finally we got Rajat's name
hmm.I lykd d name "Akshat"
it's perfect..
& Aman is so caring & nice human being..
lagta hi nhi ki Asmik aur aman r bro..

waiting 4 d nxt ud...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

sooperb part


love the new prince


adonis has a name .just loved it
eager 4 next one

Thanks prani😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

Wow long comment😃

res 😃
me 2nd

sorry 4 late comment little busy with assignments n presentations...i know re...i had my semester🤢...

lovely n awesome ud
it getting interesting day by day...thank you

i love u pihu...love u too riya
what a story it is...

I hate ashmik like hell...everyone does...jitna chaho gaali do😆...
k@m!n@
bas...d
stupid
nonsense
idiot

or

or

abhi yaad ni aa rha h

kaise baccho ki tarah mere rt ko dant raha tha

oops sparsh ka prince charming

mera bs chalta na to shoes n sandals marti uske face par...kabhi sparsh khud hi maar degi...

uske face ka structure change kar dungi if he hurt her prince charming...won't matter...he's always ugly...

akshat nice name

nice choice pihu...mujhe is story ke characters ke naam bhot acche lage really...aww thanks


aman is vry nice guy
awww so sweet...glad u liked him

he cares akshat alot

i liked his nature...sweet n simple

bt rt ki to baat hi kuch or h...yup

bt pihu thoda romance dalna chahiye tha na...oops thoda der lagega but ajayega...

bt koi ni agle ud me dena ok

or yeh kya dono ne ek dusre ko pehchana bhi nhi h

oho to love story kaise aage badegi

i love this ud
cont soon

luv u...luv u too
muahhh

me in blue
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sultanahabeeb

awww very nice up dear but they dint recognize each other till now

so his name is akshat ,wow nice name for our prince charming
thanks for pm nd up next as soon as possible

Thanks sutton😃

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