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gowri1712

@gowri1712

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Posted: 13 years ago

PROLOGUE

It was night time. Arnav Singh Raizada stood near the poolside looking at the stars. It has been two years since he had forced the love of his life to get into a contract marriage. And she had obeyed. She had left on the completion of the proposed six months. He had failed miserably in understanding her. She was one of a kind with just love and care filled in her heart for all around her. It was his mistake that she was no more with him and he was repenting it big time.

She had told him the truth and it was him who failed to believe her eventhough he had wanted to. He had followed his mind instead of his heart.

And now he remembered every single word she had said. He used to believe that it is him who writes his destiny. It was Khushi who had said that one day he would come to know that Devi Mayya will make him realise that it was her who had been making him write his destiny and then Khushi would be nowhere near him. She was right. It had been always his mistake. He understood his mistake only after Shyam had let the truth out, snatching his property and abandoning his Di. Anjali had lost her child and by now Arnav had won the case against the creep. Anjali was now engaged to Arjun Malhotra, a good friend of Arnav, a sucessful businessman. And by now Akash and Payal had a 1 month old son whom they named Akshat. Maami , Mama n Naani were the same.

Khushi on the other hand after the six month contract marriage had moved to Mumbai. Khushi now lives with her brother Khushal Verma and sister in law Riana. Khushi had been away from her brother for long since they had lost their parents and Khushi went to live with the Guptas. Khushal had then moved on and by now he was the proud owner of Verma Designs. She had been with them for the last one and a half years. They only knew that Khushi had maried someone in Delhi for six months. Who was it or why was it they did not know.

It was february 14^th and i everything had gone right she would have been celebrating her 2^nd wedding anniversary wiith her Arnavji. She was standing near the window looking at her parents whom she believed to have become stars. She was missing her parents eventhough her brother was there with her. She missed Naaniji's love Anjali di's care, Buaji's taunts and the thing she missed the most was her Arnavji's taunts. But she kept aside her thoughts and decided to move on. Khushi was not the old Khushi Kumari Gupta , now she is Khushi Verma co-owner of Verma designs. She now went to office and tried to remain busy so that she was not reminded of her love. She never thought about Arnav normally, but today was obviously an exemption. But no. Not anymore she thought as she wanted herself to be independent and happy.

PS: SHOULD I CONTINUE WITH THIS OR ????

DO POST YOUR VIEWS

THANKS FOR READING!!!

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Edited by luvbarunsanaya6 - 13 years ago

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rina25

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Posted: 13 years ago

Good start Hmmm Kushi works like Arnav You should continue

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Maverick29

@Maverick29

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Nice writing -- I love the optimistic writing and tone of the story.

But while the "strong individual" you are making Khushi to be is really good -- you need to realize that she doesnt have to be a working woman capable of handling business to be Mrs. Raizada. Arnav will give his life for the chick irrespective!!! The second point is even though the 2 year time sounds like it is short -- separating two lovers that are meant to be together for that long may not be necessary -- if Arnav needs 2 years to understand his stupidity you are doing a dis-service to his intelligence as a character.

I think you can find a way where he realizes his stupidity way earlier and separation of a few days is more than enough to get the guy back on track.

That said, I LOVE THE WRITING -- you have a nice talent in expression.

Cheers.