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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for update after long time between ur studies!
Awesome update!!
loved writing style
this prince asmik is annoying very much!!
just hate him! he is calling poor guy as pet!!
but don't even deserve calling pet! but galli ka kutta!!
y did poor princess din't got any 2nd chance!!
her memory of her prince charming was beautiful!!
loved the way u described it! in flashback in n out!
ahha he hesitate to even gift her flowers!
n they remind him beautiful memories before he being sold
poor boy lost his childhood being slave with royals
but wht wrong she done with him?
ohh she met her princes charming
but how could she din't recognise him!!
ohh n he grew up handsome
tht she couldn't take out her eyes on him Mr.Adonis
i will not call him tribal but prince charming
but u reminded him his old frnd
but as he said royals will be royals
n tht royalty bounce in u tht u even din't thanked him saving from fury once again! din't it reminded u prince charming of urs?
and wht marks on his hand? did it is sign of punishment years before?
some one kill this prince asmik always behind prince charming like dog!! thank god his bro is good person!
but u made use of flowers beautifully!!
now rashu is not here!!
i made this creation with long before with pic taken by my frnd
when she visited valley of flowers!
giving message for my buddies!

first of all...beautiful creation di👏...but u have always been perfect on making siggies and vms⭐️...
loved the lines u used...that says all about this flower...
i'm missing rashu too...
thank u for liking this part di😃...
the marks of punishment are not years old...they are fresh ones...
will be more clear in upcoming updates...
luv u di...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Princess Sparsh was his most valuable and beautiful prize he possessed...only he can consume her or crush her whenever he would want it himself but would never tolerate if that filth lay an eye upon his possession.

That mutt have done it years ago and got his most deserved reward from us.But when has he learn from his punishments?...Even after all these years MY betrothed comes to visit us and all she asks about is someone as insignificant as HIM!

Striding inside the drawing room of the palace Asmik screamed at one of his unfortunate servants in seething hatred. "WHERE THE HELL IS THAT MONGREL?DIDN'T I TELL YOU TO DRAG HIM HERE WITH YOU?"

Before the baffled man could mumble some stammering apology and arouse the older prince's anger farther scales higher,he was saved by the presence expected by the prince.

"Your majesty summoned me?" the six feet two inches tall boy with exceptionally handsome visage stood elegantly at the door looking straight in the eyes of the prince with a cold steely gaze asked with a mock obedience.

"Bow your head down and don't you dare look in our eyes.Seems like years of teaching is not good enough for you,is it?"Asmik spat those words at him loathingly,then turning back to the other servant shouted "You are still here!GET OUT!!"

Casting a worrying clance towards the young one he slowly retreated from the room slowly.

"Do you have something real important business with me or you just wanted to give me your crap kindergarten lessons on 'how to behave with royal a**holes'?"the younger man asked impatient and visibly disgusted.

"Hold your tongue,son-of-a -b**ch.If I didn't have to warn you about something,I won't have bother about talking to you...Stay away from her.Do you hear me?STAY AWAY FROM HER.I feel nothing but disgust whenever I have to see your pathetic face."Asmik snarled menacingly.

"First,I have no idea who or what the hell are you talking about and second,I feel the same way about you,your majesty."he replied in an even tone never taking his eyes off the older prince in front of him.

"You trash!How dare you!"it was now impossible for the prince to control his rage and hatred anymore when the servant kept continuing to be outright disrespectful.He raised his fist to strike him only to be interrupted by another royal entering the room.

"It's so easy to hurt someone who has no way of striking you back,isn't it?If you had been man enough you would have freed him from his obligations and faced him...but then I always had doubts about your masculinity."the younger prince taunted with mock sympathy standing beside the boy whom he never let be offended.

Tearing his gaze from the object of his upcoming assault,Asmik looked at his brother plain irritated.

"Ah...Here comes the weakling of our family lecturing about masculinity.How can I forget that you would be here to protect your favourite heart child!Tell you what brother...I know how to handle bast**ds like him far better than you do.So,DO NOT INTERFERE...and show some respect to your elder sibling."he said in a ominous tone.

Aman had to roll his eyes at the last two words.Looks like it will never get through his thick head that we are twins...It's a good thing we are non-identical though.I would have hated to look into the mirror if I had his face.

"You can flaunt your so-called superiority in front of me,but I don't think you can do it in front of aunt Chitrangada.She won't like to see him battered when she returns tomorrow."he warned Asmik hoping he would consider it and leave the young boy alone.

The conjured image of the furious queen in his mind was something Asmik never wanted to become a reality.She had his uncle wrapped around her little finger since they had been in an affair before their marriage.And a ticked off uncle was certainly not a good thing.

Finally sighing in frutration and radiating abhorrance he glared at the duo and turned to leave the room after muttering towards his twin brother scornfully "I can't believe we shared the womb of the same mother for ten months."

"Neither do I"was Aman's answer to the departing prince.



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After keeping the flower in it's safe place in the diary,her mind wondered of some strange events occurred that day.

I don't understand what prompted my family to choose Asmik for me.The way his eyes were tracking me from head to toe...for some reason I felt like my skin was crawling underneath his gaze.And then he used some vile languages for a stable boy...my family never insults the ones who work for us...

Her thoughts shifted to the enigmatic boy.

Speaking of the stable boy...was it HIM?...the one who saved me today?He looked so much like prince charming.But Asmik confirmed he's not HIM.Still the resemblence was striking enough.He used to be so cute back then...even I would kill to have some of his exotic features that could easily outshine a girl's beauty.God!...I stupidly made that comment before prince Aman.

Then it struck her mind as she thought of the younger prince who she always trusted and admired like her own brother.Aman can help me.He'll know where prince charming is now.

She excitedly got out from the guest mansion and headed towards the main palace in a swift motion leaving behind some dumbfounded maids.



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"Jackass!"both Aman and Akshat voiced in unison once Asmik was gone.

Turning his attention towards the younger man who was quietly enjoying the interaction of two princes Aman's hard warning stare melted into an affectionate and concerned one.

"Are you okay,Akshat?He didn't hurt you before I entered,did he?"Aman asked the boy worriedly concern colouring his voice.

"No,he didn't."Akshat replied though in a casual tone, it was said with a genuine respect "Who would have thought mentioning the queen-b**ch would become so handy oneday!"he added thoughtfully.

Aman chuckled at the last comment about his aunt.

"Where have you been today,anyway?I didn't see you in the palace for once."he quered Akshat curiously.

"Nothing interesting...just taking care of the animals.And then playing the knight-in-shining-armour for a damsel-in-distress."he shrugged indifferently,his mind wondering about the haughty royal.

If I didn't know better I would have thought she was HER.She looked so much like her...smelled so much like her...the lustrous mane of ebony curls cascading down her shoulders to her waist...those large dark black eyes...just like hers used to be...lethally beautiful.But she can't be HER...she better not be or I may not be able to resist the urge to kill her with my bare hands.

"Damsel-in-distress?"Aman's curiosity was now laced with worry.I hope he didn't meet Sparsh.Seeing her again will be digging those old wounds of his which are still as raw as it had been seven years ago.He does not need it now.

"Yeah...an arrogant and very much spoilt girl.Leave it."he murmured hoping the prince would stop the discussion then and there.

Catching the hint Aman asked "How are your back and hands now?Does it hurt much?"

He knew it was a silly thing to ask because painful welts caused by barbed whip never heal in one day.He had seen it too many times not to know it.And every time it tore right through his heart to see the boy he had known since he was so little and so lost and never failed to arouse the protective stance in him being at the recieving end of that kind of assault.

"A little tender.I don't care.I'm used to it,anyway."Akshat stated nonchalantly.

Aman knew very well what 'a little tender' meant,whenever it came from the younger man in front of him.It had to hurt like hell.He took a mental note.

Folding his arms across his chest he sighed in exasperation.

"But I do care.I guess you didn't rinse the wounds with antiseptic like I told you to do."It was more of a statement than a question.

Feeling like a nursery kid caught by his principle,he hung his head without giving the obvious answer peeking at Aman ocassionally with the most innocent expression only a baby could muster.

"No,you don't...Don't you turn those 'beaten puppy dog look' on me,little one."Though he said those words warningly,his expression was visibly softening.

Akshat could not help rolling his eyes whenever the prince used that particular nickname for him.After all these years of being called most of the filthiest names by his parents and then by the royals,a term of endearment only embarrassed him.

He replied defensively "It stings and would you stop calling me that?I'm not 'little' anymore.I'm only four years younger than you."

Aman had to smiled at that though it was a sad smile and soothed the boy touching his shoulder "Well...antiseptics are supposed to sting.And I don't want your wounds to be infected...so come with me,little one,let's take care of your back and hands too."he added in a no-nonsense tone.

He could feel the shoulder muscles of the younger man getting tense under his touch.

At least he let me touch him.He thought grimly.
But who can blame him for shying away from others' simple comforting touch after all he had been through?Damn it,Sparsh...I know you felt guilty when you cried your heart out in front of me that day.Only if you had thought twice before you accused him of something he would never do to anyone,he may not have to loose something even a grown-up would fear to loose let alone a twelve year old kid.

"But I feel fine,really."Akshat could never get used to someone fussing over him.

"Yes,little one.I know exactly how 'fine' you feel."Aman brushed aside the other's resistance,dragging gently him by his arm.

Knowing it was of no use of trying to stop the younger prince,he let himself being manhandled heaving a frustrated sigh.Only Aman had the right to that.

"Okay,papa...I'm hurt and I can't wait for you to cuddle me.Happy now?"he scowled murmuring under his breath drawing a chuckle from the older man as he was being dragged from the room.

He didn't have much time to look back at the person entering the drawing room,as an amazingly soft slender arm brushed past his own.




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Sparsh turned to look at the person who lightly collided with her by her arm and immediately recognized the dashing persona who saved her not along ago by just a glance at his profile.Another man...dressed like a royal...of the same height of his was ushering him out of the room while coaxing him about something.

Her concerned gaze subconsciously turned towards his bloodied wrist and trailed to his forearm upto his arm till where his sleeve would allow.She had to gasp in utter surprise and concern.There was numerous cuts,bruises and abrasions on his forearm and arm.

Dear lord!What kind of monstrous animals Mr.Adonis deals with to have damages like that?How did I miss that first time?She wondered incredulously and came with a quick,obvious yet embarrassing answer.

Because I was too busy gwaking at his face with my mouth hanging open like a fool and admiring his perfectly sculpted V-shaped body,and strong arms and long sexy legs and...

Her eyes dirted towards the retreating figure who was the subject of her muse and trailed from his back downwards...

Don't look at that,Sparsh.Decent royals do not do that.A small inside her mind warned her.

No one is watching anyway.Besides it is hard to resist to look at it.Just one look won't hurt.Another mischievous part of her reminded her wickedly.Living seven years in foreign to complete her high school graduation,she was able to shred most of her indian naivite and shyness at the obvious attraction and the open admiration towards opposite sex.

Agreeing with the second voice the curious gaze shooting from her large dark eyes rested on his butt.A tiny twinkle of mischief appeared on her beautiful eyes.




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Edited by prahelika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sooperb part

love the new prince


adonis has a name .just loved it
eager 4 next one
Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆...how do you always manage to be here even before i start sending pms?😲...superfast by god...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😃
me 2nd

sorry 4 late comment little busy with assignments n presentations

lovely n awesome ud
it getting interesting day by day

i love u pihu
what a story it is...

I hate ashmik like hell
k@m!n@
bas...d
stupid
nonsense
idiot

or

or

abhi yaad ni aa rha h

kaise baccho ki tarah mere rt ko dant raha tha

oops sparsh ka prince charming

mera bs chalta na to shoes n sandals marti uske face par

uske face ka structure change kar dungi if he hurt her prince charming

akshat nice name

nice choice pihu...mujhe is story ke characters ke naam bhot acche lage really


aman is vry nice guy
awww so sweet

he cares akshat alot

i liked his nature...sweet n simple

bt rt ki to baat hi kuch or h

bt pihu thoda romance dalna chahiye tha na

bt koi ni agle ud me dena ok

or yeh kya dono ne ek dusre ko pehchana bhi nhi h

oho to love story kaise aage badegi

i love this ud
cont soon

luv u
muahhh
Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for your comment riya😳...though i have to admit this update has no flashback romance *sigh*...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww very nice up dear but they dint recognize each other till now
so his name is akshat ,wow nice name for our prince charming
thanks for pm nd up next as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
nd iam the 3rd one hmmm not bad for me

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Posted: 12 years ago
yaye me 4th

Hayeee what an update Prince charming or Mr. Adonis ka naam Akshat hai wowww 😳
Sparsh ❤️ Akshat but Akshat 🥺 Sparsh 😭 😭 plz bring them together and clear this cloud of misunderstanding or whatever... it's hurting them like hell...

And u deserve a 🤗 for giving this surprise but pleasant wali update...

I like Aman, he's a nice nd genuine fellow unlike his 🤬 brother...

Thanks for such a lovely update, well plz plan one pleasant wala encounter of our Snow white and Mr. Adonis soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update
they didn't recognize each other
loved the interaction between akshat and aman

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