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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great that he has learned the truth.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You are doing well, the length is fine. But do keep updating regularly to keep our interest! What will Arnav do now????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Oh such a sad chapter. Can feel the pain Kushi had gone through and the pain Arnav is going through after hearing about his mistakes 😭 I feel for both of them... good going shashi and garima!! I want to kiss them. Its the only realistic way for Arnav to find out the truth.
wonderful update Nisha šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CDlove

Oh such a sad chapter. Can feel the pain Kushi had gone through and the pain Arnav is going through after hearing about his mistakes 😭 I feel for both of them... good going shashi and garima!! I want to kiss them. Its the only realistic way for Arnav to find out the truth.

wonderful update Nisha šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘


awwwh thanks luvie. šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤—
Btw I completely changed the future story. I am not doing what we discussed about anymore. So now you can read as part as a surprise. 😃 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nisha!! šŸ¤— Awwh, I get a dedication. How special is that? Thank you my dear for such a sweet gesture. So kind and thoughtful of you. Means a ton to me...😃 Truly made my Sunday. 😳

And, may I say, this is a brilliant update. Yayyy! Finally the misunderstanding got over. This is the most realistic, practical and logical way of things to get cleared out. So happy that you depicted that in your story. Might as well live the moment through your SS. God knows when and how things are going to get actually panned out in the show. šŸ˜” Oh, and now more than ever I am going to be eagerly awaiting your update. Here comes the best part. Finally the much awaited and eagerly anticipated repentance of Arnav and then the subsequent blossoming of ArHi love...šŸ˜ This can only go one way, the good & the happy way...😃

And, look at you roll. First ever SS and 5 chapters in few days. Nice going! šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Scintillating

Nisha!! šŸ¤— Awwh, I get a dedication. How special is that? Thank you my dear for such a sweet gesture. So kind and thoughtful of you. Means a ton to me...😃 Truly made my Sunday. 😳

And, may I say, this is a brilliant update. Yayyy! Finally the misunderstanding got over. This is the most realistic, practical and logical way of things to get cleared out. So happy that you depicted that in your story. Might as well live the moment through your SS. God knows when and how things are going to get actually panned out in the show. šŸ˜” Oh, and now more than ever I am going to be eagerly awaiting your update. Here comes the best part. Finally the much awaited and eagerly anticipated repentance of Arnav and then the subsequent blossoming of ArHi love...šŸ˜ This can only go one way, the good & the happy way...😃

And, look at you roll. First ever SS and 5 chapters in few days. Nice going! šŸ‘

I am glad I made you sunday 😃
The MU had to get cleared at some point...so might as well do it now.
Btw, this is going the intense way. Things arent going to get all happy anytime soon...it will take time, but that doesnt mean there wont be any romance in the mean time šŸ˜‰.
This is my take on how I wish the MU had cleared in the show but unfortunately we got to see a Khushi begging and pleading.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you for the pm, Nisha... love where this story is going... at least he knows the truth now
now I know why arnav was still in the dark 3 years after khushi left him... really glad that you have portrayed arnav true to form: unwilling to listen to anyone once he makes up his mind about something / someone... also so glad that you've shown khushi's parents, especially garima, being angry and disappointed with him [generally, the damad seems to be forgiven everything!]... future developments will be interesting to note... khushi shouldn't give in to him any time soon... I like this strong and self-sufficient khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwwh thanks luvie. šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤—
Btw I completely changed the future story. I am not doing what we discussed about anymore. So now you can read as part as a surprise. 😃 😃

awesome! now I'll have the suspence element as well to enjoy the story😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazin part..finally arnav knows d truth
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maddy1270

thank you for the pm, Nisha... love where this story is going... at least he knows the truth now

now I know why arnav was still in the dark 3 years after khushi left him... really glad that you have portrayed arnav true to form: unwilling to listen to anyone once he makes up his mind about something / someone... also so glad that you've shown khushi's parents, especially garima, being angry and disappointed with him [generally, the damad seems to be forgiven everything!]... future developments will be interesting to note... khushi shouldn't give in to him any time soon... I like this strong and self-sufficient khushi

I am glad you liked it.
A fiesty Khushi is so much better than a sappy one. 😃

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