FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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LittleMissMagic

@LittleMissMagic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

loving it!!! please tell me, this will be a happy ending. I cant bear non-happy-endings-- 😳

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saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

very nice thank u for pm me

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: LittleMissMagic
loving it!!! please tell me, this will be a happy ending. I cant bear non-happy-endings-- 😳

I dont think I would have it any other way.😉 😃

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Hey! thank you so much for the PM.

Really enjoyed the updates. The concluding remarks by Khushi in chap 5 was epic .. He should live with the lies. Good one! Would wait for the next PM.

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

awesome update very heart breaking arnav never gave her a chance she should not give him one know loved the update please pm

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Nazibah

@nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Loved it!!! I hope now Arnav starts to repent!!! Can't wait to read more!!!

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hina

@mid-night-sun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Well, read all four parts and thankyou for pm
Loved it dear really nice
And answer to your question is , I would like it more intense and s bit playful. Because it's nature of arnav.it suits his character. He would love her and beg forgiveness with intensity and all the while keep her confuse by being playful

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---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: mid-night-sun
Well, read all four parts and thankyou for pm
Loved it dear really nice
And answer to your question is , I would like it more intense and s bit playful. Because it's nature of arnav.it suits his character. He would love h
er and beg forgiveness with intensity and all the while keep her confuse by being playful

I am glad that you liked it. 😃

Oh and thanks for answering the question. 😃 😛 😃

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@SeerialLoops

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Nisha,

Sorry for commenting so late.

But I read all the 5 parts.

You have done an awesome job. I am happy you are givign more insight into Kushi's internalizations which the CVs fail to do in the real serial.

In my personal opinion, however you want to tell the story, all serious and sincere or, enough doeses of playfulness or a mixture of everything, I will read it.

I just want you to keep true to the characters of your version of Kushi and Arnav and take us through your thoughts.

So far I love, how you have progressed it and would love to read more.

I hope Anjali overhears all of this or even Akash overhears all of this. In my mind, if for three years everyone kept quite about Kushi leaving the home, they need their eyes opened as well then, including Paayal.

I am very bad with praises, but please be sure, that I am looking forward to more updates from you.

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---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: stafhtad
Nisha,
Sorry for commenting so late.

But I read all the 5 parts.

You have done an awesome job. I am happy you are givign more insight into Kushi's internalizations which the CVs fail to do in the real serial.

In my personal opinion, however you want to tell the story, all serious and sincere or, enough doeses of playfulness or a mixture of everything, I will read it.

I just want you to keep true to the characters of your version of Kushi and Arnav and take us through your thoughts.

So far I love, how you have progressed it and would love to read more.

I hope Anjali overhears all of this or even Akash overhears all of this. In my mind, if for three years everyone kept quite about Kushi leaving the home, they need their eyes opened as well then, including Paayal.

I am very bad with praises, but please be sure, that I am looking forward to more updates from you.

the fact that you read it is praise enough hun.

thanks so much...

I am gonna stay true to the way I think of these characters. I want a strong Khushi not the weak one on the show. She has changed in 3 years. What arnav did to her has made her stronger over time. And about the intensity or playfulness...I am just going to go with the flow. If intensity feels right right now then thats what I will write and in the future if the story takes a turn and I can insert playfulness than thats what I will write.

Thanks so much...means so much to me that you liked it

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