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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Loved it. You write beautifully. Loved how you have brought out his vulnerability and her obstinacy.

Could you include something like a consummation by the sea? Khushi getting jealous of seeing ASR with his assistant- someone tall, gorgeous brunette? 😉

Her gradual thawing and an awesome proposal by ASR? 😃

Do add me to your PM list.

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Kiaaraa

@Kiaaraa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Make Hotwa melt her icy Heartwa SOOONNWA.. waiting eagerly for more updates after this beautifully written update..

T.C. Kiaaraa

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

loved the update...at last A has apologized...but long way to go dude to get her to reciprocate same feelings...

K stay strong girl...can't wait for the first business meeting!

Hiru/Dhruv seems interesting...pls develop their story little more!

-Sona

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mon95

@mon95

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#334

did u write part 12 yet?

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momai14

@momai14

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

it is really a wonderful story...plz pm me nxt time...loved it

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

...I feel so lost with the amount of ffs that I'm reading that I'm going to have to come back to this one and refresh myself XD

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

nvm nvm xD I remember now, >_< sorry for spamming, I just realized the track, I just wish Arnav doesn't use that much agression to get her instead he uses his tactics where she naturally comes to him, and she starts seeing who he really is, and explains how he knows the truth <3

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sweetarnavkhusi

@sweetarnavkhusi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

hey nisha..nice FF yar...do update me d nxt part...

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vrinda725

@vrinda725

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

nice story .. update soon and plzz pm me .. thankyou! :D

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#340

just read all 11 parts of this FF

I am so glad Khushi can be so strong even after all she has been through

Arnav deserves her indifference he did not trust her

Without trust their can be no relationship

PM me with updates