FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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Hiruni

@CDlove

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Nisha!! This part is really beautiful and oh so touching! I love how you brought out Kushi's feelings for him.. even after so many years of being neglected she still loves him 😭 Poor girl...I feel for her..

And Arnav 😡 even that hit on his head hadn't done much to him and his over sized stupidity

I want more of this story!!

Edited by CDlove - 13 years ago

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Your OS has a different vibe which makes it more interesting and i'm hooked on...please do continue...

please PM me...

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580531

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Nisha! Loved the two parts dear...😊 So far loving the way the story is flowing. The possibility of losing Arnav is making Khushi's love and feelings for him come to the fore. This is beautifully portrayed in your OS. But ASR is as usual at his legendary bad self. 😔 He is so mean and hurtful towards Khushi. It's as if like some things never change. I am so waiting for you to clear the misunderstanding between them and let the love blossom. God only knows when it is actually going to end in the show but at least we can have that in your OS...😃

Thanks for the PM dear and will be eagerly waiting to read part 4...😊

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

please do continue... the story is developing in an interesting manner. I was surprised to learn that arnav still suspects khushi... i would have thought that that he would have learnt the truth in these 3 years! anyway, future events would be interesting to read about

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Hasana

@HasanaNowfer

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Beautiful... Oh plz make thngs b alryte b/w arnav and khushi... Update soon. Nd thnx 4 d pm :D

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Nice! Hate tt Arnav is being rude to khushi still but hope tt when Arnav finally knows the truth, he will make it up to khushi! Please update soon! Really loved...

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Rita

@rjhaveri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Good start, the story has potential.

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Note:

If anyone wants pm's then could you please add me as a buddy. It is so time consuming to individually pm everyone, while sending mass pm's is much quicker.

Oh, and part 4 will be uploaded tomorrow. I know you all have a lot of questions as to why even after 3 years Arnav doesnt know the truth and all that will unravel as time goes by. I literally started from a random day three years in the future and didnt give any background story. The background story will come in flashbacks when necessary. 😉 I would say that makes it interesting, wouldnt you.

Now I am gonna go watch kasoor...good film btw.

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago