ArHi SS: Free *Complete* - Page 8

thanks for the shout out really sweet of you. muah!!

read parts 1 and 2 together... heart-wrenchingly sad, but arnav made the right decision to set khushi free... nice of you to leave us with the hope that they would meet somewhere in happier circumstances!

oh boy! what should i say... you are soo good... you brought tears to my eyes...

You have made me cry... wow! first time in a long while actually...

And first time I am reading something that's so poignant... please update soon but don't let Khushi die please... and what is this about Arnav waiting to join her? He should kill Shyam, set his Di free ASAP and join her like Heer-Ranjha story... grrr!

Sorry 😃 that's just me venting my emotions!! Excellent writing!

Originally posted by: khushi_ka_arnav

You have made me cry... wow! first time in a long while actually...

And first time I am reading something that's so poignant... please update soon but don't let Khushi die please... and what is this about Arnav waiting to join her? He should kill Shyam, set his Di free ASAP and join her like Heer-Ranjha story... grrr!

Sorry 😃 that's just me venting my emotions!! Excellent writing!

Arnav didn't mean that he'd kill himself , notice the in time and not soon. Yeah, maybe not clear enough. And so many people are asking me to not let khushi die, I wish I could, but I don't think the story would be what it is without that. How about this? I'll try to write a light hearted piece soon😊

Damn that was intense with a capital I...holy hell...this OS was amazing...u r a good writer...

beautiful piece...I do not like people who give up that easy(talking about khushi) but the 2nd part was very touching and emotional and made me comment. Have seen the pain in someone close to me who had to let go their beloved near one like Arnav let go Khushi.

i've just got no more words to describe this

Originally posted by: DarkDove

Again... this was sooo beautiful dear one!!!

The emotions, the feelings, the thoughts, the pain, the regret, the pure love and realization!

It was beautiful to read! And you write so mesmerizingly that i lose myself in it! Please write more?? I hope i dont sound demanding, but this os has left me with teary eyes, a lump in my throat and still a smile, a smile because of your writing!

I loved it!!!!

No, you don't sound demanding at all. I'll write more once I get inspired, but right now I am just pissed at everyone, especially Arnav and Khushi, I wanna bang their head's together or something😆 I am glad I made you smile!