FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Uff I am hating this pig-headed Arnav..
poor Khushi..

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Doc_Manaal
Uff I am hating this pig-headed Arnav..
poor Khushi..

doc still pig headed. 😲

I knew a lot of you thought arnav was being a jerk up until now so I tried to portray it from his side. I tried to explain things from his perspective. I tried to show that despite the fact that her betrayal hurt him a lot, he still loves her. I was trying to make him less of a jerk. I guess I failed.

Maybe arnav wouldnt be arnav if he wasnt a jack ass, if he wasnt atleast slightly pig headed. 😆 😆

Dont worry he wont remain pig headed forever. 😉

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Sorry I haven't gotten the chance to comment recently X_X been so busy and still am, but needed to tell you how awesome this SS is :D

I really want to see how come Arnav doesn't know the truth even after 3 years O_O

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

@Rabba-Ve-Delena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Eeek, well I am flattered and you're welcome! Can't wait for the next instalment, change in ASR will be slow I'm guessing Nisha but worth it no doubt! Love the dynamics!

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sbk2

@sbk2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Finally read all of them!

Beautiful Nisha! I liked the fourth part a lot, maybe because you have written it in such a way that it reminded of the old episodes with that passion and attraction between them.

I want to see his MU cleared...I want to read about his repentance...and I am sure you ate heading towards that, am waiting eagerly!

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Hiruni

@CDlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Nisha!! 🤗 I just love this part!! It beautifully describes Arnav's conflicted emotions!! wonderful! And beautifully written too! Love your style! And poor Kushi feel so bad for her. She's gotten enough trampled for 3 years. time for some TLC for that girl...Im so excited for the next part!!

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Sayali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

hey nisha thanks for the pm
loved this part very much
w8ing for next part
plzzz pm me

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Nazibah

@nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Three years and he didn't even bother using the countless money he says he has to find out the truth!!!! PLEASE add me to your PM list I just read all four parts I would love to read more!!!!!!!!!