Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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archa2810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

👏this one was the best yaar... loved it... thanks for PM 👏

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

Damn you both !!

So the story only gets interesting with every part haan ?? First I thought of skipping the Anjali-Shyam part lekin the way you both write I couldnt I read the whole thing twice or thrice to get a hang of it !!
So Anjali loves her chotte but she doesnt know he is Arnav Singh Raizada does she ? And then she is planning to get away from Shyam !! Well he is weird isnt he ??

And then damn damn !! That srsly was an amazing blow off Khushi gave warsi and Thakur !! Damn no wonder Arnav felt so proud of Khushi !! Even I was like go Khushi go !! And the way he goes into the washroom, Im wondering the girls must have been shocked !!

And finally the man comes off with his woman !! Thats so goood !! But I wish that they dont get bigger fights than this !! And Arnav finally spoke the prob out and apologised !!

Amazing update !!

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

I'm in love with this ff !

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Hey!

Just read all 5 parts!

Must say you both are amazing rights!

Love the way you conveyed both their emotions! :)

Keep writing!

Ps - sorry for the late comment, I have my boards going on, and have a week break now so just caught up to this FF!

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

Wow... Amazing update. I am so scared for Anjali, what will Shyam do when he will find out that she is planning to leave him. The scene with thakur and warsi... That was hilarious. I am happy everything is fine, for now. I loved it.

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Love how this is going! I think Arnav's going to need something big to get him out of this mentality where he thinks of Khushi in a little-sister/ward type of way. Like Khushi deciding she wants to work on her restaurant full time or move out or something,

Intrigued about the past and how you're going to intersect the two stories. Can't wait to read more :D

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

This was a great entertaining read. It made my day. This is a comment on chapter 4 only. Will make a separate comment on ch 5.

Arnav appears to be really stupid about relationships, where he thinks that after he came back from 'running away' and Khushi acted normally, it's all same as before ...has he completely blocked out of his memory that this girl told him she has feelings for him? Does he think that is same as hero worship? even if she just had an adolescent crush, does he think this is appropriate? WHAT THE????

Love Khushi , so cute, able, intelligent and down right smart girl. I thorughly enjoyed the scene of the cleaning kitchen with hydrogen peroxide, the roses thrown away ...the car has to be fumigated👏 and Arnav trying to figure out what happened.

I am so looking forward to the next parts because I. Know you will deliver a payback to Arnav on behalf of Khushi soon...but I am concerned about Khushi's ability to once again 'heal herself'. I hope so.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Ch 5

I am a little confused and have some questions. Is Shyam supposed to be someone we should like and feel sympathetic to?

I want more Arnav and Khushi...

After he meeting, why was Arnav apologizing to Khushi...was it for leaving her to deal with the old main for so long or was it for the incident of the night before where he rubbed his one night stand in her face?

This is such a good story.

Edited by Anamika100 - 13 years ago

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#389

dude, awsome story and wrttting, just finished the whole thing.

i just hated it how arnav treats khushi and takes her for granted and the way to set him straight will be a guy in khushi's life to make him realize what she's been through, can't wait to read more, plz cont. soon and thanx for all tthe pms and promise to comment sooner;)