FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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enigma17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Nisha...Congratulations on your first story Now you do have to continue I can't wait for the next part

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Chandra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

So what happened in thos 3 years? Please continue. Am waiting

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farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Fab start for a first timer though it doesn't look like from your writing that u r writing a story for the first time...plz continue soon.

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Manju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Hi Nisha dear🤗

So you have been bitten by the writing bug!!! Excellent!!

Lovely first chapter of your first OS. One thing was not very clear was whether Khushi and Arnav are still legally married or legally divorced or just separated, I am sure that is something you will tell us in the next update!

And update soon please, don't leave us in the surgical ICU, get us out😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Really good start :)

Please continue ... Would appreciate a PM when u update :)

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RazRazee

@RazRazee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Please do continue it's a beautiful os would love to read more of it. And please add me to ur buddy list, and pls PM when u update the next part. Thank you😊

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Hiruni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

aww Nisha this is such an inviting story line :) Loved the coherent, articulate writing and the flow of the story. Arnav called her a wh**e? uuurrghhh 😡 Not that he hasn't done that already but still..Arnav needs a few bangs on his head for everything he had done. And how could you stop here? Please tell me you are continuing this? You cant just stop here without these two getting together and making lots of babies 😆 3 years is way too long! they need to get together ASAP and get on with that baby making process 😆

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: CDlove
aww Nisha this is such an inviting story line :) Loved the coherent, articulate writing and the flow of the story. Arnav called her a wh**e? uuurrghhh 😡 Not that he hasn't done that already but still..Arnav needs a few bangs on his head for everything he had done. And how could you stop here? Please tell me you are continuing this? You cant just stop here without these two getting together and making lots of babies 😆 3 years is way too long! they need to get together ASAP and get on with that baby making process 😆

I know, I just left it at a cliffhanger 😈

Yes yes I am gonna write more even though I was hoping for more replies but its okay. All my friends loved it so if I dont continue...I wont hear the end of it. You for one wont leave me alone. 😆

Manju- legally divorced or legally married will come up...I didnt say yet for a reason. I think I like being dramatic in my writing...well I guess.

I am actually not sure what I wanna do- I could make this short and sweet or I have an idea that could make this a bit long.

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Nisha, your very first attempt at writing an os has turned up trumps 👍🏼! love how you have brought out khushi's dilemma... very well written! an update is much needed. hopefully arnav won't be suffering from memory loss but rather from remorse!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 13 years ago