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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

hauntingly beautiful...
this OS is better with a sad ending... a happy ending wud have spoiled the raw beauty that u managed to evoke thru spectacular portrayal of each character's emotions...
K's helplessness and finally giving up the will to live and fight...
A's regret, guilt, feeling of anguish and loss, yet knowing its too late to redeem...and finally that beautiful confession before setting her free...😭

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: s0n00smi
please send me tissue boxes😆😆
nice...please write more...

Here u go. Waise...dupatte nahi hain kya? KKG style...😆

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

I cried ..am crying... you are brilliant...what the cv's could not do you did... the intensity the desperation the love that helplessness... wow... i am so in awe before you... till your next os... take care..

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ddee1001

@ddee1001

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

wow,that was heart wrenching!!i had tears in my eyes!!beautiful piece!!!!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Damn I Hate you! You made me cry!

You second part touched me and sometimes when I see Arnav treating Khushi so horribly I used to wish something like this would happen and Arnav would regret himself his whole life. You showed me what I actually imagine sometimes. Thanks!! Loved it!

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ardis

@Mirza1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

omg. it was soo sad 😭. really well written. loved it. thanks for the pm :)

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

this was too heart wrenching .. i would have indulged my tears if i was not in office 😭

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Again... this was sooo beautiful dear one!!!

The emotions, the feelings, the thoughts, the pain, the regret, the pure love and realization!

It was beautiful to read! And you write so mesmerizingly that i lose myself in it! Please write more?? I hope i dont sound demanding, but this os has left me with teary eyes, a lump in my throat and still a smile, a smile because of your writing!

I loved it!!!!