FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2)) - Page 19

Loved it i read all 5,6,7 together it was awesome loved it... Really fabulous..:)

Okay we will wait for the Arhi scenes, Now pls update soon!

Originally posted by: dva2vra

where iz part 8?

It was really wonderful ,loved it
Waiting for khushi to meet arnav

I think ur writing is absolutely fabulous and getting a B is no judge of anyone' s writing skills awesome work keep it up

I'm sure the excitement will still be there and I can't wait to read on more :DDD don't stop it's awesome :D

Part 8

Arnav woke up the next morning not knowing how he had gotten on the bed. He had been in front of the mirror, he had broken the mirror. But now his hand was bandaged. Just then di came in and interrupted his thoughts. "Chote, how are you now."

"Di did you do this," he pointed at his bandage. "Haan Chote. I actually came here to talk to you about last night. What was that? Do you know how scared I got when I saw you lying on the floor bleeding? Do you have any idea Chote. You are supposed to take things lightly for now. You are supposed to be resting Chote, you just had a surgery. You aren't supposed to break down mirrors," di said with a concerned said with a concerned look. "I'm sorry di, it won't happen again," he assured her.

Must he hurt all the people he loved...first Khushi and now di.

"Chote, why did you do that? What happened that made you so angry that you wanted to hurt yourself?" his di always asked him the questions he couldn't answer.

"Di its nothing, I promise it won't happen again," he repeated himself hoping this would be the end of the discussion. 3 years ago when he had divorced Khushi , he had simply told his family that it couldn't work, that they werent meant to be together, that he did not love her. He had not wanted his family to suffer more especially after Shyam's truth had come out. That day after he had kicked Khushi out, he had told his di that Shyam had only married her for his money but he had not told her about his affair with Khushi. Shyam had gone to prison then.

But ofcourse he had lied to his family because the truth had been something else entirely or so he had thought it was the truth. He now knew the real truth. He now knew how wrong he had been. How could he tell his di what he had done? She adored him. How could he tell her that he mentally tortured Khushi, he ruined her. This was his cross to bear.

"I can read you like a book Chote. You are hiding something from me and I know it but if you don't want to tell me then fine, I won't ask again. You will come to me yourself," with that she left.

A few days passed by. Arnav had been on bed rest and he was going crazy within these walls. He wanted to talk to Khushi. He wanted to tell her how sorry he was. He was to beg for her forgiveness. He could get down on his knees too if need be...for her he would do anything. He wanted...her. He had missed her over the years. He would enter his room every day and he would miss those stars, her clothes in the closet, her blanket, and even her Salman Khan poster.

But how could he ask her for his forgiveness. What he had done was unforgivable.

Aman called bringing him out of thoughts. "Yes Aman"

"Boss, you know the big client, the Singhanias'.they want us to do a joint venture with Couture house if we want his deal," Arnav was surprised. "A joint venture, but couture house isn't that well known. Why would they even want to do business with them," he asked. "Well the Couture House does have some talented designers and the client really likes their work. The client also wants you and our best designers to go to Goa and in a few days. He is residing there and he says he wants updates every few days about whats going on and he can't do that if we don't go there. Couture house is interested as well. They have asked us for an answer about the joint venture."

"Fine have Akash read through them then and I am still at bed rest so bring the papers here at home and I will sign them.

A few days later Arnav's doctor had told him he was off bed rest but that he needed to avoid stress and too long working hours. He had also given arnav permission to fly, which was good because he would have gone either way. The only thing that could help him right now was work because if he didn't work he would go crazy thinking about all the ways he had harmed Khushi, thinking about the years he could have spent loving her, thinking about how much he hated Shyam.

"Chote be careful and keep calling me everyday. You want to say bye to Swathi," di asked. Swathi, she was his darling. Three years ago Anjali di had given birth to a premature baby girl. Shyam's revelation had been quite a shock for her and she had gone into labor.

"Mama," she said in her cute girl voice. "Bye meri jaan. Mama has to go for a while, I will call you everyday day though."

"Pinky promise," she asked.

"Pinky promise," he said.

Then got on his flight an hour later and found that one woman had invaded all his thoughts. He thought about her the entire flight. The guilt would certainly kill him one day.

First off, I wanted to dedicate this to pikudika. I hope you are enjoying your vacation. 😃 Thanks hun for all the moral support. 🤗🤗

Anyways, I know this chapter is a bit boring but you get to see arnav. Oh, and dont miss the next chapter...arhi will be back. 😉

Please like/comment...my headache wont go away but atleast you guys can show me some ❤️ and make me feel better...

Oh for those who havent seen it yet (in case you dont get pms from me): I am writing a new FF called Shadows of the Sun and here's Ch. 1. It's going to be very interesting 😉

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2994802/new-ff-shadows-of-the-sun-ch-2-on-12

If you want pm's then check the PM rule on the first page. 😃

coming and placing my hanky

Nisha - Arnav's predicament very nicely portrayed. I like how you didn't focus on how he reacted but the aftermath .. the underlying pain which will follow him!

Like a lot!