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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
plz continue and thx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey! sorry i couldnt reply to the first pm but i read prologue and character sketch in one go and im really pshyched for the chapter 1!
the prologue was written beautifully and u expressed both the character's pain beautifully!!! i love the characters!!
please update soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for your comments guys. Infact the change in Arnav's attitude will be reflected in the upcoming chapters. I hope you all like it. Do u think Aamir Ali and Ragini Khanna will suit as Khushi's bhai and bhabhi??? Anyways here is the first chapter.

CHAPTER 1

DELHI

Raizada Mansion

"Arnav bitwa , saari tayyariyan ho gayi ??? Anjali bitiya ki shaadi mein sirf ek hafta reh gaye hein."Naani said to Arnav who was busy with his laptop. The whole family was present in the living room.

"haan naani lagbag saari tayyariyan ho gayi, bas lehnga baaki reh gaya hein." Arnav answered.

"Par chotte lehnga to tum hi design karoge na???"

"nahi naani pichli baar meine design kiya tha aur... iss baar mein nahi chahtha ki mein yeh kaam karu. Meine Khushal se keh diya hein voh kar lenge"

"Khushal vahi heina tumhare Mumbai wala friend???" Anjali asked .

"Haan Di vohi hein. Mein use ek baar phone karke yaad dilatha hoon"Arnav said as he took out his phone and went towards his room.

MUMBAI

Meanwhile in Mumbai Khushi was observing Rishi as he was fiddling with his dad's phone. Suddenly the screen flashed and Khushi saw the name 'ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA' in it. She was shocked out of her wits. Her past came flooding onto her. She immidiately cut the phone call and rushed to her brother's room. Both Khushal and Riana were busy with some work.

"Bhai aapko koi phone aaya tha. Rishi ne cut" she was cut mid-off when the phone rang again.

"ASR ka phone , ek minute Khushi" Khushal replied as he attened the call.

"Hello Arnav kaise ho???"

"mein kaisa hoon??? Pehli baar phone cut kyun kiya???"

"Voh meine nahi Rishi ne kiya. Bolo kaise phone kiya?"

"Kaise phone kiya. Riana se kaho ki tumhara yadhaash kho gaya hein aur Doctor ki zaroorat hein"

"What ??? Arnav batao kya baat hein?"

"Meine tumse di ke shaadi keliye lehnga design karne ko kaha tha.. yaad hein kya...???"

Bhool gaya bhagwan iss ASR se mera raksha karna... Khushal muttered under his breath.

"Nahi ASR DI ke shaadi ke baare mein bhool kaise sakta hoon.. voh mein thoda busy tha isliye dimaag se nikal gaya. Aaj Sunday hein Agle Sunday hi toh heina shaadi . Friday tak lehnga bilkul tayyar hoga. Ok??"

"OKKK, mujhe laga ki tum bhool gaye... tum jaante ho na ki mein apne di se"

"Haan baba mein jaanta hoon ki behen ka pyaar kaise hota hein.. vaise meri Khushi hi to meri duniya hein"

Arnav's heart sank at the mention of the name KHUSHI.

Little did he know that his Khushi was the little sister about who Khushal mentioned often.

"OK Khushal mein raktha hoon bahut kaam hein"

Arnav cut the call and his mind travelled to the images of him and his Khushi being together.

Here Khushi was listening to the talk between her brother and her husband,eventhough they did not know that there existed such a relation. Eventhough she could hear only her brother she could make out that Anjali was getting married again. That means Shyam has been exposed or why else would Anjali leave him.

"Bhai, Arnav Singh Raizada ka phone tha kya???"ahi hein aur vo bhi

"Haan Khushi, tum use jaante ho?"

Khushi's heart sank.

"Bhai, the great business tycoon ASR ko kaun nahi jaanta???"

"Yeah right!!!"
"Aap unhe personally jaante ho kya.. vaise kya baatein ho rahi thi???"

"Haan mein use 5 saal pehle ek function mein mila tha tabse hum ache dost hein. Ek baat common hein hum dono mein"

"Kya???"

"Hum dono apne behnon se bahut pyaar karte hein"

Khushi already knew that. She had seen Arnav's love for Anjali and Khushal's love for her was no less.

"vaise to Anjaliji ke saath bahut bhura hua tha, lekin ab sab theek ho gaya hein. Unke pehle pathi ne unhe dokha diya. Lekin ab unki doosri shaadi ho rahi hein aur voh bhi hamare hi ek dost Arjun ke saath. Aur ASR chaahtha hein ki mein unke dress design karu. Par mein iss vaqt bahut busy hein aur use mana bhi nahi kar sakta. Kya karu??"

"Bhai mein Anjaliji ke liye lehnga design karungi"

"KYA???" both Riana and Khushal asked simultaneously.

Now thats it .. Please do leave your opinions. It helps a lot.

I will try to update soon and i really love to read your comments.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
awesome i can't wait what happens when arnav finds out that khushi has designed the dress
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
ahh coutha she caught red handily
nice update continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
nice update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
beautiful update
do cont soon
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
tht is soo awesome i love your chapter 1 , CS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely FF. Great concept!

Keep going. Loved this part..
Thanks! 😃

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