FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: SaJanLuv14
Your writing is good, but remember creative writing and formal writing are very different ;)
Your creative writing is very good ;) and it's the passion/hard work you put in that matters the most :DDD
I'm loving how independent and strong Khushi is, and who is Dhruv? O_O I feel like I read about him in many ffs but I just don't know who he is, in the show he's her cousin or smth but what does he look like O_____O? o.O

I'm shocked with the news...I just posted on rima's post T_T this is terrible, I just wish that she got to see the promo that passed bc I know it was one of her wishes that Khushi/Arnav would end up happy together <3

thats one of the first things I thought of when I heard about her passing away. It was her last wish and she couldnt see it fulfilled. Its just not fair. I hope that she atleast saw the promo...

😒

Sorry this has just shaken me up a bit...

About Dhruv- you will find out as time goes by.

With college essays we had to analyze literature and then write...which I apparently wasnt very good at. You are right though that sort of writing is different from story telling. Thanks for the compliment...

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

lovely update wounder who big boss is update soon

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pikudika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Hey nisha,

Just finished reading all 6 chapters in one go.. You have such amazing talent.sciences mein kay kar rahi ho? I tell you, put this on amazon for kindle readers.. we will lap it up .. .What a strong story line. I am glad Khushi has moved on and made a life for herself. I hope she takes on AR Designs in a big way😉

On your note, I want you to write the story the way you like. If you want it intense / funny / situational.. anything.. You have the power in your hands to shape anything..,

BTW, why do I have to an assistant designer? 😭 why cant i be the hot bosses' PA?? Please, pretty please? I promise, I make good coffee!😆

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: pikudika
Hey nisha,

Just finished reading all 6 chapters in one go.. You have such amazing talent.sciences mein kay kar rahi ho? I tell you, put this on amazon for kindle readers.. we will lap it up .. .What a strong story line. I am glad Khushi has moved on and made a life for herself. I hope she takes on AR Designs in a big way😉

On your note, I want you to write the story the way you like. If you want it intense / funny / situational.. anything.. You have the power in your hands to shape anything..,

BTW, why do I have to an assistant designer? 😭 why cant i be the hot bosses' PA?? Please, pretty please? I promise, I make good coffee!😆

Hey paracetamol. You just made my day. Feel so

Trust me I could never make it in literature...story telling is one thing but analyzing literature and writing essays and all that is awful. I only had to take 2 english courses in college and it was hard work. Science works for me...love anatomy and physiology while english

Sorry you cant be the hot bosses' PA. Coz I already made you the assistant designer. Sorry hun.

You will still get to be close to the hot boss 😆

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mayabegum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

nice updated girl, loved reading ti so emotional and like someone said i cant bare seeing arnav hurt but im sure you've got something up your sleeves! :D

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Hiruni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Nisha! just read this part love. Awww its really beautiful. And your writing style is tremendous! Love the coherent and direct wording. Besides collage english courses are bull shit. They never asses your writing ability in a proper way. Now the story; love love love how it has taken shape. And I'm so glad Kushi's making her way through life instead of depending on someone. A Kick-ass Kushi all the way 😃 Kushi should do her own fasion show and show that freakzada what she's made of.One request, make me end up with the hot boss? please? 😉

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: CDlove
Nisha! just read this part love. Awww its really beautiful. And your writing style is tremendous! Love the coherent and direct wording. Besides collage english courses are bull shit. They never asses your writing ability in a proper way. Now the story; love love love how it has taken shape. And I'm so glad Kushi's making her way through life instead of depending on someone. A Kick-ass Kushi all the way 😃 Kushi should do her own fasion show and show that freakzada what she's made of.One request, make me end up with the hot boss? please? 😉

I hope you are feeling better now hun...a big hug for you 🤗

had never thought of anyone ending up with the hot boss. But now that you mention it I am going to have to think about it.

You know you are gonna have competition... paracetamol has already told me that she wants to be the hot boss's PA. 😆

P.S. I am really glad I changed the story...now you wont know whats gonna happen next 😃. Plus I like this better. I like this independent Khushi and this story is more challenging. I dont know what way its gonna go. I have it somewhat planned out but not completely. As I go along I get new ideas.

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tmowla

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

nice one...i dont think you need any improvements di...😊

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Great update .. Erm he could be a fashion merchandiser..

Merchandiser
Your main purpose as a fashion merchandiser is to promote fashion merchandise by analyzing target markets, creating attractive visual presentations, determining customer demand and distributing fashion products. With a focus more on the business aspect of the fashion industry, the fashion merchandiser role requires completion of a degree program within the field. Most fashion merchandisers reporting to PayScale.com in September 2011 had a salary range of $21,895 and $68,317.

Lmao!! Trying to help ...ahaha.. or photographer or stylist..

Honestly I have no clue ..:/ sorry :)

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: .._sonii_..
Great update .. Erm he could be a fashion merchandiser..

Merchandiser
Your main purpose as a fashion merchandiser is to promote fashion merchandise by analyzing target markets, creating attractive visual presentations, determining customer demand and distributing fashion products. With a focus more on the business aspect of the fashion industry, the fashion merchandiser role requires completion of a degree program within the field. Most fashion merchandisers reporting to PayScale.com in September 2011 had a salary range of $21,895 and $68,317.

Lmao!! Trying to help ...ahaha.. or photographer or stylist..

Honestly I have no clue ..:/ sorry :)

fashion merchandiser sounds perfect...thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!

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