FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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The Thin Line



Part 1, 2 and 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2?pn=6

Note: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57460880�

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2?pn=10�

A question for readers: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2?pn=13

Part 5: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2984816&TPN=13

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2?pn=19

Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2?pn=25�

Note: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2?pn=29

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2?pn=31�

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2

Part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2�

Part 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984816/ff-the-thin-line-part-11-on-49-upd-6-2


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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg this is such a nice os...

i loved it..
continue soon nd PM ME.
cant wait to read more :)
plzz add me to ur buddy list :)
nd i hope arnav gets better soon nd i really hope e regrets saying those words to khushi
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I will hold my criticism...till the end...so plz write ...carry on the tale so I have something to critisize...for starters however the premise is very inviting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is really good, for writing it first time. i liked the pacing of the story...

you dare leave a cliffhanger, that too when Arnav is critical. i am going to say the most cliche thing ever " please continue"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Nisha! I really liked your OS dear! It's written with lot of simplicity. Loved the concept too. I really think you should continue further and re-unite ArHi after 3 years! Gosh, dear that's horrible, After all that ArHi have gone through you separated them for 3 whole years more? 😆

And, I can relate to you about where you are getting your inspiration from. 😃 I am huge fan of Hiruni's writing and that Pregnancy OS was indeed one of her best works.

Thank you for a lovely OS and I will wait for the next update...😳 If you create a PM list, do put me on it...😊
Edited by Scintillating - 13 years ago
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hey..i liked it a lot..do cont
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start continue soon and do pm me when you update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GRT START!!!! 👏CONTINUE SOON N PLZ PM ME...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nisha 🤗

That was spectacular! More more!! I hope you will update it soon...

Loved it! 😃
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the start is goood, just keep going, we wanna know more!

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