Bewafa Hum Nahi The (RT MC) ff

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
nice update.

Thank you ruchi😃

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piuli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909
awesome part <3

Thanks di😃

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piuli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: shruja
thanks for update n pm
awesome update!!
sparsh is not ur possession u idiot!!
and wht prob he have with mr. adonis?
thank god aman is there to save him!
but who is this aunt chitrangada? asmik scares abt her! heheheh
so Mr. adonis name is akshat nice name! and aman is caring for him!
and wht sparsh done with akshat? aman knew it!!
ohh our princess drooling over her mr. adonis!
princess shouldn't do tht dear
but u can as ur heart say it
go on!!

Thank you di...😃

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piuli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi
Sorry 4 replying late..
ud was suprb..
So finally we got Rajat's name
hmm.I lykd d name "Akshat"
it's perfect..
& Aman is so caring & nice human being..
lagta hi nhi ki Asmik aur aman r bro..

waiting 4 d nxt ud...😊

Thank you swati😃

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piuli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Epi-4

The man did not seem to stop drinking for a second the whole night.He wanted to drown his anger and frustration of loosing in yet another gamble in the alcohol.

"I was so close to winning.How the hell did I loose?"he grumbled to himself in his drunken state.

Then he groaned in fuming rage as he caught the sight of the tiny frame of the smiling four years old boy."That evil spawn is laughing at my loss!"

Oblivious to his father's explosive mental state,he bounced through the door like a little bundle of nervous energy holding something seemingly very precious gently in between his tiny soft palms.He approached near his father excitedly as his small chubby face lit up with an expectant grin.

"Father!Look at this.Brought fairy for you"He said nudging his father's arm repeatedly to grab his attention.

Disappointed as the man roughly shoved him in stead of looking at the fairies he approached again "Father!Father!Look here!Look!I searched in bushes and found fairies."

Doesn't he ever shut up?The man thought bitterly as anger kept swelling up in his mind.

"Be quiet boy...go play with your sister."He growled in anger.

But his warning was lost on the little boy as he opened his palm to free the fireflies in front of his father.

The last straw of patience in his father's mind snapped as the fireflies kept looming before his eyes.

A vicious backhanded slap rang across the child's delicate cheek as he lost his balance due to the sudden heavy blow.His right temple impacted with the sharp edge of a chair with a sickening audible crack before he fell on the floor and lay sprawled in shock and dizzying pain.

The man curled his fist for another attack on the hapless kid only to be stopped by his daughter's terrified scream who just ran into the room hearing the commotion.

"Please don't hurt him anymore father." the sobbing eight year old girl pleaded as she sat on her knee before her semiconscious brother cradling his tiny body in her arms as gentle as possible.

Tears of blinding pain along with the blood from the deep laceration on his temple ran down his rosy cheeks as a soft whimper escaped his swollen lips.His breathing ragged and rapid coming with short gasps.

"How could you do this to him?He's my brother."she screamed at her drunk father...at his injustice.

"He's nothing to me or your mother.He's just a piece of trash my my old father found in God knows where and we have to feed him for no reason.He's not your brother either."He snarled in insatiable rage and hatred.

The little boy moaned and kept his mouth open in an attempt to draw air in his starving lungs as breathing seemed to difficult with every moment.His eyes glzed and unfocused.His sister brushed the hairs from his forehead in a soothing gesture.A purple bruise was forming at the right side of his forehead.

"Shh...little one.I'm here to take care of you.Nothing bad is going to happen to you again."She crooned the hurting child knowing the last promise was empty.Bad things never stopped happening to her baby brother.

"Worthless garbage...now my old man is gone...I'm gonna dump him on the palace.I doubt they'll give me even a penny for this useless scum.I wonder how many bottles of wine he will worth."Those were the last words he heard from his father as his world shrank into a pinpoint before fading into darkness as his limp body rolled in his sister's hand like a rag doll.

He woke with a start gasping for air and profusely sweating.He looked towards the window.It was midnight as usual and he knew his quota of sleep was over for that night.He was thankful to the stars for reliving a relatively less horrible day of his life.

Sighing in resignation he got up from the couch and went out of his wooden hut.Reaching near the fence where the stallion was standing restlessly he unlocked it and ran his hand through the hairy body of the horse and patted it.Hey Fury,I'm here again.Guess I'll never have my beauty sleep in this life.He thought sarcastically.

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He was a little surprised when he heard the soft knock on the door.No one bothered to come in his room and specifically not the crack of the dawn.

Must be someone with a real urgency.He mused.

After making sure he was at least presentable enough,he opened the door and was mildly surprised to see the pleasantly smiling visitor.

"Good morning,prince Aman."she said calmly.

"Good morning,princess Sparsh.Uh...may I know what are you doing here this early?"he asked sporting a gentle smile and shifting from the door to make room for her to enter.

After fidgeting for a few seconds nervously,she replied "Aman,I need your help.I came here yesterday to talk to you,but by the time I came you were not here."

She looked at him for his approval.

When she got a 'go on' look from him,she continued "As you know I committed a terrible mistake in past and I have been seeking for an opportunity to make amends.Does he still work here,Aman?I need to see him...to tell him how sorry I am...for letting him down."

"Even if he works here,don't try to reach him,Sparsh.Sometimes words are just not enough.I don't know if he would want to see you.Let it go,sister...move on with your life...don't dig into something that is better off left buried."he tried to stop her from the impending confrontation.

"Let it go?Move on?Easy to say!How am I supposed to move on when I can't let go of the past?when I can't forgive myself?He'll have to forgive me before I forgive myself.You have no idea how much mental trauma I had to suffer all the while." Her voice rising an octave in exasperation.

"No I don't have any idea.But I bet,it is no match for what HE has been through for years.Do you know...he was only four when he came to this palace and since then I have considered him to be my brother?...a bond Asmik and I never shared.I'd rather not give him another reason to get upset."Aman stated in firm yet gentle tone.

More than his determining voice it was the statement that cut through her and her face drained off colour.He had to suffer the repercussions from my thoughtless actions and God knows for how long!

Seeing no way around to get through to him,Sparsh bellowed softly almost pleadingly "Please,let me see him."

Looking at her tear brimmed eyes,he could not muster the strength to turn her down.Yet a doubt kept nagging in his mind.Did she truly changed?Only time will tell.

"Fine,But only one chance.Don't hurt him this time Sparsh,please.Not every people in this world gets a second chance.I can't tell you where he is...But you can ask the stable boy recently working in the ranch.I think,he may know about your friend...former friend." he said solemnly after taking several seconds to think.

A joyous smile lit up her lips."Thank you Aman.I better go and meet him now." She excitedly walked through the door.

"And be patient with him.He's a little cranky and not sociable with elite class."he called behind her.

"Oh,don't worry.He can't be more ill-tempered than me."she retorted good-naturedly without turning back.

Hope,I did the right thing,little one.

He sighed as the doors closed only to be opened by a petite fair-skinned pretty twenty-three year old girl.Her brows furrowed in worry and irritation at what little she had heard before entering the room.

Looking at Aman she said in a condescending tone "She better not harm him again."

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She approached near the barn confidently.All she had to do was ask the stable worker and she will meet her prince charming again.

A little cranky,huh?well I have had princes wrapped around my little finger.How difficult a servant could be?...Oh no,not him,please.I almost forgot he's the stable boy.Her confident musings suddenly turned into uncertainty as she had a better view of her subject of reverie.

Standing behind him as he kept tending to the rusty brown horse,she cleared her throat to get his attention but he didn't even stop at his track let alone looking at her.

Rolling her eyes in annoyance,she tried to start a casual conversation.

"A beautiful morning,isn't it?" She said in a friendly tone.

Again getting no reaction from him she addressed him again "Hello,mister.I'm talking to you."

After getting cold shoulder from him for third time,her princess ego got slightly bruised.

Getting royally irritated she grabbed his arm with more than a gentle pressure to turn him towards her.She was almost shocked in surprise to feel the tensed hardening muscle beneath the sleeve and more than so when he flinched away from her touch.

Facing the little bugger girl he growled in a low yet menacing voice "Damn it girl...What the hell do you want from me?"

All her resolve drained into gutter,as she kept staring at him.The dirt covered yet handsome young man she met the previous day in afternoon dim light was now looking exceptionally gorgeous in the golden glow of early morning.No traces soot or grime on his impeccable face to mar his striking features...not even the light purple circles under his eyes indicating he was lacking a good night's sleep.

But something about him was scary...rather sinister.Maybe It was his eyes which had a hollow,vague look in them despite being beautiful.Maybe it was his appearance that seem to be of a boy of late teen yet something very ancient about it.

Boy,you should be on ramp rather than ranch.She wondered slyly.

After realizing that she had been scrutinizing him all along and that had not gone unnoticed by the boy,she felt warmth of embarrassment creeping in her cheek.

Flustered,the princess managed to reply "Um...I have been trying to be friendly with you all this time,but you seemed to ignore me.So I couldn't take it anymore."

He didn't look like he was satisfied with the answer when he narrowed his eyes towards the girl "You still didn't answer me."

"I told you I wanted to be friendly.That's all."She said too quickly to convince.

"I maybe stupid in your opinion but not that much stupid.Hadn't you a real business,you never would have bothered to have a lowly acquaintance like me.Now spit it out and get lost." He snorted in sarcasm.

"Consider yourself lucky that I'm even talking to you.Just because I'm trying to be nice to you doesn't mean I'll tolerate your arrogance.Do you know who I am?No one talk to me like this.If I was in your place,I would have watch my tone." Her little bit remnant of patience was wearing off as anger was preoccupying her mind.

If she didn't knew better she would have thought a multitude of emotion had brushed through his honey brown eyes for a fraction of a moment.

He replied with same weight in his deep voice "I don't have any idea who are you and I don't want to have any idea either.You may be some princess...like I care."

Then his tone got a little softer as he spoke."And consider yourself lucky that you are not in my place...no one should be.Now go back to your fancy palace...You don't belong here."

She could have sworn she heard a deep anguish in his usual emotionless,straightforward voice.As she kept watching him work she could not help observing the odd mechanical way of his movement.It was intriguing and seductive yet strangely calculating.When he was talking to him he stood absolutely still...not a single muscle she could see moving.

And when he moved it was almost rhythmic.Not to forget his exceptionally different lyrical accent.

The always fidgeting and nervously bouncing boy's glimpse pass through her mind.His liveliness was so infectious.

This one is so different from you,prince charming.She thought sadly.

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Edited by prahelika - 12 years ago

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Res

I will update it later. **************************************

Another awesome update 👏 👏

Akshat has faced lot of pain and trouble in his early life. 😭 His father hate him 😭 and I don't know about his mother 😕 but he has a caring sister 😊

I like Sparsh 😊 and Aman too, he is a genuine guy.

Sparsh is in search of her Prince Charming and unknown to his changed personality 😕

When he was talking to him he stood absolutely still...not a single muscle she could see moving.- (Dear I didn't get u here 😕)

I think, Akshat's mother must have relation with a man from Royal family (Shyad Asmik k father k saath hi...) but she must be from lower cast and that's why all people are not considering him as Royal like Asmik & Aman (all this came from an intelligent brainwave of mine 😃)

All the very best dear for ur exams 👍🏼

Edited by samu_khamkar - 12 years ago

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Radhika Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

oh pihu this part reminds me of prithvi...well i m not compairing b/w this n prithvi but the situation of their childhood...it gave me a glimps of it...prithvi n akshat boths life have became misreble by their loved ones...they hv suffered a lot
n sprash...poor princess went to akshat to ask about her price charming without knowing he himself is her price charming n she find him different from him...oh what will happen when they get to know about each other
update soon
luv u :-)

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Radhika Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

n yup ur studies...properly concentrate on ur studies u can continue ur ff's later on but u can't do it with ur studies...
studies came first in any case...n don't worry this part was really a good one... :-)

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Very interesting. Excited to read the next part.😃

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

So di, wassup?

Finally me too waddling in dis thread …yipiee, u updated.. but yes, I m little bit sad abt your irregularity,

But neva mind, mei nhi samjhungi tho kaun samjhega??? Studies….

Really heck!

So lets strt frm update..

O come on di, strting mei hi drunken man..

I m not liking him..to b more precise…I hate him.

Thinks only he has a whole load of miseries in world…

Peena chodo bhudhe!!..n come to reality..

D fire in wich u shoved akshat in far better den yours…

Sry1 I mean to say worse…gusse mei kuch bhi nikal jata h…

N agr phirr bhi u dnt reallise.. experience d life of us students… supa boring..

Koi thrill nhi h, rtmc bhi nhi h tv per..

Kya raddi life h humari..

I loved your desc. Here.-like a little bundle of nervous energy holding something seemingly very precious gently in between his tiny soft palms

Why the hell he slapped dat boy…

Idiot, ek tho tumahre liye kuch laya h..u not evn paying a heed..

U null-head…tumahre sir per tho bomb explode kardo.. BHUDUMMM….(dat ws fr audio effects..))

So he has a di to save him..

Big sisters, badi kaam ki hoti h..

I liked her…she cares for her,..

N calls him little one like aman…

Oops!..akshat ko neend..nhi aati…

Sad baat h,.. n mujhe yahan koi sone nhi deta…kya tragedy h yaar.

Fury is his best frend…hmm.

.Hey Fury,I'm here again.Guess I'll never have my beauty sleep in this life.He thought sarcastically.- don't wry dude..beauty sleep and sleeping beauty.. both are on way… sparsh jo aa gai h tumhari life mei.

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Aman is seriously concerned fr his brother, much more dan sparsh..it has to be…

Reason no1-he had seen akshat's bruises on body n heart both…all live.

Reason 2- he had not seen sparsh repenting…

May be sparsh;s friend in her palace..i dnt remember her name..the commoner girl..cn help us here…elaborating sparsh's grief to aman…and assuring him.. she has not changed, it is real her.. she is same as before… but wat happened ws a blunder…non-intentional mistake..or may be intentional mistake…or simply a mistake…non sense mistake…

By the way, meri prazi di kahati h ki mistake galti se hi hoti h- wrong wali…must extention-wrong wali.

Or she is really changed??—suspence..

Why she has to change.. she ws a sweet girl before..she ws tubby kid wid chubby akshat..

I still remember forget me not flower part.-cute one.

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All she had to do was ask the stable worker and she will meet her prince charming again.-such a easy task..isnt it?? wil happen within two clicks of fingers…

?well I have had princes wrapped around my little finger.How difficult a servant could be- he is tame less darling..watch out…

Standing behind him as he kept tending to the rusty brown horse,she cleared her throat to get his attention but he didn't even stop at his track let alone looking at her.—nice start.. I quiet liked it..very innovative…(typically innovative))

"A beautiful morning,isn't it?" She said in a friendly tone…of course..samne itna handsome aadmi khada ho tho.. morning tho beautiful hogi hi ~wink~

Again getting no reaction from him she addressed him again "Hello,mister.I'm talking to you."o teri.. kya ignore mara h akshat ne..princess ego hurt.

She was almost shocked in surprise to feel the tensed hardening muscle beneath the sleeve and more than so when he flinched away from her touch.-again a glittering desc. I like the way u distinguisg such small thing to make them unescapable…surely un escapable frm ma sharp eyes…(I know, meine faltu ka credit liya h.. but kya karo, adat se majburr, I lov praising ma self)

Ur desc. Wen she praised his face…ws seriously a enigma…

Wel it dosent mean I din catch ur language.. I caught it vry well…but may be wrote it intentionally…creating a hang b/w present a past..

So gud news is.. I m ceriously enjoying this hanging garden experience…

But will you plz clear the past- their past picture soon…

Boy,you should be on ramp rather than ranch.She wondered slyly.- haina?? Maine bhi yahi sicha tha…mere n princess k khayal kitne milte h

He didn't look like he was satisfied with the answer when he narrowed his eyes towards the girl "You still didn't answer me."- dis is seriously heights of attitude..bechari kitni maskkat keer rhi h amiable hone ki n u showing her attitude..?

But yes, she shud really consider herself lucky for not being at his place.

.. only dis realization cn make her confront wat serious bad she has done to him in past??

I m rite di??

When he was talking to him he stood absolutely still...not a single muscle she could see moving.- I din get the significance of dis line.. sry..nadaan bacha hun na mei…so plz explain me…

This one is so different from you,prince charming.She thought sadly.- wrong conclusion babes…still too far frm identifying akshat.. the changed akshat…whose innocence is brutally graved some where?..

Miss u.

Lov u di.

Bye

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