FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2)) - Page 11

Originally posted by: LittleMissMagic

loving it!!! please tell me, this will be a happy ending. I cant bear non-happy-endings-- 😳

Originally posted by: mid-night-sun

Well, read all four parts and thankyou for pm
Loved it dear really nice
And answer to your question is , I would like it more intense and s bit playful. Because it's nature of arnav.it suits his character. He would love h

er and beg forgiveness with intensity and all the while keep her confuse by being playful

Originally posted by: stafhtad

Nisha,

Sorry for commenting so late.

But I read all the 5 parts.

You have done an awesome job. I am happy you are givign more insight into Kushi's internalizations which the CVs fail to do in the real serial.

In my personal opinion, however you want to tell the story, all serious and sincere or, enough doeses of playfulness or a mixture of everything, I will read it.

I just want you to keep true to the characters of your version of Kushi and Arnav and take us through your thoughts.

So far I love, how you have progressed it and would love to read more.

I hope Anjali overhears all of this or even Akash overhears all of this. In my mind, if for three years everyone kept quite about Kushi leaving the home, they need their eyes opened as well then, including Paayal.

I am very bad with praises, but please be sure, that I am looking forward to more updates from you.