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😊😊😊wow part two and three were great please continue do not stop it. i really want to know whats going to happen next pls pls update it when u have the time.

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Part 4

Why was she here? Why did she look so worried as if she was actually concerned about him? But most importantly why was he so happy to see her. In the past three years, he had hated her. And now after hating her for three years, he was happy to see her!!!

It has to be the medications that he was on. Yes that must be it.

But he knew he was lying like he always did. Lying to himself so he wouldn't have to deal with the pain she caused him. Afterall, hating her was much easier than living every minute in the pain of her betrayal. Arnav had to admit atleast to himself that the truth was that he had not been able to deal with her betrayal because she was the only girl he had ever loved. The only girl he had ever cared about. The only girl he had wanted to make happy. The only girl he had trusted with his everything. He hadn't thought that would be possible especially after what had happened in his past.

And now that girl was here looking at him through those big innocent eyes and all the anger he had felt left him as soon as their eyes met. He got lost in her eyes somewhere.

Had he been wrong about her. How could the girl who waited hours outside the ICU for him, who cried for him, betray him. How could the girl with the most innocent eyes betray him.

Breaking the eye contact, Khushi had started to get up to leave. But arnav clamped his hand on her wrist and pulled her harshly towards him. She landed on top of him and tried to get up. But Arnav had other plans so he held her wrists in a tight grip behind her back. He didn't know why he did it. After three years of deprivation, maybe he just wanted to touch her, wanted to feel her. She was so close, he could smell her intoxicating scent, he could feel the shiver that ran through her, he could see her lips quivering. The passion burned between him. He had the sudden urge to kiss those lips. He somehow held himself back and asked her "what are you doing here Khushi," but his voice came out a bit husky.

Khushi couldn't move. He was everywhere. He surrounded her. She could smell his masculine scent. His eyes had gone brown just like they always did when she was too close to him. She was captivated just like before. After three years she was so close to him'so close yet so far away. He had said something but she couldn't hear because she was too concentrated on the huskiness of his voice. "What," Khushi said. Arnav repeated himself, but this time his voice was clear again.

"I came here to'let go of me first," Khushi said. And arnav let go reluctantly.

"I just came here because naniji called. Then when I was already here I figured why not see how you were doing," Khushi said.

"So you wanted to see how I was doing," arnav said. "Why Khushi after all this time, why do you even care." "I don't. It would look weird if I come here to your house and then not even check on you after you just got in a life threatening accident," Khushi said.

"Oh so all this is for keeping up pretenses. Running to the hospital, waiting outside my ICU for hours. Stop it Khushi, I don't need your pretenses or your sympathy. I don't need anything from a woman like you who only cares for money. From a woman who betrayed me," Arnav said. It hurt him to say those things though. And clearly it hurt Khushi too because the hurt was written all over her face. Was he wrong about her, arnav asked himself again. He had spent three years hating her then where did this compassion come from. It must be the meds'must be the meds.

"I shouldn't have come. Take care of yourself. Goodbye Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada," Khushi said. There was something in her voice'arnav couldn't recognize it though. It felt like she was leaving forever. He wanted to stop her, to apologize but she had already left. Why did this always happen. He would always misbehave with her and then he would feel sorry later. But he had no reason to feel bad this time, afterall she is the one who wronged him. Right. But then why did he feel so bad.

Just then Khushi's parents walked in.

So this was the surprise. A lot of you kept saying that Arnav is his old self...meaning jack ass. I tried to humanize him in this part. I tried to give you guys a peak of how he felt. Let me know if you think he is still a jackass. If so I will work harder to give you guys a better understanding of his behavior.

This one is for Rabba-Ve-Delena. She gave me an idea (she knows what it was) and I incorporated it. Let me know if you liked my take on it. 😉 😛 😃 Oh and I think I am going to dedicate each part to one of the readers from now one. 😛

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Nice update.😊

thank you for the pm, Nisha... sorry to say arnav still seems a jackass😃 though I do understand that he feels betrayed by khushi... why didn't he get the whole case investigated in these 3 years [he could have hired the Indian version of that show 'Cheaters' 😊]... at least he would have got closure one way or another... for a shrewd business tycoon, shyam has really managed to pull the wool over his eyes... can't wait to read what had happened in arnav's and khushi's lives in the interim! will khushi's parents be instrumental in revealing the truth?

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nice. after three years, he still has not figured the truth...